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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

zee meri jaan

u mentioned everything
what about the mysterious phone call😲
did u forget about it😆


hayyye abi!!
luv u 🤗
the phone call was romeo 😆

but if u paid attention to that scene there was something mysterious.

omg this update is getting way too long...i will focus on the mysteriousness...and the twist in the next update.


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK


hayyye abi!!
luv u 🤗
the phone call was romeo 😆

but if u paid attention to that scene there was something mysterious.

omg this update is getting way too long...i will focus on the mysteriousness...and the twist in the next update.



k do as u feel dear
yaar eagerly waiting for the vamp to enter
the dev ans sameera brother and sister😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
so zee now a days what r u watching leaving PV r u watching MB😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079


k do as u feel dear
yaar eagerly waiting for the vamp to enter
the dev ans sameera brother and sister😡


i ain't gonna say anything 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

so zee now a days what r u watching leaving PV r u watching MB😆


i am watching both 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part: 62

HOt and Happening Bhaabi

recap:

Just when Geet was going to say something, Vicky butts in saying, " You just came at the right time. Here comes the best part".

Meera turns the lights real dim and before they knew it, Vicky wasn't near them anymore but next to Meera on the stage.
" babaji save me" Geet mutters.

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" Hello everyone. Thank you for being a part of my brother's happiness. I hope you aren't getting bored. If you are then your naughty Vicky that you all love and adore is here" he says winking and everyone woots and claps cheering him on.
Even Maan was smiling and cheering Vicky on, except for Geet who put on a weak smile when really she was freaking out inside herself wondering what her dear devar had planned for her tonight.
"Meri Hot and Happening Bhaabi why are you looking so nervous", he says giving an innocent looking towards her and batting his eyes.
"Maan bhai brought you the ring, but I will bring the fireworks to your engagement " toward her before smirking and the lights dim.
Everybody's attention goes towards Geet and she nodes saying everything is fine.
Maan whispers, " sweetheart if he embarrasses you I will break his legs now relax" he says chuckling and entwining his fingers with hers.
Suddenly the white spot light falls on Vicky who was dressed as Maan and was sitting in a desk going through a business file with that intense look between his brows. Vicky was being Vicky and he made sure he exaggerated every movement and expression, everybody couldn't help but laugh.
Even Geet let out a chuckle, but shut up quickly seeing Maan turn his glaring eyes toward her.
Vicky all of a sudden throws the file at the wall and screams, " What is this rubbish! I don't pay you to be looking at me all day. Go have this fixed in 1 hour or else place your resignation letter on my desk samjhe tum!"
"Sorry Mr.Khurana I will do it right away" the poor employee says nervously trembling in fright as he left to get the work done.
Meera narrating: His name is Maan Singh Khurana, a man of perfection and his life was his work. Everything and everyone feared him and would rather put their life at stake then mess with the name known as Maan Singh Khurana.
Geet whispers, " except for me" running her hand up his thigh, using the darkness opportunity to tease Maan even more.
Maan gasps as the sudden rush of sensations ran through him. He grabs Geet's wrist and pins it behind her whispering, " tease all you want sweetheart, but I will get my revenge".
Geet's eyes enlarge as if saying Oh shit what side of the Great Maan singh khurana did I just unleash.
"I thought you said you didn't fear me" he lightly chuckles lightly brushing his lips near his ear making her shudder then looks straight at Vicky's performance before anybody could notice.
Vicky starts to walk out of the office exaggerating Maan's signature walk with attitude and the women employees swooning over him.
Employee #1: DHAK DHAK. Gosh he is so hot when he is angry ufff!
Maan could feel the atmosphere getting hotter for some reason.
Employee #2: He has a killer and sexy attitude and I would kill just to be with him.
Employee #3: Don't waste your time he hates the sight of woman! I am just thankful I am working here and can get to drool over him hayye.
That's when Romeo and some other guys start wooting and whistling for Maan being so lucky to have all these girls over him.
One look from Geet and they all shut up, that's when Maan noticed why he felt the atmosphere getting hotter. It was his lovely sherni burning in anger and jealousy.
"I smell something burning" Maan whispers teasing Geet.
Geet punches him lightly and Maan loving gives her a side hug.
Meera narrating: He is the hottest eligible bachelor of India. Girls completely fida over him, but it was he who wouldn't give them a second look.
The lights dim for a few seconds and the scene shifts to an actor playing Daadi.
Daadi: Maan beta my eyes yearn to see my grandchildren. When will you get married beta?
" I will never get married Daadi and you know that very well. Ask Vicky where your grandchildren are" Vicky says walking away without giving a second glance.
Meera narrating: He is a man who would get jolted just hearing the name of marriage. So what do you think happens to this man with such a big name, power, attitude, and control over his life once he bumps into the Hot and Happening Geet Handa ??? It's hard to imagine someone could sneak their way into Mr. Maan Singh Khurana's heart, so then how was Geet Handa able to do it??
Geet whispers, " I showed him his place hain na" she says winking at Maan.
"You showed him your place in his heart" Maan huskily retorts back running his long fingers up her back, Geet closing her eyes and surrendering to the feel of his touch as her heartbeat exhilarated with speed.
Suddenly the lights turn off and the spotlight falls on to a girl sitting in the middle of the crowd of guests who were standing.
Vicky and Meera walk down the stage and walk toward Maan and Geet, while the spot light still remained on a woman in pink whose face was covered with her dupatta.
Vicky whispers slowly for only Maan and Geet to hear, " Ab maaza ayega meri hot and happening baabi" giving her a naughty smirk.
" oh and bhai I know u want to kill me, but I am going to hit two birds with one stone. Since I won the bet against my dear bhaabi I get to do whatever I want and I will also give you a treat to make up for making fun of you" he says giving the signal with his eyes to look over to the woman under the spot light.
The woman still had the dupatta over her face and starts to sing:
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"hum ishaaron se jaan le le toh aankhon ka woh kaam hai" slowly giving a salaam with her hand toward Maan.
"mmm she is signling u bhai" he says with a huge grin on his face and leaves before Geet kills him.
Geet eyes pop out in anger, "Oh no she didn't" she hisses under her breath.


