'Two Broken hearts falling in love' THREAD 6

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

congrats on the new thread...

loved the naughty geet. continue soon.

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

hi zee
awesome update yaar once again
i would really like to thank u for extending thisa FF
and moreover completing it with both their pasts sorting out

now coming to the update
now everytime i read ur update i m at loss of words
i think what more should i tell to appriciate ur writing
but everytime i fail to do it as u always raise ur bar from ur previous update

so now i have decided that no words r enough to praise ur writing and imagining skills
so i would just give up as i m unable to frame more praising words to u

oh no i always divert from the update
k it was good to see geet in naughty mood
let MSK also face some of geet's naughtiness😳😳😳
and the things that geet was ding with maan was a hell of torcher
i waa asuming that he would just get her then and their only
but dadi and vickey were there

wow the use of ZSK (abi dancing) Mrs ZSK using Mr ZSK and Mrs ZSK in the update
love it fully

and at last how cutely maan was complainig to geet's babaji

so now time to meet Mr ZSK in next update

continue soon zee once again lovely update

one more thing i forgot to tell congrats for new thread
and take care of ur hand dont stress urself

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

congrats on the new thread Zee
loved the update
geet if u do such a naughty things to Maan and asking him Kuch kuch hota tu bechara kya bole ga, wo tu khud hi un ehsaaso main guhm tha, but loved it and that she was doing it front of Dadi and Vicky...
hmm let see what will geet have to face of the MR.ZALIM SINGH KHURANA
update soon

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

CONGRATS for new thread...

very naughty update...

Geet ki himmat to sach mein bahut barh gayi hai...

thanx for pm...

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Shalve

@Shalve

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

congrats on yr new thread...awesome update...loved it

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

geet is getting naughty...

both maaneet speak same language...

poor yet joker vicky...

i lv d imagination of geet ...too possesssive...

omg mrs zaalim singh khurana u r sooo gone...lol...

congo on ur new thread

cont

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Congrats on the new thread...

The update was just awesome...

Mr and Mrs, Zalim Singh Khurana... 😆 and precap... 😳

continue soon sweety

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Sumaiyah

@summikhan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

And Zee's back in action!! Welcome back 🤗

Congrats on new thread! And superb update

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

hi congrta son the new thread! will wait 4 pm bt cld nt resist lol! Fab passionate update! Wel written! up[date soon n do pm! Hope u r feeling better