dosti & dil updat on pg 5

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi friends its agin puja😊,i know i had not even completed 10 ch of bachain dil😛 and i again came to et ur head 😉😛 but wht to do i had to write it bc its a gift from me to my special frind as without her help i wasent able to write nor u all was going to be pm😊

yes u all get it right its myapari 😊

thanku reshu 😊😳

warining ; who all think this ss is only on maneet then sorry this ss is based on frindship & love

character sketch

sorry this time no character sketch is their i will only say the name of main character

Geet

maan

reshma

chapter-1

a girl was sitting alone seeing in the deep ocean she was so lost that she not even notice that some was sitting beside her and trying to talk to her finely not getting any responce from the girl she shouted

some one - hiii i am reshma

finely the girl turn to look at reshma,she was crying and seeing this reshma fell like her sister was crying so she puld her hand and remove the tire from giris eyes and said

reshma - y r u crying,dont cry wht happen did u got heart

girl - yes , but no one can heel it

reshma - why r u teleing like this i wil help u, u r like my sister,wht ur name

girl - Geet

reshma - so geet mughsa dosti karo gi

geet - look in the eyes of the girl and she felt like home

reshma - kya hua,ok i under stand u r thinking that in a city like bombay no one help other til they get any thing in return u r right i am having a profit in helping u

geet look at reshma like she dont belive that reshma is helping her bc she had a profit

reshma - the profit which i will get is ...

author note - ok guys do tel me how was it and should i continu😊

ps-if u like it then do press like button and give long long comment😊

Edited by anvashakhurana - 13 years ago

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dona86
nice

thanks😊

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Reshu

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey thanx!!!!!!

i feel honoured!!!!!!!!!!!

hmm interesting ll be waiting for more updates!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Maaneet4eve

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome... waiting for the next update...

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sapna sharma

@kamiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

simply awesome

loved it

thanks for the pm dear

update soon

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 13 years ago

awsomeee
nice concept
plzzz continue😊

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puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi frinds thanks for liking and comment😃 a special thanks to mayapari😊

the special think which i wil get is a frind like u who wil think for me before her and belive me in bombay its realy difficult

listining this geet felt like her babaji had send her for her help but thein i also felt like this for him but he left me

see i dont neet ur help plz live me alone

why u dont need my help ok if u dont want help then let us be frind then it will not call as help but it will be our huk like ranber told in his song sada hak atha rakh

as geet turn and look at reshma with her big eye she became shut

ok ok dont look like that yar nanhi si jan dar jaiagi ok i know its not joking time so let go to home

geet look at her as if what home r u talking about

ara mara ghar bc jis thara sa tum apana smsn laka bathi ho mugha nahi lagta tum ya ha pa kisi ko jan ti ho

listin ma tuma ra ghar nahi ja sak ti

ok mai samaj gai ak min

and she stank up taking her cell out she talk with some one ahd few min after she came hold geet hand ahd drag her in her car and told her driver to bring the bags of geet and sat in the car

as the car stop in frunt of a house geet came out of her shok she was stunt when reshma drag her in car and cane out as she shaw the car had stop in frount of a house

reshma what r u doing i was not telling u any thing so u will take advantage how dare u bring me with u

ho gaya so andar chala

u think this is funny

no i think this is frind ship and plz can u come in side i am filling hungry plz

tum pagal ho

i know

and reshma drag geet into the house

so this is my frinds house but as she is not here u can stay so know go get change i will order pizza

as geet was going to say some thing reshma stop her and push in the room

after half an hour geet came out and sat beside reshma who was opening the pack of pizza

as she opend and pass to geet

geet ran from their towards room