"jisako kadamon mein hum jagah de usaka aaashiq naam hai" she sings swerving her hands and body against the floor.
Vicky: Wah Wah!

"najaron ki yeh aabaru hai waar khaali jaata nahi" she sings aiming her hands and aim at Maan.

"oh now she is dead" Geet snarls and Maan couldn't help but laugh finding Geet's expressions and threats very amusing.
"hum bala se kam nahi jo chaahe hamein woh aajmaa le" she sings standing up throwing the dupatta off.
"Wah Geet Wah!!!" Vicky yells out.
"Oh no 'no no no . This can't be happening" Geet gasps muttering to herself as shock ran through her veins.
"ufff sweet heart you are looking HOT" Maan says gaping at the hot beauty playing Geet.
"Haww" Geet gasps and her mouth makes an "O" shape before she could give Vicky a piece of her mind he walks away.
She starts to shake her hips and both Vicky and Romeo couldn't help but go towards her! So even if she was playing Geet, they couldn't help but go and flirt with her.
"mukhade pe tere haale jaisi baaliyaan happening
o tune aankhon mein jo surama laga liya happening"
Both Vicky and Romeo sing dancing around her.

"jahaaan se hum nikalate hain, wahaan mausam badalate hain
hawaayein chumkar jaayein, sitaarein saath chalate hain" she sings signaling Maan with her finger to come to her.
Vicky and Romeo come toward Maan in order to convince him to go dance with her. He shakes his head for a "no" especially seeing his lovely sherni fuming right next to him. But that's when an idea shrikes him for getting his revenge.
" My hot and happening Bhaabi won't you allow Maan bhai to dance with you" he says naughtily and then both Romeo and him run back toward Preity Zinta before Geet came after them.


"hamako karane de gulaami, dil mein apane rehane de
roj karate hai salaami abb toh apana kehane de"
Romeo and Vicky sing as they go back dancing around her.
"Happening! Your happening, happening"
Maan gives a crooked smile and starts his plan.
"I can't believe these two. They should be ashamed of themselves. But what I can't believe is Meera. Look at her she is enjoying herself" Maan innocently says.
Geet looks over to Meera and was shocked to see her wooting and clapping. She decides to go to her.
Meera looking at her naughty boyfriend flirting with Preity Zinta well she couldn't hide that she did feel a little jealous, but also couldn't help herself from laughing. Vicky's expressions was real funny and amusing, and she also knew that he was exaggerating a bit for his lovely hot and happening Bhaabi. I mean she fell for his naughtiness side first back in college and so she didn't mind it that much at all, and was in fact enjoying herself.
Geet sees Meera enjoying herself , " Not you too" in utter disbelief.
" oh come on Geet. Lighten up. That's you up there who is happening" she says winking at her.
"and we all know that you dance just like that at the beach party remember" meera says giggling.
Geet: Chup! At least it wasn't in front of guests and people we knew'I am murdering a lot of ppl tonight!
"and I think I know who your first target is" she says signaling Geet with her eyes to look at the dance floor.

