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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

Awesome Update

Loved it the way you describe the Maan feelings
Precap is scary bcoz maan have fault not new born child ..


thanxu...n did u heard dat saying
sumtyms childr have to pay fr parents dead 🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz

ohkk now Geet will show attitude.. she has too. anyways thanks for saving her .. well love Maan's speech.. lets c.


speach...
LoLzzz 😆
luvd it missy
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: icy_magma

Awesome yaar...
Kya update hai... 😃 too good...
Loved the way geet talked to maan...ek minute ke liye laga li shayad geet maan ko maaf kar de gi...but yaar her attitude...just loved it...
Geet ka reaction towards the baby...I think ki she's pretending to hate her own child...ofcourse woh zyada din tak nahi chalega...geet's character is not that like..I am positive ki she will feed the baby...
Geet ka yeh attitude maan ke towards thora aur extreme mein badlega...looking forward to it...
Waise are you planing to bring in a competitor for maan in the story...you know ek aisa banda whose everything maan's not 😉
Amazing update... 👏
Jaldi se doosra update post karna...pwease *pouting*
Continue soon...
Thanks for any future pm... 😆


hehehehehe i luv ur pouts look supr cute doin dat 😃
n abt Geet i realy cant say nythin as of now
n xtreame...heheh u'll see babes n new entry
abhi tak to nahi 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29

Awesome.
Finally maan told his feelin to geet.
Bt as per geet's pov she is right.
Geet wil feed baby na?


update main pata chal jaayega yaara 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

Hmmmph Maan keeps saying you don't understand you will not understand to Geet
but just like that he never understood Geet and he still hasn't I think
be tough Geet !


i think u'll lyk dis new changed Geet 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

No comments divzi till u give us something happy i am on strike..aaj tak is SS mein ek bhi happy scene aaya hai..nahi..so main comments nahi.haan..


nahiii
aisa nahi ho sakta
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: monica9feb

awsome updateee... lovly confession... bt feeling bad for lil angel.. maan is rgt isme baby ki to koi mistake nai h na... plz baby k liye hi sahi geet maan ko 1 sath rhne dena.. nd agr geet baby ko feed nai krati to wo bahut glt hoga... maan ne bahut glt kiya to uski punishment sirf use milni chahiye... i hope isme baby suffer na ho...


aowww
i agree wid dis
baby ka galati sachi nahi hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

i know she is suffering bcoz of him

but dat doesnt mean dat she will leave d baby like dis...

common yaar she is her child too

how can a mother do this

i know he always said dat its his child not There

but dat doesnt mean she will do like this

hope she will feed her afterall its her child


hmmm NO COMMENTS on dis yaara
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

That was amazing..

his helplessness were well depicted in these words..
But this reaction was what i expected from geet..
I think geet will forward some condition to feed the baby..


hmmm may be 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

A Life For You
Part 13


Have you done it'.

Please you can go now

Geet'he muttered in helplessness'feeling his life again getting drifted away from him

you...you killed Geet...Mr. Khurana...a shaking voice of Geet came from behind and he closed his eyes to calm his frustration his anger


Maan felt dejected as if he dint knew this Geet ever

As if she was some stranger in front of him

And left her hurt and visible pain lingering in his eyes looking into her eyes directly as if he was searching for his Geet in those dark blank hazels

Geet'he mustered the courage to speak again but she just kept her face under the quilt hiding it from him not willing to give up

He came out of the room shattered, lost, broken, the feeling of rejection

The feeling when your love is not reciprocated the same way pierced his heart into million needles and he felt lifeless

He came like a lifeless body without soul the room and sat thumped on the bench next

Lost in his own

Living the times he lost without acknowledging her unbound love

The time he never cared for her

What to repent now when you have nothing left with you

His is getting the same he gave
Coldness, indifference, attitude, ignorance...

