MG~FF: Lights, Camera, Action!- Note pg 16 9/3/12 - Page 5

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Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK

omg summi!!!

This is such a awesome FF. Just caught up with ur updates...GReat Concept! Feeling bad for geet 😭
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CHAPTER 5

Recap:

Geet: Nahi Pinky. Mujhe nahi jaana. Tujhe jaana hai toh jaa, mera mood nahi hai.

Pinky: Arey aise kaise mood nahi hai? Mein akele kaisa jaon? Tu chal bas. Waise bhi tera din bohot kharab ghuzra hain.

Pinky pulled Geet out to the car and drove to the club.

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Geet sat in the passenger seat indulged in her own thoughts while Pinky whistled along to the song playing in the car.

Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4_0Ayvli5iw (listen to this please, I just thought it was funny)

Lyrics:

Ek Ladki Chahiye Khaas Khaas

Par Ho Woh M.A Paas Paas

Laakhon Mein Ek Haseena Ho

Har Waqt Rahe Mere Aas Paas

Uska Standard Bhi High Chahiye

Mujhko Aisi Hi Fi Ek Lugayi Chahiye

Mujhko Aisi Hi Fi Ek Lugayi Chahiye

Ek Ladka Chahiye Khaas Khaas

Ho L.L.B.A Paas Paas

Laakhon Mein Ek Deewana Ho

Har Waqt Rahe Mere Aas Paas

Uska Standard Bhi High Chahiye

Mujhko Aisa Hi Fi Jandmahi Chahiye

Mujhko Aisa Hi Fi Jandmahi Chahiye

Gol Gol Chehra Ho Aankhen Bilauri

Allahmiya Bhej Koyi Roop Ki Tijori

Gol Gol Chehra Ho Aankhen Bilauri

Allahmiya Bhej Koyi Roop Ki Tijori

Ho Mere Rabba Karishma Dikha De

Kisi Dilwale Se Kundli Mila De

Uska Standard Bhi High Chahiye

Mujhko Aisa Hi Fi Jandmahi Chahiye

Mujhko Aisa Hi Fi Jandmahi Chahiye

Dil Mera Kehta Hain Ladka Ho Aisa

Saare Shaher Mein Na Ho Koi Waisa

Hai Sone Ka Bangla Ho Chaandi Ki Gaadi

Lakh Sawa Lakh Ki Usne Baandhi Ho Saadi

Rab Di Kasam Nahin Chodunga Mauka

Jaane Na Doonga Mile Ek Baari

Uska Standard Bhi High Chahiye

Mujhko Aisi Hi Fi Ek Lugayi Chahiye

Mujhko Aisi Hi Fi Ek Lugayi Chahiye

Ek Ladka Chahiye Khaas Khaas

Ho L.L.B.A Paas Paas

Laakhon Mein Ek Deewana Ho

Har Waqt Rahe Mere Aas Paas

Uska Standard Bhi High Chahiye

Mujhko Aisa Hi Fi Jandmahi Chahiye

Mujhko Aisa Hi Fi Jandmahi Chahiye

Hi Fi Ek Lugayi Chahiye

"Geet tujhe kaisa ladka chahiye?" Pinky asked in all the excitement of the song.

Geet gave a stern look towards Pinky and replied harshly, "Pinky tujhe pata hai mujhe in sab cheezo mein koi interest nahi hai. Puri dunya ek jaisi hoti hai aur mard bhi aise hi hote hain. Sab paison ke peeche baaghte hai.. issi ka naam success and happiness hota hai. No one deals with matters of the heart anymore."

Pinky: Geet tu bhi na. Chal chor, club aagaya hai. Tu andar jaa, main car park karke aati hoon.

Geet: Nahi Pinky, mein akele andar nahi jaa rahi. Tere yaheen bahar wait kar loongi. Tu jaldi se aana.

Pinky: Geettt... tu itna kyun dar rahi hai? Tu Geet Handa hain! Ab andar jaa aur jaake enjoy kar. Mein bas 5 minute mein aayi.

Accepting defeat, Geet dragged herself inside the night club. As soon as she came in, she caught the eyes of many lustful eyes. She felt uncomfortable and decided to head towards the bar at the back and wait for Pinky to come.

A man on the dance floor watched her route until she reached her seat and walked over to her with a smirk. He stood right in front of Geet, with his back towards her. All of a sudden he fell backwards as if he were pushed by someone. Geet tried pushing him off after she realized what had just happened.

Man: Oh ... I'm really sorry. I didn't mean to.

Geet: It's ok. I'm fine.

Man: Of course it's not ok. You know what, I'll buy you a cocktail for compensation?

Geet: Uhh.. no thanks. I don't drink ... especially with strangers.

She tried moving away a little from him while her eyes searched for Pinky, but the man ordered for her anyway.

Man: Fine then. I'll buy you a mocktail, just for my mistake.

