[Maaneet SS] Miss. Guided Part5 Pg26 6/30 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maaneet099

ayiye ayiye Shahedaji! i have really missed u... it's been long since we have caught up... n i certainly do miss ur lovely maaneet works... please do come up with one soon 😃

aye aye captain u may be right on ur feeling but no promises huh 😆

try karo ji... 😉

hope to hear from u soon!



Aww You missed me? That so touching. But I have been always around.

And you miss my work? That is bit surprising for me. My stories never been so deep or meaningful. I always wonder.

Let see what I can do...

I'm right with my feeling but no promises? That's a bit twisting interesting concept.

Alright bring it on, but warning you in advance I can't promise with my reaction.😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok will read 2mrw and pm me pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new story.
Sounds interesting.
Dehra Dun my town...haha.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb update. Maan criminal. No way. Tumhari story ke name ke according sayad geet maan ko criminal smjh lengi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Newdime



Aww You missed me? That so touching. But I have been always around.

And you miss my work? That is bit surprising for me. My stories never been so deep or meaningful. I always wonder.

of course i certainly do miss ur work... sacchi mucchi 😊

Let see what I can do...
😃

I'm right with my feeling but no promises? That's a bit twisting interesting concept.

Alright bring it on, but warning you in advance I can't promise with my reaction.😈
😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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here is the next part... the story is in initial stages so not too much maaneet interaction... expect more for part four... maaneet interaction coming up 😉


Part 2:
Geet parked her car in her allotted lot in the underground garage and walked towards the exit to catch an elevator to her apartment situated on the seventh floor of the eighteen-storey building. She had been offered a luxurious and well-equipped government quarters from her department and even uncle Raj had asked her to stay in his house, for afterall, it was the house she grew up in, but she had flatly refused both wanting a simple suite to her likability and privacy. Nobody knew where she stayed except Dev and Raj for she preferred to keep a low key among her peers in the department.
She hit the elevator button only to find a note on the elevator saying it was out of order. She sighed in reluctance at the maintenance note. She looked at the narrow looking stairs that had come to become her friend in the past few months she came to stay in this apartment as the elevator was more prone to repair than working condition. She tucked the binder and her purse under her left arm and started walking up the stairs pondering about the case at hand.
She finally reached her floor panting a bit and wiping off beads of sweat that came to form on her forehead due to the physical exertion. She brought the keys out of her pocket and walked to the door that read 12B before opening it and walking into her apartment. She hung the keys behind the kitchen counter that was located on the left of her as soon as she walked in and shrugged off her holster and placed in the nearby closet. Then she placed the binder on the coffee table in the main hall while sitting on the couch to pull off her boots. She changed into her sweatpants and a looser t-shirt after freshening up. She had not cooked anything since morning as she left early for work. She wanted to take a preliminary look at the case file before she went into the kitchen. She settled on the couch, folding her left leg and tucking the other one on the side while pulling the file along.
A closer look at the case she realized it was trickier than she thought it would be. Surprisingly there were no drug or weapon dealings. It was mostly cases of people being misled into financial scams. No physical record or complaints were lodged against any of those people because coincidentally few months from their debts they went missing. Investigation reports showed people in the neighborhood hardly recognized anyone missing from their locality except cases of people moving out only to have no news of them. There was nothing outrageously suspicious to the people living around that they never bothered to report a case and only after the people from her department inquired they realized the person in question has gone missing. Although the criminal was surely identified as male but neither his name was known nor his face as he changed his get up quite often, confusing the victim or any witnesses if any. His heists followed no particular pattern and his dealings left behind little or no evidence. But what had piqued her interest was the fact that the victims of homicides were in no way connected to his heists. There seemed no apparent connection between the victims versus the scams he had performed. She scratched her head in confusion. She had never come across such a case and it sure would be a challenge. The computer-generated image came from people who had seen him from far as well as using bits of their imagination. She pulled out the envelope and was about to take the image out when she heard someone knock her door.