Geet's mouth drops with the sight in front of her.
Preity Zinta had her dupatta around Maan's waist and they were dancing together as they encircled each other.
"hamaare husn ka charcha jamino aasmaan par hai
farishte bhi puchhate hai Geet tu kahaan par hai" she sings swirving along Maan's body.
"apane dil mein o Geet hamako mehmaan hone de
hum bhi tere hai deewaane hum pe ehsaan hone de" Maan sings twirling her in his arms.
"kabhi aana meri gali, mere gali kabhi aana" Preity sings as maan dips her down in his arms as Maan looks straight at Geet with a smirk and shamelessly winks at her.
Vicky and Romeo come and dance with Maan and Preity, but Maan was only staring at the Sherni who was storming her way down to the dance floor. All three guys escape, but Preity didn't notice and continues singing, "takabbur hum kisi ka bhi kahaan najaron mein rakhate hain"
"mohabbat ko tumhi jaise sada kadamon mein rakhate hain" Geet sings and dances showing her moves.
"hamse jamino aasmaan kahe tumasa haseen na koyi hai" Preity sings in response to Geet.
"tumase hawaao mein uda karein jinaki jameen na koyi hai" Geet sings as she twirls and continues to dance.
Romeo and Vicky all cheer and woot Geet on, but she makes that angry face towards them.

They quickly hold their ears and sing, "hamane bulaaya nahi, hamane sikhaaya nahi. apani khata nahi sachchi mein "
Geet sings, "tumane bulaaya use tumane milaaya use. dungi saja tumhe achchhi main" pointing her finger deadly towards them and holding them by their necks.
" aaj inaki hai shaamat bhul jaayenge sharaarat" Maan sings lovingly coming toward Geet.
"abb toh chalati hoon, khuda haafis main karati hoon" Preity sings leaving the dance floor.



Maan pulls Geet close and starts to dance with her singing, " Happening. Your Happening. So happening" and Geet just melted and started to dance with him.


Slowly everybody joined the dance floor with their respective partners grooving with the music and when the song is about to end Maan singles something towards to Vicky. Just when the music stopped Geet found herself in the air.
"Oh my God" Geet screams, but Maan and Vicky threw her up in the air once more and this time she stayed on both their shoulders as they both teased her some more.
Everybody laughed cheered and clapped even harder. Even Geet was laughing but freaking out at the same time.
They pull her down and Geet punches Vicky playfully, but then hugs him.

She lets go of Vicky and Maan pretends to come at her to throw her once more, but he comes and hugs her murmering "I Love you". Geet hugs him back and tries to wipe the happy tears that were rolling down her eyes now. She felt over the moon tonight. Never knew such happiness would come into her life.



Pre-cap:

Engagement after party😉 well a little one 😛

Truth or dare game...uhhh ohhh😲


I hoped u all enjoyed this part as much as i enjoyed writing it 😳

Please hit the like button and comment pleej pleej 😳


Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
happening indeed!!😉😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update zee
so ur back to ue teasing session
wow loved the way vicky showed everyone
the life history of maan
what was he how was he how was everyone fearing him
how dadi was continuously pestering him to marry
and what happened when a girl named geet handa entered in his life and chanjed a heartless man to a lover boy who cant keep his hands off her😳

loved the way u added the song here and loved the way geet was jealous that maan
actually dancing with prity zinta
then she jumped and started to sing and dance to control her jealously
but at the end maan manofy his geet hs solemate😳

hayee me loved the update very much loved the way vickey used meera in the play

zee continue to give updates like this and we will enjoy itto maximum

PS: sorry zee i know u r missing my big emotion wala post me too also missing 😭
but what could i do yaar my anti malware showed that it has some malware trace and removed it instantly me crying😭 but dont worry i would give this long comment without emotion now show me ur bada wala smile k😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...

loved the dancing n teasing...

continue soon...

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