MG(FF)--REVENGEFUL MARRIAGE THREAD 1 - Page 51

Originally posted by: punam2712

MAAN IS CARING FOR FOR HER NEEDS AND HER RESPECT

HE COULD SEE THE LONGING IN HER FACE TO HAVE GOL GAPPAS AND GOT HER TO EAT THEM

AND HE TOLD SASHA OFF

HE LIKED THE BUBBLY YOUNG CARE FREE GEET WHO WAS WITH PINKY

DO CONTINUE IT SOME MORE

IT CANT TOO SOON

LET MAAN COME CLOSER TO HER

Originally posted by: change12

will try to give the longer comments but i'm not too good in wording out the thoughts,though i'll try

As for the story I think you can reveal the past in few coming parts i don't want this to be a ff but mini ff sounds good.

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome upadte
yes change it to FF di

Originally posted by: icy_magma

Awesome update...
Geet is still scared of maan but has fully adjusted to her new sasural...even man is getting attracted towards her...
Sasha toh sasha rahegi...uska kuch nahi hoga...
I am loving the progress of the story...

As for your query...I would recommend ki turn it in ff...the story has lot of potential...abhi tak maan and geet are just tiniest bit attracted to each other but they are not aware of thier feelings...from the story I can feel ki geet has few baggages from her past...she is still afraid of maan but yet somewhere trusts him too...
Your characterisation of maan shows him as an ruthless person...he has not yet started to think about geet as his wife...ofcourse he feels somewhat guilty of what he did but still names to squash that feeling quickly...
Thier relation needs time to grow...geet needs to overcome her past and maan needs to accept geet fully as his wife emotionally...
So my vote goes to turn it to ff...

Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

love to their bond

its really wowww to see sasha face

ha ha haaa

maaja aa gaya yaar

kya dil hai maan ka

and respact for geet in his move

is just something that left me like wowww

Originally posted by: mandymore

Superlike as stupid like nt wrkng 😡
luvly prt...geet n we got to see a diff side of maan...

I personally want the story shld build up in few more prts then only reveal geet past...
would love to read more prts of this...rest is upto u...
thnxs 4 pm...

Originally posted by: leverne

really nice part...maan is getting lil sweeter with her now...

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

awww amazing dear..i really loved it..hayee maan taking care of geet...cant wait for next part

Originally posted by: radha.nandini

do it as u wish dear i mean if u feel its necessary to reveal in the next part do it otherwise the 2nd option ok with anyone wanna know the reaction of maan's family update soon

Originally posted by: shalinisaran89

awesome upd...

lov it...