"Ab yeh kaun hai," she said tucking the photo back and dragging her feet to the door. Usually the milkman or the newspaper guy would come, knock and, leave their stuff and she had very few visitors for hardly anyone knew she lived here. She peeped through the tiny hole only to find the person with his face turned allowing her only view of his back. She scrunched her eyebrows in confusion and looked to see how far her guns were just in case she needed them. She could certainly catch the intruder off guard and efficiently get to her defense weapon. So far in her career her bare hands were enough to knock down any scumbag.
She opened the door to find a tall and well-built man with his back facing. His hair was neatly trimmed into a military cut while his toned biceps showed he worked out quite often. He wore dark denims that contrasted with his faded beige t-shirt, etching his perfect physique without an ounce of fat. He wasn't anybody familiar she knew, so her instincts kicked in as she prepared for any surprises when he suddenly turned around to face her. Her defenses fell flat like an inflated balloon and her breathing hitched at the sight of him. Even the Greek gods would have shied away in front of his perfectly handsome face that bore a hint of his neatly trimmed stubble. His dark chocolate irises reminded her of melted chocolate lava allowing one to drown easily in them. The neatly shaped nose gave way to perfectly M-shaped lips making her skip a beat at the thought of feeling them. Damn! He was sexiness personified indeed she thought, her racy thoughts surfacing only to be quickly brushed away. From when did she become attracted to men allowing her emotions to rule her? She had come to believe the concept of soul mates was just a figment of one's imagination; relationships hindered her ability to focus on her job only to turn into a person's weakness. And here she stood shamelessly drooling over the man whom she hardly knew from a few minutes ago! She wondered if her menses cycle was around the corner cranking her hormones that seemed to drown her thoughts in the gutter. She made a mental note to keep her thoughts in check when she heard him clear him throat.
"Hello, Ms. Handa?" he asked as she registered his husky voice.
Well the gutter it is! Hai Babaji his voice is' her mind tried to find an expletive to describe his attention drawing voice that had her fully immersed in her so-called gutter.
"Hello?" he repeated waving his hand in front of face to gain her attention.
She snapped out of her string of thoughts and straightening up, "Haan, but who are you?" she asked, "I don't think we have met."
He grinned revealing his perfect teeth before continuing, "Of course, it isn't that easy to meet me," his eyes twinkling in amusement.
"I'm sorry?" she asked in confusion.
"I mean I just moved in to the apartment next door, so it isn't possible we would have met before. By the way, I am Maan, Maan Singh," he said extending his hand.
She had never allowed herself to touch anyone unless it was case related or in personal defense but for some reason she instantly took his hand to shake, surprised at her own actions.
"Well Ms. Handa, a packet arrived for you when you were out so the postman left it by me," he said revealing a package in his hand that had gone unnoticed by her in her drooling sessions of him.
"Thank you," she whispered softly wondering who could have mailed, as nobody knew of her stay. She decided to get her questions answered by opening the package but she was curious how he knew her name. Maan was about to walk back to his apartment when she asked, "aapko mera naam kaise pata?"
"The package had your name Ms. Handa," he said with amusement.
"Oh of course," she countered wondering her drooling session had completely cleared her of her rational thoughts. She badly needed to be back in her element scolded her derailing thoughts.
"Take care Ms. Handa, hope to see you often," he said before walking into his apartment and closing the door.
"Hope to see you not often," she mumbled, closing the door. One encounter was enough to swing her rational thoughts; more would only worsen her ability to think straight engage her emotional thoughts.
Before she could open the package, her eyes wandered to the file and the envelope lying beside it. Her curiosity to take a look criminal's photo overshadowed her need to open the package. She dropped the package and pulled out the photo in the envelope while sitting on the couch.
The surprises for the day seemed to be never ending. The computer-generated image seemed vaguely familiar except she couldn't put a finger on it. The top part of his face was masked revealing only his glaring golden eyes but the etched face seemed quite familiar. She raked her brain to find the face matching to the image when it clicked rather harshly; it was a splitting image of the man she had just met, Maan, Maan Singh!

