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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
superb update...!
continue soon
thankx for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
maan going to India...nice...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Friends hope ur fine and remember me. Yes m the writer of dis FF 😆 anyways its just a note to all my readers as m getting pm's on fb and IF regarding my updates . Friends m extremely busy wid my studies. this whole month and now coming month just keep me busy wid so much work loads,studies and family deaths so m extremly sorry as i couldn't update this FF before 20th June. Yes buddies u read it write 🤢 my exams are near. it would be from 4th June to 20th June. i tried to update so many tymes but at de end i can't update dem. plss forgive me i will be back wid surprises for sure. U ppl know A free and happy mind could create updates just according to ur wills and demands so have patience and give me some time. 😳

AT the end need ur prayers not ur chappals for laziness or taking break 😉

LOVE ALWAYS 🤗
SEE YA Fellows ❤️
Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
hey dear
thanks for the note
all the best for your exams
take care

will be waiting for your update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ALL THE BEST FOR XMA 👍🏼


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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
thanx for the note
n all the best for ur exam...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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all the best for u xams dear...
do well😊
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all the best for ur exams...
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Part 8

Maan: but Daadi ma m going for office work.

Daadi: I know but in de evening or as u get free u can visit their house.

They are so nice and m sure u would feel comfortable. Afterall ur going

after years. Ur Uncle was Federal Judge. If u faced some issues he

would be very helpful.

MAAN: ohh Thanks Daadi u really made my work much easy.

Daadi: but promise me u would to meet dem as family too not wid office

work. Beta they are only family we have in India and we should meet with our family often.

Maan: Promise Daadi u don't need to worry.

Tring Tring Maan phone ring.

Maan: Ok daadi Office sy call.. Excuse me.. m going into my room for

packing my stuff.

Daadi: Ok dear.. I will send Nakul in ur room if u need any help den ask

him.

Maan: ok Daadi

Maan went into his room and start packing his stuff with non-stop calls

from office.

''''''''''''

Tring tring

Tring Tring

Arryyy Koi Hay' Kabsy Kalmosha Phona baja jar aha hay.. koi uthataa hee nahee'Ooo Preetooo'.. Ary Kaka' kithy gaye sabk sab'(anybody alive' Dis stupid phone ringing and no one is here)

Ranu: Helloo G

Daadi: Namastay G' M Savitri Devi from Canada.. Do u remember ?

Ranu: Ohh Gee kaisii Gallaa karydy hoo. Ya ya I know' Kaisi ho Tussi.. Pairri Peinaa

Daadi: Geeti rahiey (blessings)

Ranu: G How ru Beeji .. How u call today.. Its months u talked..

Daadi: I know Ranu Puttar . m sorry I was not well and life in Canada is really busy. I always miss my home town, my family and that tyme we were together.

Ranu: Sahi Baat hay G.. we miss all gee. Hows Samrat and Pumpkin.

Daadi: hahahaha u still remember ''''''.. they are fine.. Pumpkin Is now a business tycoon now. Khurana Construction is at its best due to MAAN hard work and determination. Saach puchey to YASH would be soo happy to see his son sincerity and determination towards his business.

Ranu: gee jo kahoo.. Mery leye to Oo Pumpkin hay.. Gollu Moollu saa.

Daadi: Ab wo Gollu Mollo sy nahe rahye.. Ik dam Smart and dashing hogaye hein.. u would be happy to know ur pumpkin is coming to India for business trip.

Ranu: haayee saachi' that's wonderful news Beeji. ' I m dying to see my Pumpkin ' Hun kfi wada hogya hogaa naa.. Apny bari achi news di hay.. Mein abhi unhein batatii hoon.. ar driver ko bhejh kar Maan ko airpost leiny jayngy.

Daadi: ary nahe nahee.. He is on business trip and will stay in hotel. He can't stay at some relative house. U know ajkal k bachay humhri kahan sunty hein..

Ranu: ohh I can understand but he has to visit our house.. apna ghar hay..

Daadi: don't worry he will stay at ur house.. How is Shukbir G?? Mera Namstay Bolna.. I think Maan need his help at some legal issues. So he has to visit ur house.

Ranu: Thank U beeji mein abhee ja kr Dargee ko sab batati hoon. He would be glad to know. Afterall we would see Pumpkin after ages.

Daadi: Ok We will then talk. Sab ko Namsty kahey gaa.

Ranu cuts call and look at BABA G..Ranu: Haye Wahey Guru Is din ka kabsy mujhy intezaar thaa.. Baas Ik baar Maan ajaye fr sab theek hojayen ga.. Mein abhee Dargee ko sab batatii hoon. (self talk)

Maan flight landed at Mumbai Airport.. he took his luggage and move outside of airport where his private Jet is waiting with body guards around.

Prem: Welcome Sir.

Maan: ummm ' so wats the schedule today??

Prem: Sir all are arranged according to u and ur meeting wid Mr Rathod will be at 10:00.

Maan: hmm Ok ...

Maan reached Office and became busy in meetings . At noon he came out of his cabin and move towards his hotel and took shower and dress in casuals.

Daadi call' Maan beta where are u? I was waiting for ur call.

Maan: sorry daadi I reached safely and just back from office.

Daadi: Ok Beta but don't forget ur promise beta..

Maan: Ya Daadi Don';t worry will met Uncle in morning.

Daadi: ok Beta have ur dinner?

Maan:ya Daadi I ordered.. U take ur medicine and remember I love u so take cares.

Daadi: Love u too beta.

They talked for a while and then Maan doze off as he was tired..

''''''''''''''

precap: wat a welcome MAAn uffh 😆


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Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
awesum update
luved it
ohh so maan is goin to cm to geet's place
nyccc
was waiting for this
ab aayega maza
pumpkin lol
maan n pumpkin
that is hilarious
ufff oo maan is such a workaholic
plane land hua aur mahashaye chale office
man the guy has energy lol
anywayz update soon
waiting eagerly

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