Geet gave in seeing that the man was adamant and she was not in the right state of mind to be arguing right now. Little did she know that the man had indeed ordered a cocktail with extra nasha in it. (sorry.. not a drinker or anything, so don't exactly know what makes you completely lose your senses in one glass.) He gave the glass to Geet and she starting drinking it while the man gave her a lustful glance with a nasty smirk on his face just waiting for her to lose control.

Meanwhile...

Maan had been sitting at the side, while Adi was on the dance floor. He was also eyeing the angel that had walked in and went straight to the back at the bar. He knew she was Geet Handa and thought it was typical showbiz behavior to accept a drink from a complete stranger and give in so easily. But he was surprised to see her hesitance. He couldn't help but feel a sting in his heart, seeing her with another man.

Maan Self-Thought: Maan, tu pagal hogaya hai kya. Apne aap par kaabu rak. Tujhe kyun problem ho rahi hai agar wo kisi aur ke saath hai. Tu itni fikar kyun kar raha hai uski? Who uska boyfriend bhi toh hosakta hai. Nahi, he can't be. Look at the way he's looking at her. He looks like some dirty sleaze bag. Agghhh ... MAAN! Hosh mein aaja! Nazar hata apni.. Hata.. Maann ... Nazar hata!

Maan was having a fight with himself in his head, when he saw Geet getting a little tipsy and the man started to hold her from the waist. He watched as the guy started pulling her to the dance floor. But when he saw Geet's resistance even in this drunk state, he couldn't hold himself back anymore. He charged towards them and punched the guy right in the nose.

Man: Hey! What's the big idea?! Why the heck did you hit me?

Maan: Because you're touching MY FIANCE!

Maan gritted through his teeth scaring the guy away. He didn't know why such authority and possessiveness came over him. He didn't know why he wanted to protect her and lie for her, but he reasoned it as human instincts. He caught hold of Geet as she was about to fall with all the drunkenness taking a toll on her. He walked her out of the club and called Adi to find out where the car was since he had the spare keys also. He knew he couldn't leave Geet here like this, and he wasn't enjoying much there either.

He tried walking her to the car, but she was too tipsy to think straight, let alone walk. He eventually picked her up when he had to cross the road. She flung her arms out in the air, making it hard for Maan to walk straight.

Maan: Geet aise nahi karo. Haath neeche karo. Geett!

Geet replied in a talli tone: Kya hai? Tum mujhe daant kyun rahe ho? Neeche utaro mujhe! Abhi! Mujhe, mujhe ... umm ... mein kya bol rahi thi? .. Haan! Tum, tumm ... *She put her hand on her chin as if in deep thought.

Maan couldn't help but smile at this sherni.

Maan mumbled to himself: Aur mujhe laga yeh sirf hosh mein itni akdoo hain.

Geet: Akdoo??! Tumne mujhe ... mujhe akdoo kaha?? Utharo mujhe abhi!

They had reached the passenger seat of the car now and put her down so he could open the door. But Geet lost her balance and fell on the floor. Maan held his head in frustration. This girl was driving him crazy. And on top of that Geet started crying like a baby.

Geet while crying: Tumne mujhe gira diya! Mein tumse ghussa. Jao!

Maan sat down next to her seeing her childish antics.

Maan: Geet tum yahaan kaise baith sakti ho aur woh bhi akele. Chalo utho. Mein tumhe ghar drop kar deta hoon.

He tried holding her arms to make her stand, but she snapped out and sat back down with a pout in protest.

Geet: Nahii. Mein nahi jaongi! Mein tumhari shikayat karoongi ... Haan! Apne babaji se boloongi ke tum mujhe kitnaaa kitnaaa tung karte ho. *she said while stretching her arms out to exaggerate how much*

Her face lit up all of a sudden with that evil idea. The twinkle did not go unnoticed.

Maan looked at her in amusement and decided to play along, since he was enjoying this innocent sherni like this.

Maan: acha ... kisse shikayat karogi? Apne babaji se? Toh tum apne mama papa se jaake bolo na, who sahi se mujhe sazaa denge phir.

With a dipped head and tears starting to form in her eyes, Geet replied in a low voice, "Mere mama papa nahi hai. Meine unhe kho diya. Jab mein bohott choti tab.Tumhe pata hai ke kitna dard hota hai jab aap ke paas koi nahi ho aapke sar pe haath rakne wala. Jab koi aapko support naa kare aur aap iss puri duniya se akele larthe ho ... pata yaha.. yaha pe kitnaaa dard hota hai *she pointed to his heart* ... Nahi pata na aapko. Mein bataa ti hoon *she said now pointing to herself and again stretching her hands wider and wider*. Itna.. itna nahi.. isse bhi zyaada takleef hoti hai. Aapko pata hai?

She looked at him like his answer would make all the pain go away. Before Maan could respond, he felt a drop of rain fall on his face.

Precap: Please choose 1

Option 1: Maan is stuck with Geet in the car and decides to take her home because she can't tell him where she lives.

Option 2: Rain dance with still talli Geet

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Edited by summikhan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update :)
first talli dance and then take home... maan's home :D

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