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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
nice...

seems like time for them to meet...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!so maan s going to meet geet's family..
pumpkin!!nice name!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely one ...
looking forward to know the next...
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awesome update...
loved it..
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Part 9

At 8:00 a.m Maan busy in getting ready for Handa haveli. He took shower and got call from Prem.

Prem: Good Morning Sir

Maan: Good Morning Prem' bolo wats news?

Prem: Sir Apka kaam hogaya hay . all arrangements are done.. But Sir'.

Maan: Now wat'..

Prem: Sir we need to settle the legal notice which is pre-planned by Mr Malhotra'

Maan: haan uski tum fiker maat kro.. have an idea'

Prem: Ok Sir'

Maan: but must keep an eye on all his plans.. and inform me tyme to tyme. I will handle dis situation and will show MAAN SINGH KHURANA and his contacts.. MAAN Ko Dhokka dia and usk khilaf Sazish bohaat pehngi parey gi..

Prem : yes Sir all things are going just according to ur orders.

Maan: Good'..

Prem: Ok Sir ''..have a Nice Day

Maan: Bye

Maan hurriedly check himself in mirror and check the address which DADI has emailed'. He move topwards his car


Maan: Driver I will drive myself.. Tum jaoo' ar pata hay na mera koi puchey to kya batana hay..

Driver: Gee Sahab Ap fiker hee na karein.. apka namak khayya hay..

Maan: Good '.. Ye loo tumhara Inaam'. Aisy hee kaam krogy to aur milley ga' jaoo mazzey akroo.

Driver: Mehrbani Sir G'


Maan: Umm

He start his car and move towards Geet house.

''''''''

Geet ' Ma mein College jar hee hon'

Ranu: ary rukooo' Sunoo to sahi' aj guest arahey hein' aj chutthi kar leitii

Geet: maa plsss mujhy pata hay in guests ka.. I hate dis' ab apko pata to ha..

Mohindar: Tujhy ik baar baat samagh nhee atttiii' wasy bhi college ja kr konsa tujhy parhai karney hoti hay'


Geet: Dad pls' my exams are near and I have to complete my work.. Assignment submit karwani hein..

Mohindar: Tu ar teri assignment jhoot mat bol.. bola na nhee jaye gi aaj..


Geet: MAAA..

Ranu: Sahi to keh rahey hein' aj chutthi karley.. baas guest atty hongy,.

Geet: *ap dono nahee manogy naa.. mein abhi buddy ko bulati hon*

DAAARRRGGGEEE'. DAARGEEE dekho MA PAPA G mujhy college nhee bhejty.. Mujhy Gawaar banana chahty hein.. Daaarrrgeee Jaldi baher aooo..

Ranu and Mohindar: GEEETTT

Geet: Daarrrggeee bacchaaooo

Dargee: Ohh Kya hogaa.. Geet kun shor macha rahee hay'

Geet: Dargee Dekho na Ma Papa G are not allowing me for college. U know my exams are near and that project which u helped me.. its last date of submission' and they are stopping em just coz of some old idiot relative' aarrghhh ye relatives hoty kis leye hein'

Dargee: Ohh Kun nahee janay dey rahey iskooo'. Kurii key exams zaida important hein' kitni mehnat isny ki hay..

Ranu: But Dargee aj Savitri G ka Pota Canada sy araha hay'

Dargee: Tu fr ' Koi gull nahe egeet will meet him in evening.. janay dey

Mohindar: Papa G ye nalayak sham taq kab aye gii'


Geet: *pouted* Dargee dekho DAD mjhy Nalayak bol rahey hein'

Dargee: Ohh khotty.. Ye tujhy kahan sy Nalayak lagtii hay' hamesha class m first atti hay itny achay marks letii hay' janay dey ' Ja Geet tu college ja.. tujhy dair ho rhaee hay..


Geet: yeaahhh Boy friend ur my best Champ' Muaahhh ' Bye byee'

Ranu: Paar Papa G'. ' MAAN'.

Dargee: Rehny dy pehly khudh to dekh ley..

Geet went outside widout hearing MAAN name and Give hi 5 to Pinky who is waiting for her outside.. Hey Geetu all done *pinky*

Geet start her car and narrating whole incident to pinky'

Geet: Dargee is best' warna papa Ge to sab mood kharab kardya' and I tell u'

Pinky: Geet samney deekhhh

SSSCCCRRREEESHHH ''Geet car hit with Maan's car'A crowd gathered around them..Geet after some time get herself out and knock at Maan's car window..

