CAN WE FIX IT ??? ~2 EPILOGUE PG 72 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
oh is this for real i am so happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
hmmm tat was great
so geet confessd his feelings to maan
atlast ...
now sid and geet can have a perfect father and husband
its really awsum that maan is going to settle
he is gonna get complete life



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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
CHAPTER 17

The week was busy for both maan and geet ... finally it was weekend and as promised maan went with geet and sid for shopping ...

" i hate these malls why can't ppl just be in their place and enjoy rather crowd the whole parking area " said maan frustrated as he was finding it hard to park his car ...
" maan relax ... why are u breaking my head for this silly thing ..." said geet laughing

Once they were done with parking trouble they entered the mall ... Shopping is something which can never enter maan's book but since geet insisted he had no other go but say yes ...

" maan is this top good " geet asked
" geetu we are here for more than 45 min and u have not even selected one ... i m bored sweety " maan complained
" don't u fancy seeing me in different dresse " geet asked
" well not with this " maan said " umm... i have hardly seen u in saree ... why don't u try one ... i peronally like sarees " said maan

Geet dragged maan to saree section ...
" its so confusing to chose " said geet
" red suits u " said maan
" i have one " said geet
" blue "
" i don't like that color"
" then select by urself don't ask me " maan said irritated

" champ ur mom forgets everyting when she comes for shopping " maan complained to sid who was busy playing games in maan's phone

Maan looked at some girls who were seeing him and giggling ...As usual maan din't care but geet didn't miss to notice that ... she went near those girls ...

" he is so handsome " said one girl
" yeah but i think he is married ... that small boy with him may be his son " said another gal
" i don't think so... see he seems young and happy so he defo will not be married " said the third girl
" i think she is right " interupted geet

All the girls looked at her in shock

" may be he is single ... why don't u give a try if u like him ? " said geet
" i think she is right we should try ... wat if we get lucky and he accepts " said the girl

The girls went near maan
" actually ... i ... i was thinking ...if ... if we ... we could be frds " the gal stammered

maan gave a ' what the hell ' expression ... he saw geet who was standing at a distance enjoying the scene and laughing ...

" of course " maan said with killer smile ... geet's eyes widened in shock
" but i have a GF already " said maan .
" omg " said one gal
" its ok u can break up with her " said another gal
" umm ... well not a bad idea i was a bit bored seeing the same gal for past 7 years ... i need a change u know " maan said

Geet walked towards them glaring at maan ... she hit his arm with her bag ...

" are u bored of me " asked geet making a baby face
" i was just playing along baby " maan laughed pulling geet into a side hug
" sorry gals the play is over " geet said looking at the girls and dragged maan and sid out of the place leaving heartbroken gals behind...

Maan couldn't control himself from laughing thinking the scene that happened ago ...

" u should have seen those gal's expression it was worth million " said geet laughing
" u have broken their heart geetu ... poor gal " maan said
" oh poor gal and all ... do u want me talk with her " geet asked
" ummm no use because the contract to be my love for next seven births is only in ur name " maan said and kissed her cheeks

After some shopping Sid wanted to play games and maan couldn't deny so they went to gaming zone ... geet has given them only 30 mins to play while she will be waiting for them in the food court ... but sid has no intenton to leave the game zone even after 30 mins ...

" ok u play this game its so noisy here so i ll go and call mom from outside and ask her to come " maan said and sid kissed his cheeks in return

Maan was talking with geet in phone when sid came running to him and hugged his legs ... he immediately lifted sid in his armas and asked what it was

" one uncle is fighting with me in there " said sid
" uncle fighting ? " asked maan wondering who will trouble a small kid
" don't worry i ll take care " said maan

Sid walked in front of maan and tugged the pant of the man who fought with him... the man turned and looked at sid

"What happened? Did u bring ur father or what? "Asked the man ... sid turned and pointed at maan

Maan was surprised beyond words " abhay ! " maan exclaimed
"oh god i can't believe its u " said abhay with equal enthu


"Long time dude where the hell were u these days? "Asked maan
" don't ask me buddy my father sent me Europe to look after business and I returned only 3 weeks ago ………even now I m here in Chennai for some business works " said abhay
"oh I can't believe Mr. lazy head abhay raichand takes care of business " said maan laughing
" my father makes me do all weird things in pretext of business …………………. But luckily I get to travel a lot " said abhay

