App ki nazron ne samjha UPDATED NEW THREAD LINK @ pg 1 - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update..
how sad...maan is gng to confess his feelings bt geet gave hi the wedding card...
geet is so nave...pami is so bad..i hate her..
she is ruining geet's life for money..
hope everyything will be alright..
continue soon..
waitin 4 next..

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Posted: 12 years ago
no..pls pls...don't get Geet married to Akash...nahi yaar...I love this FF...loved their innocent love but this...no..pls... pls let the marriage break...but I don't want to see Geet in too much pain...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting to know what will happen now...
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 7
It was geet's marriage day..she was so happy,glowing with excitement,shying like any other bride.
Though it was not a love marriage, bt still she was happy as akash seemed a good man to her. She didn't demanded a good looking man in her husband, & after that incident.. definitely she didn't dare to even think that she would get a good looking guy! What she always wanted that her husband would be understanding & nice human being with a pure heart,respecting all.
Today is the most special day of my life!! She thought with a shy smile.
****
While geet was glowing with happiness surrounded with sound & noices & laughter, maan was in the darkness of his room,sitting alone in a perfect silence of agony..of heart breaking!!
BHAI'BHAAAIII!!!
He wiped his tears & got up to open the door.
What is it annie??
Bhai today is di's marriage & I HAVE to go there.
Yes u can go!
Bhai I am not asking ur permission, I am saying u to come with me.
WHAT!!no I can't annie.
Pls bhai, u haven't met her yet & this is the last chance..don't know when I can met her'so it it would rather be impossible for u to meet her again!
Pls pls pls..
Annie u go with dadi .
Pls bhai,she won't come, so nevertheless u HAVE TO come with me at as it will be pretty late when it's time to return home!
Ok annie, u go & get ready & let me be ready also.
YIPIEEE!!!! Love u bhaai, she gave maan a tight hug & ran to get ready.

Here maan closed the door & slided next to the door '.all broken.
What should I do!! He thought with agony,
I can't see her dressed up as a bride for anyone else!
He sanked his head between his knees'.after a long time he raised his head & whispered'
Bt I can't let her go away from me without seeing her for a last time!
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DI!!!! Annie barged into the room with gift in one hand gripping maan's hand in other hand, while maan just dragged his feet along with annie..somewhere he wanted to see her in bridal dress ..to imagine..how she would have looked all dressed for HIM!
Annie!! U are so late! Geet pouted..then nervously glanced at the mirror & then at annie..
Annie how am I looking??
Are u kidding me!! If I were a man, I would have kidnapped u to make u my bride today senorita! Annie said in a dramatic way to which geet wacked her lightly laughing.
Oh by the way, meet my GREAT SWEET bro, MAAN.
It was then when geet noticed maan..
She gasped.. HAAAWWW SIR APP!!! A.. aa 'aaa'APP hai annie ki bhai!(u are annie's sister!!)
Maan nodded & smiled faintly.
Do u know each other, annie asked utterly confused.
Geet smiled mischievously , annie meet my BOSS Mr. MAAN SING KHURANA..urf, DUSHT DANAV! Saying this he bit her tongue .

Oops sorry, actually annie I always used to call him that before u & u never mentioned the name of ur bro's full name,so I think the confusion was created by this.

WHAT!!


Then realization hit annie & she looked at maan who looked every where accept annie.

The words were ringing in mind..

Annie pata hai, aj mere boss ko pehle se hi pata that ki main unhe mere shadi ke liye invite karne wali hoon, dekho unhone mujhe wish karne ke liye gulab diya, ma hi hongi jinhone pehle se call karke unhe bata diya that(u know..by boss already knew that I am going to give him invitation for my wedding, so only he gave me roses!it must be mom who called him informing him about my wedding.)

Bhai u didn't propose her??
Uh..she was ill dear, so she didn't come today.