Next part contd below...
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Edited by Maaneet099 - 13 years ago
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Part 3:
Geet sat mum on the couch trying to process the information she just uncovered. Why Babaji? She groaned mentally. The case was tricky enough to have no physical evidence on top of that her growing attraction would definitely not help the case progress. She wished she had seen the image before she actually saw him; atleast her prejudice against him would have prevented her from shamelessly checking him out. She held her temple tightly as though trying to massage the invisible pain beginning to erupt through her insides. Somewhere she felt disappointed and her heart fell at the thought that he was the target at hand, a mere criminal that she was supposed to catch with proper evidence.
It was too much of a coincidence for him to turn up to her doorstep right when she got hold of the case unless he had some other motive in mind. For a second she wondered if he had got a whiff of her handling the case but nobody knew about it except for uncle Raj. She had restrained from telling Dev as she wanted total privacy and she was sure her boss would have not told anyone except her. Oh well, she thought sighing reluctantly; some things were never meant to change one of which was the fact that she could never think of settling in her life. Settling in life her thoughts came to a screeching halt; when did mind concoct the idea of a future with him and was already dejected that there really wasn't any. She felt so out of element that her mind refused to listen to her. She shook her head, trying to shake of any thoughts pertaining to him and decided she needed sleep to clear her mind of the things. She grabbed a glass of milk off the refrigerator for she didn't feel like eating but in the middle of the night her stomach would grumble, nabbing her off her sleep so she drank the milk to keep her stomach mum. She switched off all the lights headed towards her bedroom, completely forgetting about the package that came for her.
***
Sun peeked in the midst of a cloudy morning at dawn. As the first rays hit her bedroom, she opened her eyes. Last night's sleep was anything but peaceful. The first half of the night she had tossed and turned in the thoughts of a man who was intent on robbing of her sleep and in the second half she tried convincing herself that the man depriving her of sleep in reality was robbing much worse things and not worth her emotions. Yes, it was pretty early to conclude he was a criminal but his arrival as her new neighbor out of the blue could not be dismissed easily. Well come what may, she was Geet Handa, and nobody messes with Geet Handa, including that chocolate boy, she thought with determination before getting off the bed and heading towards the bathroom.
She walked out of the bathroom dabbing the towel on her face and removing any excess water. Her morning routine workout of practicing her kickboxing with the punching bag followed by a relaxing session of meditation had soothed her nerves down a bit allowing her to think clearly. She walked to the kitchen to grab a cup of black coffee when she heard a strange noise. She scrunched her eyebrows wondering where the noise came from. It sounded like loud beeps stemming from the main hall. She strode towards the noise and identified it came from the package she had received yesterday only to have completely forgotten about it. She grabbed the package off the coffee table and brought near her ears. Although the beeping resembled a time bomb, she had dealt and denoted enough of those in her training days to recognize that noise was definitely not that. She tore open the package only to find a smaller package wrapped neatly in a gift-wrap box and a note fell out. She pursed her lips and bent to pick the note before sitting on the edge of the couch. She opened the box to find a timepiece bleeping loudly. Strange, she thought and picked the note that read:
Officer Handa,
Hear that tick tock of the clock sweetheart? Let the sound of music fill your heart, kya pata, kal ho na ho ;)
With loads of love,
Speckled Band
"Ah! Humor me much Mr. Criminal," she said amused at the note and the gift. The name he had signed intrigued her. He must be an avid reader of Sherlock Holmes for he had signed, "Speckled Band", a term only familiar to the adventures of Sherlock Holmes. "Interesting," she remarked, her thoughts racing through the details of the case.
Geet decided to explore more about the criminal's activities. She walked out of her apartment in her navy blue jeans paired with light red blouse. She had let her wavy tresses loose allowing it to reach below her shoulder. Her shades were perched on her head, holding back most of her hair while leaving a few short strands out. She held her purse in her left hand while busily trying to lock the door when she heard his voice.
"Good morning Ms. Handa!" he greeted warmly.
Oh the choc— I mean criminal boy is here, she thought as she turned to face him with a grim smile.
"Up and shining early in the morning, koi khaas vajah?" he continued grinning.
Yes trying to find evidence against you, she wanted to say but, "Nahi need to get to work," she said instead and headed downstairs without waiting for his reply.
Maan was taken aback by her curt reply, "Ajeeb ladki hai," he remarked shrugginghis shoulder, "magar phir bhi kuch toh hai," he said, his eyes twinkling before getting back into his apartment.
Geet was about to reach her office when her boss texted her to meet him urgently. She took a turn, heading to her headquarters.
"Aao Geet, here take a look at this," Raj said thrusting a piece of newspaper article that looked a bit old and torn. The paper read: "The girl under debt drowns in misery and goes missing." She wondered what the clipping had anything to do with the case she had at hand.
"Her neighbors claimed a man very similar to the description image we have," he said as if on cue. "This is the only physical connection we have on records. There have been no records of the actual scams because nobody has come forward to report any cases. All the records in the file are from what we found while trying to investigate this case."
"Hmm," she sighed trying to process the new information. "Alright sir, I need to get some things done. I'll take your leave if there is nothing else," she standing behind the chair.
"That's all I have got officer Handa, the rest is yours to uncover, all the best," he said smiling.
"Ji sir, thanks," she said saluting and leaving the office.
Geet headed out to the street where she had parked her car and was about to get in when she heard a loud buzzing of a bike. She looked to her right to see a motorbike rushing towards her in great speed. In spite of no major traffic on the street the bike was riding on the edge of the road, exactly towards her. The biker wore black leather pants and a leather jacket and had his face covered with a black helmet engraved with a golden cobra. Within a fraction of a second she jerked away the spot where she stood only to find the biker run down the exact spot she stood a few seconds ago. The speed of the bike stirred the wind forcefully across her face, causing her hair to fly in all directions. She saw the biker stopped a few yards away from her turned to wave and zoomed away once again. She instantly got into her car and sped after the vehicle.


i am no expert at these CID-type stories... doing my best... please excuse any major flaws 😳

guys i understand the story has just started but the people who i have PMing don't seem to take the time to hit the Like button... unless there is no encouragement there is really no reason why i take the time off even during my vacation without going anywhere to update continuously for u guys... please at least hit the like button so u get updates more often... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome part dear...its becoming more n more interesting...continue soon plss madhu...cant wait to read the next parts...i dont feel like maan is the criminal and the title also make me believe the same...anyways waiting shaiting jee...jaldi jalidi update karo as promised😊

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