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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: music_girl
yep unfaithful
u silly you're NOT even repying on my scrap

I didn't get any new scrap from you don't believe me check my scraps. So who is silly😛

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: music_girl
Oh-eh Mel, when I told you to unseal the twist more quickly you were talking all ur time with the twists, and I am also going to talk my time a lot for MSWG, heheee...twists, misunderstanding...maaneet scenes are about to come, but too soon now

😆 so your taking revenge hmmm maybe I should write a ss about you called revenge😉What say😛

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Part 29
Geet did the same with the chocolates. 5 minutes latter. James came with heart shaped balloons, written on it please forgive your Dhust Danav.After every 5 minutes James came inside with something. Geet had it it has been 2 hours now. Her patient was gone. In anger she walked downstairs to the Archive.

G:MR.Khurana you came her to work so do that if you disturb again with one of your cheap and flirty acts you will be fired immediately.Am I clear MR. Khurana

The word cheap peered in Maan't heart but he knew she didn't mean it and he deserved it.

M:Again Mr. Khurana Ma'am
G:Listen I am your boss and I will call you whatever I want get it.

Geet knew he loved to hear his name from her mouth and she wasn't planning to give him that happiness.

M:yes ma'am so sweet that you respect me so much
G;Mr. Khurana you better stop acting smart if you want this job.
M:But what have I done ma'am
G: OH so you don't know. Let me refresh your memory the cards, the balloons, flowers, chocolates, teddy bears and I can go on and on.
M:Ma'am was my name written on it
G:No
M:What was written on it
G:Dust Danav
M:Sorry my name is maan
G:You really you think your something huh. You better stop this drama of yours.Nothing is going to happen I won't forgive you make that clear in your thick head.

Maan just smiled.He came close to Geet and kissed her on the cheek and whisperd.

M:I know my Misty will forgive her Dust Danav, coz I am my Misty's dhak dhak.

Maan straightend himself.Geet was lost in Maan.

M:Ma'am I am done in the archive I will go to my cabin and work further.
G:Hmm

When Maan left Geet realised what happenend.

Geet's monologue
Tears fell from Geet's eyes. Everytime I promise I won't let you affect me still I can't stop myself but I can't get weak. I have to make it clear to you that I have moved on that's the only way you leave me alone. But how I don't want to hire someone I know I am going to stay strict with atleast I will try.

geet sighed and walked upstairs to get another shock. She saw Maan and Maneet togheter in Maan's cabin. It looked like Maan was trying to manofy Maneet.Maan was walking rounds around Maneet with gifts.

Maan:I am sorry I was just pulling your leg Oh come on, see you made me act a girl's voice.
M:Oh mom thought Sally was my girlfriend she wants to meet her and what did you say, I care so much.
Maan:I sorry look I bought you a car
M:Keep that car

Maan took Maneet in his lap.That's when Geet walked into Maan's cabin. Maan and Maneet didn't notice it.

Maan:I am so sorry come on won't you forgive your dad.
G:How DARE YOU CALL YOURSELF HIS DAD, HUH. YOUR NOT HIS DAD AND YOU WILL NEVER BE IT.
Maan:Geet(Maan was extremly hurt) maan's voice chocked.
G:Maan put Maneet down and stay away from my son
M:Your wrong geet he is our son. I now you angry on me but please don't take me away from my son. I already missed ten years out of his live not anymore. I won't be able to handle it.

Geet looked up shocked to Maan.She could feel his pain, his words touched Geet's heart. She looked and Maneet. Maneet showed her puppy eyes. She couldn't take Maneet's happiness ayway from him. But what if Maan would leave again. She felt frustrated .

G:Maneet with ramu kaka home, now.
M:geet please I haven't seen him the entire day just let him stay a while please. And Geet I will never leave my son and you alone again I promise
G:Oh really
M:Yes I have talked to Adi I am shiften my business to California.

Geet looked at Maan with bigg eyes.Was he really serious she couldn't believe it. She again looked at Maneet's pleading face.

G:Hmm fine you can stay with your dad.
M:Thank Geet it means a lot.

Geet walked out of the room feeling all confused. She sat infront of her desk, I don't know how long starring a her file. Lunch time was over. Maan knew geet hadn't eaten. He saw sitting there, disturbed.He walked into her cabin with a plate of alloo parantha geet's favorite. Maan sat infront of Geet. Geet was still in a different world. She didn't know Maan had enterd her cabin and was sitting in front of her. She came back to reality when she heard his voice.

M:Geet come on open your mounth
G:Huh

Maan stuffed a piece of the alloo ka parantha in her mounth.

G:Maan what are you doing
M:Misty what does it looks like I am doing.
G:MAAN
M:I love it when you call me Maan. Maan gave geet a peck on her cheek. You haven't had lunch so I am feeding you. I am mean someone has to take care of you, cause you always neglect yourself.
G:Maan you don't have to do all this
M:I know but I want to
G:Maan I forgive you

Maan's hapeniss knew now bound but that happenis vanshid as fats as it came.