Annie feebely smiled to geet & said..di, I am coming in a minute!.
She dragged maan to a secluded spot!
She was already in tears, specially feeling miserable to drag her brother at the person's wedding whom he loved.
She said in chocked voice, why!! Why bhai?? Why didn't u tell me!!why u let me drag u here??
Don't cry annie..i didn't say anything as I didn't want to break this love between u & geet
& what about ur love bhai?? She whispered painfully.
Maan cupped her face, pagli!! Why are u crying?? It is not only u.. i'I wanted to see her for one last time ,specially in that bridal dress,before she becomes someone else's.
U have seen her bhai..u can't possibly hold urself more..let's go from here..
Bt geet will miss u
No bhai.. the person who cannot see ur love..can't possibly remember me in midst o all these glamour,let's go bhai.she took his hand to drag him out of there..

Bt geet at the same moment came there,
annie, !! here u are..pata hai kitna dhunda tujhe??(do u know how much searched for u??) U can't just go today like another guest, I really think u as my little sister which I never had & my marriage wouldn't be complete without u

GEET GEET..her mother came.. Why did u just got up from ur sit ?? what is more important than ur marriage??
Ma u go I am coming.. after her mother went from there she said...in a chocked voice,
i am with my sister who is as important to me as the marriage is saying this she hugged annie returned to her place saying..jaldi ana, main intezaar karungi tera( come soon, I will wait for u).

Annie couldn't stop her tears'
Dekha annie..(did you see annie??)she is not selfish & blind in glamour..she is just hopelessly innocent to understand my unuttered love for her.
Bhai can u bear this..
Annie, I too want see geet as long as I can, so that I can cherish the moment..for the rest of my life
****
(courtsey - film LAJJA)

Geet was sitting in her mandap with akash beside her, wondering what was so important that akash's father & her dad went to room to discuss..at this time!!!
Bt she didn't have to think much..as akash's father came screaming'
U have deceived us mohinder ji!! Utterly deceived us!! While mohinder was coming running behind him with his both hand joined together.

Both akash & geet stood at once seeing this!
Uncle ji,there must have been some misunderstanding!! My father can never deceive anyone.
He promised to give me 10 lakhs cash with a car & fridge, washing machine, ac along with gold jewelry. & NOW he is saying he can not give me the cash now
Geet stood speechless at the revealation of dowry..

Dekhiye,app pls samajh ne ki koshish kijiye..(pls try to understand)
Beta akash!!
Yes daddy
Stand up ,u won't marry her.
Yes daddy!
Dekhiye thoda sa waqt de dijiye(pls give me some time)mohinder pleaded.

Ok..since my heart is so large!! I will give u one day time.or else
It is impossible..from where I will get all this money in one night!
Then..beta akash
Yes daddy
Uth jao(stand up)
He stood up at once..
Pls don't do this mohinder almost cried folding his hands.
Ok..the give this house to my son..
Ok..we will give this house,bt it will take a little time.
Ok, the beta akash'sit down.
yes daddy & he sat down beside geet
Geet was all the while a silent spectator of this..she murmured.
Get up!

U said something darling, akash whispered placing his hand on hers.
Geet almost jolted to that disgusting touch & stood uproot .
I SAID GET UP!!!! She screamed.
Akash at once stood up panicking.

KYA SAMAJHTE HAI AP APNE APKO...AUR KYA SAMAJHTE HAI AP MUJHE AUR MERE PARIVAAR KO.!!!??
(what do u think of urself & what do u think of me & my family??!!)

DEKHO!! ISS LARKI KI JABAN TO DEKHO!! KAISE KAICHI KI TARHA CHAL RAHI HAI!!(just look how sharp her tongue is!!! )
AGAR SAWAL MERE PARIVAR KI IZZAT KI HAI TO MAIN TO BOLUNGI ..mere parivaar ke liye(if the question is about my family honour , I will & definitely will say what I have to)

YE SHAADI AB KAVI NAHI HO SAKTI..MOHINDERJI, APSE MERI BAAT 10 LAKH KI HUI THI NA..JO AP PURA NA DE SAKE?? AB TO HUM 20 LAKH ME BHI NAHI MANEGE(now this marriage will not happen,mohenderji, u promised to give me 10 lakhs na..which u could not pay?? Now we will not settle even in 20 lakhs)

...MUJHE VI KISI AISE INSAAN KE SAATH SHAADI NAHI KARNI ,JO SHADI kE MANDAP ME DULHAN KE PASS BAIT KAR..AGAR PAPA BOLE BETA UTH JA TO UTH GAYA,AUR BAITH NE KO BOLE PHIR BAITH GAYA..(even I don't want to marry someone who sitting beside the bride stands & sits up at his father's command.)