" why are u not punching his nose for fighting " asked little sid who was confused with friendly behavior of maan with this new uncle

" oh so its ur son…………….. I was wondering how this small kid has so much attitude now I know from where it came " said abhay brushing sid,s hair
" so u were fighting with him ? " asked maan
" not fighting and all I just asked him to take chocolate ice cream instead of butterscotch ………………….. u know I eat only butterscotch " said abhay

" Mr.Raichand were u fighting with a kid for ice cream " maan asked in disbelief
" dude u know how much I like ice cream " said abhay making a face
" but u never changed during college days u troubled his mom and now u r troubling him " said maan

" mom ? do I know his mom ? ………………………. Wait a min don't tell me its geet handa "
" u r rite " maan smiled
" wow great dude congratz finally u both realized ur fellings for each other " said abhay

They both went to meet geet ……………………. Geet was pleasantly surprised to see abhay after long time

" I can't believe its u after these many years " said geet giving abhay a bear hug
" even I can't believe that u r a mother now " said abhay " u r old "
" shut up u r the one who is FAT " said geet
" u must be kidding "
" seriously look at u …………. Sooo faaattt " said geet
" why won't u call me fat when u have a hunk with 6 packs near u " said abhay
" umm he doesn't have 6 packs " said geet
" I do have " maan said spontaneously

Geet and abhay laughed and gave a high – 5 to eachother ……….

" grow up gyus " said maan

After refreshing old memories the frds parted ……………………. Maaneet reached geet's house sid was already asleep so maan placed him in the bed room and came to geet who was in the kitchen ……………………….. he hugged her from back ……………….geet turned to face him ………………..

" u have doubt abt my 6 pack so why don't I give u a free shoe " asked maan
" I don't encourage stripping in kitchen " said geet
" I don't mind what u say " maan slowly started to remove his shirt buttons

" maan what are u doing ? " geet asked shocked
" don't close ur eyes geetu I don't mindu u seeing me "


He pulled geet and she fell on his bare chest ……………………. Her one hand was around his neck and one on his well toned six pack …………………. Maan caught her hand and slowly traced it on his body ………………. Geet closed her eyes feeling his body for the first time …………………… A shiver ran threw maan's body ………………… he started to nuzzle her neck and place kisses there ………………………….. Their passionate moment was disturbed by geet's phone

" I hate ur phone " said maan inbetween the kiss
" maan leave me ………… it must be important " said geet
" not more than me " said maan

The phone didn't stop ringing and finally maan has to leave geet to attend the call ……………………..

" hey rohan " geet attended the call and sat on the couch ………………….. maan sat near her placing his head on her shoulder and playing with her fingers

" just now I was checking out Mr.Khuranna " geet said …………. Maan laughed it was then she realized what she said …………" I mean I was checking Mr.Khuranna's project ……………… I ll mail u the details in 30 mins " said geet and cut the call

" so we ll continue " asked maan
" what ? "
" checking out mr. Khuranna " said maan with a wink
" u r too much ……………. I have more work to do so don't disturb me " said geet walking into the kitchen

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THE FIRST PART OF THIS CHAPTER WAS INSPIRED FROM MY FAV TAMIL MOVIE

THIS SS WILL END IN NEXT 8 PARTS HOPEFULLY

TWIST WILL BE REVEALED IN COUPLE OF UPDATES
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Posted: 13 years ago
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" just now I was checking out Mr.Khuranna " geet said 🤣

awesome line yaar arent we all checking him out lol 😉...loved it gerat update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it dear...
uff ye maan bhi naa😳
thanks for update and pm...😛
cont. soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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" just now I was checking out Mr.Khuranna " geet said …………. Maan laughed it was then she realized what she said ………




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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
That scene was from the film "sillenu or kaadhal",rt?
i loved that scene a lot..
so abhay also came into the scene..
i was laughing out loud when geet said that she s checking out mr.khurana..
Gud one..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
awesome part dear
loved it
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

That scene was from the film "sillenu or kaadhal",rt?

i loved that scene a lot..
so abhay also came into the scene..
i was laughing out loud when geet said that she s checking out mr.khurana..
Gud one..!


yeah u r rite abt the movie ... tats my fav movie
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
wow awesome update dear..
loved it...
oh they met their old friend...n id fought with him...
hahaha checking out mr. khurana funny...
waiting for twist... lolz...
continue soon...

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