SS : Khamosh Zindagi Part 9 @ pg 27; 16 Feb 13 - Page 9

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t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
maan also lost someone close to him
waiting for their meeting
-Gemini- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
read all the 7 parts now ,loved the concept 😊
from whom did Adi get the call ,who has Maan lost ,is Pari his sister or daughter 😕
waiting for the next update .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
don't u think it way too confusing ...but interesting.

Btw Hi ...kaise ho???
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: -dia-

don't u think it way too confusing ...but interesting.


Btw Hi ...kaise ho???



confusing...how??? just some people r hidden...not some..only one./..

I am good...how r u?? long time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Awesome, nice parts
loved them
now update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Part 8:



A dream to make her happy.




A dream to her smile.




A dream to love her.




A dream is all what he has now. A dream he can fulfill only when he is far away from her.


...




They say each morning brings a new hope. It is true for her also.




Her first step to fulfill his dream. Her first step to reach the heights that he wanted.




"Good morning Geet," Adi said when she entered the living room where he was reading the newspaper.




"Good morning bhaiya," Geet replied with a smile on her face.




"So, tell me, all ready for your first day at work?" Adi questioned.




"As ready as the morning sun." Geet replied.




"Good then. Now come on, you two have your breakfast and then you can leave for your work," Meera said while setting the table for breakfast.




"Meera, you could have called me. I would have helped you with all." Geet said looking at Meera.




"Don't worry Geet. It is nothing. From tomorrow I will wake you up. Okay." Meera replied.




"Definitely okay." Geet said.




They all moved towards the breakfast table and enjoyed their morning time together.




"Geet, you go get ready, I will drop you." Adi said while going to his room, "and Meera you too."




"Bhai, you take Geet with you. I will go a little late today," Meera replied.




"But why don't you come with us. I mean, is my office in a different direction than yours?" Geet asked her.




"No, Geet. Nothing like that. Actually I have to complete some samples. I will finish them at home and then head towards work." Meera replied with a smile.




"Okay then. Take care. Geet, come on, we will leave in 15 minutes. I don't want you to be late on your first day." Adi told her.




Geet then went away to her room after helping Meera with the dishes.




The journey to her destination was only 30 minutes away. But for her from here onwards her journey started.




"Geet, Welcome on-board." Mr. Brown said after she sighed her contract papers.




"Thank you Sir." Geet replied.




"Oh please. Don't call me Sir. We have a policy for addressing everyone by their first name. So I am Joshua for you." He said while greeting her.




"As you say Sir, I mean Joshua."




"That is better. Now that you have understood everything and have gone through the papers, I don't think anything is left."




"Yes. I will be co-ordinating with the construction company here and with you there. And will be handling the initial business here."




"See, I always say, women are smart. You need to tell them only once and they understand at once. Come now, we will head towards the site. There you can meet Mr. Khurana."




"Mr. Khurana?" Geet asked.




"Oh, he is the head of Khurana Constructions, the company who will be building our office. Our head knows him very well, and he will be helping us in our initial contracts and networking."




"Oh, I understand. Let's leave then."




They left towards the construction site discussing the project all the way.




"There he is. Right on time." Joshua said while pointing towards a man whose back was facing them.




"Come on Geet. Let me introduce you to him."




He led the way while Geet followed him.




He heard someone calling him. And as he turned he realized that his client is here.




"Hello Mr. Brown. How are you today." Maan asked while greeting him with a handshake.




"Very well Mr. Khurana. Hope we did not make you wait too long?"




"Not at all Mr. Brown. In fact I came here a minute back only. So tell me you wanted me to meet the person who will be handling the project here."




"Oh yes, Ms. Handa." He turned to look at her but she was not there.




She was away from them helping a kid who had fallen while playing. She looked at the direction where some one was calling her name, only to be captured by the brown iris that were looking at her intensely.


...



"Finally, you have met your destiny." He said to himself looking at her from far.


next --
Part 9 -- Page 27

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Jyoti


Edited by Tyro - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Yaaayyy!!! Me first me first 🥳
Beautiful update.. loved it all.. loved the bonding between Geet, Adi and Meera 😊
The last line just left me mesmerised.. "Finally you have met your destiny" 😍
Beautiful!! Thanks for such an awesome update 🤗
Edited by x_Mishti_x - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
am waiting to know who exactly is maan,,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting for more😆

look who is saying this😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti


waiting for more😆

look who is saying this😆



completely agree with this line...😆

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