HAMARI ITNI INSULT!!!!(u insulted us so much!!)
APKE PAASS IZZAT HAI HI KAHA!! MERE PAPA SE DAHEJ MANG KAR AP APNE BETE KO BECH HI RAHE THE NA..(I wonder if u even have something called honour,by demanding & taking dowry from my father, ur selling ur boy to us na...)

HAMARE SHAAN KI KHILAF.EK LAFZ VI NAHI....(don't say anything against our honour)

KIS SHAAN KI BAAT KAR RAHE HAI APP,YAHA SAB BARATIO KE RUMAL SE LEKE BANIYAN TAK HAMARE PAPA KE DI HUI HAI..NIKAL JAIYE YAHA SE ISSE PEHLE KI MAIN MERE PAPA KE DI HUI SARE SAMAN WAPAS MANGU..(what honour u r talking about??all those peple from the groom's family who are here are dressed in dresses given by my father only,starting from handkerchief to underware..get out from here at once or I will take back whatever my father has given to u.)

All ran to save themselves for ultimate shame..while akash's dad was too running screaming..i will see u..i will ensure that, no one marries u.

Annie & maan were silent spectator,with their blood boiling though they both wanted to just pounce on those filths & rip them..bt couldn't as they were only outsiders & that would have created a new scandal

Brij was all the while seething with anger.
He at once gripped pammi's throat in an iron grip with an utter rage, while everyone else tried to free her from him.
U knew that they were like this..didn't u?? HOW DARE U!??
I ..i really didn't know that they were like this.
Then why did u bring this alliance to us without knowing??
Th..th..they ..didn't seem like this then..pls believe me!!

He left pammi sat dejectedly with a thud looking at geet who was now sitting numb, like a lifeless structure.,
while her mother was crying holding brij...brij didn't know whom to console..his mother, his sister or father..he himself was broken seeing his sister like this.
tune aisa kyu kiya..(why did u do this??!!)mohinder cried in anger,helplessness ,shame & most of all pain for his daughter..
ab tujhse shadi kaun karega..bol'bol na..ab chup kyu ho gayi..(now who will marry u?? say..say na.. now why are u silent now??)he says shaking her holding from shoulder
MAIN KARUNGA..(I WILL).all looked at that direction from where the voice was coming..he jumped on the stage & held her hand & said looking at her..in a soft voice
main karunga geet se shaadi..avi..isi waqt..(I will marry geet ..NOW)

preacp- will they accept?? geet's reaction..oops!!maan's dadi!!!

GUYS pls like & comment sorry for the mistakes

P.S- agar 10 pages comment aur 100 s hue to..i have already finished typing MYJUNGLE GIRL..can post it today itself
Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
i hope u update next part soon
it was like ages u updated the previous part
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww awesome update
Loved it
waiting for maaneet marriage
continue soon
thankx for pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
m afraid nw wht will d answer of geet...will she accept him...i think geet k ghawale maan jayenge...magar kya geet maanegi...dekhte hai...

superb n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...but why u update sooo late...wait karte karte thak jaate hai...give updates little fast plz if u can...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
What a cracker of an update buddy...mindblowing...d way geet rebuked whole baarati loosers jst amazing... & u know that scene fm LAJJA picturised on Mahima Chaudhary is one my most fav. scenes... & Maan...wat to say abt him yaar...he is d guardian angel of geet & i jst simply love him ...jst like i luv d update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an awesum update...
i felt proud of geet... waiting for geet's reaction..
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Posted: 12 years ago
a nice start...loving this ff of urs...continue sooon...plz do pm me ...
Edited by ushankitvc - 12 years ago

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