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Posted: 13 years ago
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😲

Interesting continue 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting concept
superb prologue
waiting for the update
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME
pm me when you update please :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG,,,Awesum FF...Intresting prologue...Pls continue soon n PM me please :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for all your likes and motivation. I hope you will love this story of mine on our very own Maaneet. Have go just a rough idea right now and will take time to develop. I would like even the silent readers to comment on it may it be a positive one or criticism. This helps me to write better. I would like to also know your ideas as to wat you want to read next. No character sketch. I will introduced them with the story.

Part 1

Doctor: Congrats Mrs. Khuranna you are pregnant.

Geet: what? Are you mad doctor? How could it be.?

Doctor: Calm down Mrs. Khuranna. Its not good for the baby and how cant it be possible when you share physical relations with your Husband.

Geet: even though doctor. I have been taking birth control pills. So how is it possible.

Doctor: its quite possible Mrs. Khuranna. May be you have skipped one of them or there may be delay in taking. As per the reports, you are almost a month pregnant now.

Geet: a month. How can it be.

Geet thought for a while and then she remembered tat it was exactly one month when he did tat.

Doctor: yes Mrs. Khuranna. A month of pregnancy. But it looks like you are too shocked about this news.

Geet: yes doctor. Its shocking. doctor I would like to abort the child as I don't prefer being a mother so soon.

Doctor: Mrs. Khuranna is there any problem between you and Mr. Khuranna.

Geet: not exactly doctor. But you can understand its just a month for our marriage and we have not even enjoyed it. There is so much to explore and this responsibility will be like a burden on us. And even my husband is not yet ready for it. So its better to get it aborted.

Doctor: its against our morals to abort but when both husband and wife is ready we don't have any problem. Only thing is tat you have both have to sign on the papers.

Geet:' ok doctor. I will get the signature. I just want the abortion to be taken place tomorrow itself.

Doctor: as you wish. But still I would prefer you both think over it and keep the baby. It makes a couple complete in every way.

Geet: no second thoughts on it doctor. My decision is final. So I will come with the permission letter signed tomorrow and you can proceed with the procedures soon after.

Geet was determined to abort the baby at any cost. She could not give birth to a monsters child. Yes for her, her husband was a monster, a devil who has shattered her into pieces. I wont let you win Mr. Maan Singh Khuranna. This will be the biggest blow in your life. Its enough of your game now. Its my turn and I promise tat you will pay for every second in your life. You will regret on your decision. Its time for the real game Maan. Just wait and watch wat I do now.

Geet reached the KM which was a hell for her. A hell where there was no way to come out. A place which ruined her. she was walking in her trance when Savitri Devi ( Maan's Dadima) called out to her.

Dadima: geet bete aap kaha chali gayi thi. Koi ish tarah bina bataya jatha hai kya.

Geet: Dadima kisiko kya farak padta hai ki main yaha rahu ya kahi chali javuoo. Akhir laut ke tho wapas yahi aana hai na.

Dadima: geet bete beete baatein bhul jaye. Kyu unhi purani baato mein apni zindagi jhalati rahegi aap.

Geet: zindagi tho jhal jhuki hai dadima. Sirf shareer baaki hai. Ek din yeh bhi jhal jayega.

Dadima: Pata nahi aisi kya baat hui hai aap dono mein ki aapka aur Maan ka itna haseen ristha aise moodh par aa khada hai. Pata nahi kisiki nazar lag gayi hai aap dono ko.

Geet: Nazar kisiki nahi lagi dadima. Mera vishwas mujhe le dooba hai. Na main apne pyar par aankhen bandh karkar vishwas karthi na yeh sab kuch hota.

Dadima: beta aap dono kyu aapne rishte ko ek aur mauka nahi de sakthe. Kab tak hum sab se chupathe rahege ki jaisa deekh raha hai vaisa kuch nahi hai. Sab samjhthe hai ki aap dono ek dujhe ke saath khush hai par hum janthe hai ki aap dono ke rishte ka sach.

Geet: ish rishte ka koi bhavishya nahi hai dadima. Ek kora kakaz ban juki hai meri zindagi. Na yaha se jaa sakthi hoon nahi mar sakthi hoon.

Dadima: geet… yeh kaisi baatein kar rahi hai.

Geet just gets up from there and silently goes to her room. The room which was supposed to be their love paradise once now turned to a nightmare. The room where they had spent some beautiful moments before marriage was now coming to eat her. she could clearly see Maan ripping her off her clothes and forcing himself on her on their bed. She hated this room, she hated the mere word marriage now. This is the same place where she is being raped for past one month by her own husband. This is the same place where she begged for her dignity but Maan was nowhere to listen. He had tortured her so much tat she forgot to live a life once she lived. She had no more strength to fight against him but yet she decided not to give up. She slowly touched her stomach but there was no happiness on her face.

Geet (ST): har ek aurat ki zindagi mein yeh sabse khoobsurat eshaas hota hai. Par mere liye ek nassoor ban juka hai. Who nassor jo mujhe har pal meri khamzori yaad dilayega. Who nassoor jo mujhe ush har ek raat ki yaad dilayage jaha meri aatma ko khatam kiya gaya hai. Main tumhe janam nahi de sakthi. Nahi dena chahti hoon ush hevan ki kisi bhi nishani ko. Nahi de sakthi ushe yeh khushi jisne meri puri zindagi barbaad ki. Tumhe ish duniya se aane se pehle hi jana hoga. Haan tum soch rahe hoge ki main kis tarah ki maa hoon. Ha main ek zinda laash hoon aur mere andar koi eshaas nahi bacha hai. Nahi main kisi cheez ko mehsoos kar sakthi hoon aur khaas kar woh cheez jo ush hevan se judi hui ho tho. Tum ush Maan Singh Khuranna ke ansh ho aur main apne andar ushe koi nishani nahi rakhna chahthi. Main nafrat karthi hoon ush har ek cheez se jismein ush hevan ka khoon ya ehsaas ho. Ushe dukh dene ke liye tumhe jana hi hoga. Main janthi hoon ki bhagwan mujhe kabhi maaf nahi kar payenga par jab main khud bhagwan ko nahi manthi tho maafi ki baat hi nahi aati.

Precap: Maan's torture.

Will geet abort the child.?

Love shoba…………………

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesumm Update Gal..Ty fr d PM n Update nxt part soon..!! All d bst :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing prt ...so they luvd eachother n now ...updt sooon eagerlyyy waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
plz don't abbort child '
tum babhe ki vaja se maan ko change kar sakti ho
plz don't abort chid plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start
loved it
con soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing upadate...
n plz don't let Geet abort the child...

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