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pearl_warrior

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Loved the update...It was nice but short..

So,I guess Maneet's 1st meeting is going to be at Starbucks!!

Continue soon..😊

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Sumaiyah

@summikhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: pearl_warrior
Loved the update...It was nice but short..
So,I guess Maneet's 1st meeting is going to be at Starbucks!!
Continue soon..😊

Maybe... *evil laugh* 😉

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sapna sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

nice update

loved it

thnx for the pm

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

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Sumaiyah

@summikhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

CHAPTER 2

Maan: One black coffee- sugarfree. Thanks. How much?

Maan ordered at the counter since Adi didn't feel like loosing his sleep with all the caffeine, even though he knew it would be a long night with the way things were going with Maan. But he didn't know that the next five minutes many lives would change.

*THUD* came a loud sound that made everyone turn their attention towards the two strangers who just crashed into each other and the coffee went flying everywhere on the girl's clothes.

The touch was magical. They both felt a shock run up their spines but decided to ignore the unknown sensation. As hard as they tried though, they couldn't move as they were lost in depths of each other's eyes.

Pinky: WOW Geet! Yeh tho wohi filmy scene hogaya! Kamaal hai yaar!

Pinky brought both of them out of their dream world and Maan set Geet straight. And that's when the Hoshiarpur Express took full flight (sorry just had to say that 😆)

Geet: How dare you touch me!? Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe haat lagane ki?? Tum jaante bhi ho ke mein kon hoon?? Ek minute mein tumhari chutti kara sakti hoon mein. Ek phone call se tumhari zindagi badal doongi samjhe! Ek chutki mein tumhara sab kuch khatam kar doongi! Itni raat gaye akeli ladkiyon ko dekh kar cher na shuru hogai?? Aaj kal ke ladkon yahi haal hai! Na khud ki izzat ka parwa hai inhe aur na...

She was stopped midway when...

Maan: CHUP! BILKUL CHUP! Mein itni der se tumhari bakwas sunne jaa raha hoon iska matlab yeh nahi hai ke tum jo bhi chaho bol sakti ho! Khabar daar jo tumne mere character par ungli uthaya tho! Meine aaj tak kisi ladki ki taraf nazar utha kar bhi nahi dekha aur tum cher char ki baat kar rahi ho?? Tumhari ghalti thi ki tum dekh kar nahi chal rahi thi. Pata nahi tum ladkiyon apni duniya mein rehna itna shok kyun hai. Me toh bas tumhe girne se bacha raha tha. Ghalti hogayi! Gir jaati toh acha hota. Thori akal aur tameez toh aajati. Par tum kya jaano tameez kya cheez hoti hai. Aur tum kya mera sab kuch khatam karo gi? Mere paas tho vaise hi kuch nahi hai. Par tum to kisi raiz baap ki beti hogi jo...

That did it. Geet could not take another word. She looked into his eyes with her teary ones. He couldn't say another word. He felt like he could read straight through her soul and feel her pain. The pain that he may have caused her. Or was it just salt on the wounds? He didn't know why but something was pricking him seeing her like that. She had the same confusion. She didn't know why his words affected her so much when the world was saying things like that to her throughout her whole life.

She didn't know why but the only words she could form right now were the ones she never said to anyone else.

Geet: Sorry. It was my fault. I should not have come here. Chal Pinky. Let's go back. Everyone's probably waiting for us. I've got to get a change of clothes too.

She didn't meet his gaze again even though she knew that he was staring at her. He watched her retreating form as the two girls left the coffee shop. He felt the need to go after her. He had to admit that he was in awe of this girl. He didn't know girls still had that kind of self-respect in today's world. He thought all girls to be attention hungry and only dying to be touched. But he decided to ignore his conscience and go back to ordering his coffee again since he had a headache too now.

Precap: This was the first time in years that someone has made Geet Handa cry.

Why can't I get those eyes out of my thoughts??

and More on Geet's past

Okey Dokey guyss... I don't know how this one was. I hope it was longer this time. Please leave lots and lots of comments and likes! I need all the motivation I can get!

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Edited by summikhan - 13 years ago

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pearl_warrior

@pearl_warrior

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Awesome..

My prediction was true..

But Maneet meeting started on a filmy note , changed to an explosion n ended on a sad note..No problem..Love sparks already seem to be flying..Though less noticeable..

Loved Maan..Being a rich fellow, he didn't boast about it since it was not what he earned..

Wonder what Geet will do if he turns up for her show's auditions or something like that..😕

Geet seems to have a terrible past.Loved the way Maan connected to her through her pain.

Waiting for the story to unfold..

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Awesum part..

loved their first meet..

so maan's words touched geet's past wounds..

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

awesome update...

its really amazing atlast dey met...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...