Geet: oyee Baher Nikal'. Dekh nahee shaktaa'

Maan: Oohh m sorry I was buys on call and didn't notice.. m sorry..

Geet: wat sorry'. U looser' Car challani nhee atti to car lety kun ho' ar kaisy phsyco girl friend hay usko pata nhee driving rules' tum driving krty call sunn rhey thy'

Maan: Excuse me' I was not talking wid my Gf..

Geet: Oh to wife hogi'. Whatever' but u slave of ur woman why u didn't check.. kitna nuksaan kardya' ab isko pay tumhara baap karey ga..


Maan: Dekheye aap Baap pr maat jaieyee..

Pinky: chor na Geet'. He is so handsome' tu kun baat bigar rahee hy.

Geet: Tu dur huth' Moti' and u '

Maan: dekhiye I said m sorry' I m in hurry plss dekhyn sab dekh rahye hein and apka nuksaan itna nahee hua jitna mera hua hay.. so plss take dis 5000 and I hope dis would be enough for u.


Geet: Ohh helllooo '''. Bhikari samgha hay kyaa'..

Maan: fr app chahti kya hein''
Geet: hmmm mein'''. Aaa'. Wooo''. Haan u should take my car to mechanic and I will drive ur car.. m already late for college..* ajka din hee kharab hay *self talk*

Maan: waat liken im paying u for dis.. and if u r worried about ur collge then why ur wasting ur tyme here.. and plss don't say ur late coz of me'

Geet: OMG' attitude dekho salay kaa..

Maan: EXCUSE ME'.

Geet: EXCUSED huh' dekho tum'''

Pinky: Uffh kya kr rhee hy' Ley lein na 5000 party kreingy' ar jaldi chal late ho raha hay.. tery dad agye to masla hojayen gaa..

Geet: hmmm okkk Just u seems sober and peaceful person so m leaving u.. warna'. But I will take dis 5000' as ur apology..

Maan: Thanks Miss'..

Geet: HITLER *GLARE LOOKS*

Maan: Nice Name '. Btw ab apka ghussa thanda hogya naa so could u pls tell me about this address.. m new in dis city and trying to find it from last couple of hours.. so plss..

Geet took address '.

*OO TERI ITS MY ADDRESS KAHIN YE MA KA WOHI KHAROOS RELATIVE TO NHEE' SHAQAL SY to Theek thak ha* ' mind interrupt.. *GEET NO NEED TO TELL HIM.. SHAQAL PAAR MAAT JAA' HE IS NOT DESI.. NIOT UR TYPES*.

MAAN : excuse me' do u know about dis address'. If not then its ok MISS'.

Geet: haan bata rahee hon' Itni jaldi kya hay'. Take it back and den from dere *POINTED* right and then left' and den u will find a board ' Go and stand in front of dat board with ur back on road and when u look upwards dere u will saw Bakery.. haayee us bakery k cookies yummiest '

MAAn look Geet interesting... and smile crept on her lips


Geet then u will go right again and dere is ur destination'

Maan: Oh Thanks so much.

Geet: *SMIRK* GOOD LUCK

MAAN: Btw I m'..

Pinky: chal naa Geet we are late''''

Geet: haan haan chal'. She start her car and drove pass Maan'

Maan: Larki thi ya Bomb' Saar Pheri Batameez 'OH GOD'. BAACH GAYAA'

Maan drove his car and did according to Geet instructions.. But fail to find the address' he stop his car after an hour and went outside of his car'.


Maan: ary ye to wohi jaga hay jahan sy mein challa thaa.. mein wapas kaisy agaya'

Maan stop a passerby '

Maan: Ary Bhai Sahab Tell me dis address'

Passerby: Janab ap isi address par to kharay hein' .. ye agey Handa Haveli hee hay..

Maan: Waaattt but uss larki ney to kaha thaa key'''

Passerby: hahahahaa

Maan: Thanks Hope dis tym m on right track..he drove his car to HAVELI parking area and check himself last time..



MAAN: wat a welcome MAAN'. Uffhhh' and uss larki ko to mein dekh longa.. Batameez.

...

Precap: Maan at Geet House 😳

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Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
itne dino k baad again 1st 🤪 🤪 🤪
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

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AWESOME UPDATE WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part9
awesme update
precap toh mast hai
cnt sn
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update.maan aur geet ki first meet ko kamal ki thi.geet was a real hitler n bechara maan ghoom phir ke usi jagah pauch gaya.

what nxt ab kya hoga jab geet man se ghar me milegi.
darji is sooo cute.
waiting for nxt update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!geet ne maan ko ullu banayi..
That was hilarious...ab revenge toh banthi hain..rt?

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