G:Can you now please leave me alone don't worry you can meet Maneet whenever you want.
M:If you have forgiven me Geet then come back.I miss you so so much. I can't live whitout.
G:You seem to have done perfectly fine for the last 12 years.

These words pained Maan like hell. He now understood even better how deep Geet's pain was. Maan stood up and left from there. He enterd his cabin and closed the blinds he didn't want Geet to see him in such a broken state. He threw everything from the table he was feeling frustrated. Maan's hand hit something and it started bleeding badly. It was the same hand which he had hurt while working out. The noise and the close blinds made Geet alert. She stood up and ran to Maan's cabin. Seeing him broke and his hand bleeding pained Geet a lot. She walked up to Maan. She grabbed his hand. he looked at her with teary eyes.

G:What have you done. Why do you hurt yourself.

She grabbed the first aid box and made maan sit on the sofa.She took care of maan's wound.

G:Is it hurting a lot
M: I am fine

Maan's voice was choking. Geet couldn't take it anymore. She hugged maan tied and started sobbing silently.

M:Shh I am sorry. I didn't mend to hurt you.
G:Then what were you doing by hurting yourself you now na when you heart yourself it hurts me. You are my DD

Maan smiled between his tears. He was so happy to hear DD out of Geet's Mouth

M:I am sorry I promise I will never hurt you again I will always trust you I promise. Please don't leave me I will d

Geet put a hand on Maan's mouth

G:Shh don't say that I will never leave you Maan. You know na your geet can't live without you. Your my dhak dhak.
M: I love you Misty

Geet and Maan stayed in a hug for a good 30 minutes.

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@Ruchs I now it's your b-day on the 21st. So a happy b-day even if it' s a bit to early. See this as your early b-day gift😃

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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Ruchi

@ruchs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

OMG…. Me first???😲

Wow…it's my B'day gift!!!!🤗

Trust me dear with your amazing update, my b'day has got an amazing beginning, me so overwhelmed with happiness…..😳

Loved the update to bits…👏

I was waiting so much for this update…😆

Finally Geet allowed Maneet to call Maan dad…😳

And OMG she even forgave Maan whole-heartedly…😲

Gosh loved the last few lines of their conversation…👏

Me actually got tears in my eyes…😭*happy tears*

This is really my fav update so far..😳

And it's really a big-big pleasure that my fav update is actually my b'day gift…😃😳

Thank you sooo much dear….😳😳

Love you sooo much…❤️

You took out time from your exams and wrote an update as a gift to me, it rally means a lot to me...!!!!🤗

I hope you rock your exams….😳

P.S.- me will try to give you a return gift in the form of Twisty Deewangi update today by late night! specially for you...!!!❤️

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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music

@music_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Galaaa

wow...lovely...muahhh maan and geet forever rocking...

hey yeah me...

awesome update! just when i was gonna commeting, the weirdo log off 😆😳

lovely...

Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

mel muahhh yar awesome update loved the way maan and geet talked in front of maaneet.

waiting for next update yar

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

finally they r together...

now waiting for them to teach a lesson to those who separated them...

continue soon...

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

awesome n beautiful update dear...

so geet forgiven maan...hurray...

really amazing...

ho dear...hw can u b sooo zalim...itna achcha update k baad u will update again on 27th...not done...want more maaneet means maan n geet moments plz...one more update b4 27th...

loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: ruchs
OMG'. Me first???😲

Wow'it's my B'day gift!!!!🤗

Trust me dear with your amazing update, my b'day has got an amazing beginning, me so overwhelmed with happiness'..😳

Loved the update to bits'👏

I was waiting so much for this update'😆

Finally Geet allowed Maneet to call Maan dad'😳

And OMG she even forgave Maan whole-heartedly'😲

Gosh loved the last few lines of their conversation'👏

Me actually got tears in my eyes'😭*happy tears*

This is really my fav update so far..😳

And it's really a big-big pleasure that my fav update is actually my b'day gift'😃😳

Thank you sooo much dear'.😳😳

Love you sooo much'❤️

You took out time from your exams and wrote an update as a gift to me, it rally means a lot to me...!!!!🤗

I hope you rock your exams'.😳

P.S.- me will try to give you a return gift in the form of Twisty Deewangi update today by late night! specially for you...!!!❤️

Love you Ruchs. Me happy you liked you b-day gift. 🥳me waiting for my return gift. Well Maan and Geet had to patch up on your b-day😃.Happy you got happy tears and not sad tears. Hope you will have a fun fill day on the 21 th

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: music_girl
Galaaa

wow...lovely...muahhh maan and geet forever rocking...

hey yeah me...

awesome update! just when i was gonna commeting, the weirdo log off 😆😳

lovely...

The weirdo log off??????????