That's what he gave her always till now...
Now he knew how that felt...how it pricked one's heart when the person you love don't pay any head towards it
when it doesn't get reciprocated the same way you love the other


he sat there closed eyes bleeding heart...tears seem to gave up long from his empty eyes...
Eyes which were manically searching for that one glimpse of love which always oozed out
but things not the same now

a hollow crater was ready to engulf him in deep sorrows...in deep regrets of remorse
the pain he never felt...the longing she always protected him from
but now she is not there for him...to protect him from this tormenting longing
to embrace him close to her heart like always

she has gone far...tooo far
or shall I say...he sent him this far from himself

a sweet painful smile crept on his perfect lips remembering the happy times they spent...
The time they spent together

there love, there nok jhok, their passion

HER devotion and HIS betrayal

she always gave in...Always obliged herself with him selflessly
always

but now
she is not the same...
She is not my Geet
i killed my Geet with my own bloody filthy hands...
I ruined it everything
all because of me

he smiles bitterly at fate...
That's what I deserve...that's my punishment...that my life now...
This hatred

but why it hurt so much...
I always gave her the same
how might she have lived all the while with this when I am not able to give up to it with a single day

she never complained...
She never denied even after suffering so much...going through so much all these years
than what right i have to cry upon this

I should not...I will not
I will go through whatever My Geet went with the same smile she always bestowed upon me without a word

I will do whatever it take me to keep her with me in front of my eyes
let it be my life only


I will...

He smile determined and opens his eyes just to see a nervous nurse sweating

yaa...is there anything I have to bring for the child or Geet

sir...wo...wo...baby needs feed...and man is denying to feed the baby...nurse gulped hard

and the little piece of information left maan's ground snatch away from under his feet

he felt as if his world spinning

Geet...she denied...why she is doing this to that angel...uski kyaa galati...

Sab mere kaaran ho raha hai na baby...sabb...Am sorry...his heart cried

and he hurriedly made his way back to Geet's ward...
Just to witness the sight making him more unknown to the present reality...

Geet was sitting calmly on bed fiddling with her blackberry, smiling playing games...

He closed his eyes to gather the power to remain his conscious...

And slowly made his way towards her
geet...he whispered silently to get her attention but in vain

geet...baby needs your dead...she is really weak jaan...she is hungry since long
please...

So what can I do...she answered still looking at her cell

he closed his eyes not knowing what to do how to make her realize his need
what's her duty
what's that little one's craving

geet please meri galation ki sazza uss nanhi sii jaan ko matt do

maine gunah kie main manta hu

magar uski kyaa galati thi jo usse yeh silhaa mill raha hai

she closed her eyes in utter frustration and blurted out

what's wrong with you and all the doctors haan'.

Mr. Khurana get my words clear at once please I am not feeding your child

Make any other arrangement I am really not interested

Please you may leave now

Geet she is your baby as well

Tumhaara khoon hai wo'

Humara pyaar

Wo sirf tumahara bacha hai maan

She is your bloody waaris for whom you used me'she said in utter disgust and moved her face away

He felt hurt of her words but what could he say when he knew she was right in it

She was always right only he was the one who stood wrong always

Geet please'

I'll do whatever you want'

But please baby needs you jaan

She needs a mothery love'your feed

Please do it'please

What the hell you want Mr Khurana

Shall I disgrace my figure for that child of yours

If you think so

Sorry to say you are utterly wrong Mr. Khurana

She is not his geet

she defiantly can't be his geet

Maan never felt this helplessness to which extent Geet made him feel today

He bends down on his knees and folded his hands

The Man who never bowed infront of God was begging for something infront of the lady who ONCE loved her more than God

Life is full of irony

It gives us what we never expect and it also give us what we never dreamt of

Geet please I beg you

Don't do this to that angel

Please

Mr. Khurana are you moving out or shall I call someone to throw you out

Ohk fine you don't wanna go

Let it be I am going'she started getting of the bed but hr high sedative made her dizzy and she thumped back on bed

Freak that's what you can always give me helplessness'she uttered with closed eyes

And maan felt he could no longer remain in this place

And made his way out

Without saying a word or anything

He went away from the room wanted to go away from everything

Every damn thing right now

And here he saw the idol of god and unknowing to himself his feet took him towards

There

Baba ji Geet aapko bahutt maanti thi na

Ab kaa pata nahi'main khud nahi jaanta iss geet ko

Magar meri Geet ko aap par bahut bharosa tha baba ji

Please meri bhi madad kijiye na

Maine aaj taka apse kuch nahi maanga magar

Aaj ek dua maang raha hu

Return my baby's mumma to her

Please baba ji

He closed his eyes in shear surrender not knowing what else to do

Praying for the first time infront of someone whom he never cared

Whom he thought less than a metal idol

Mr. Khurana wo Mrs. Khurana agreed to feed the baby

Nurse's words felt like heaven to maan

And he opened his eyes with faith

And rushed towards the Children ICU

To notice the most magical sceane of his life

The little pink cotton ball cuddled up close to his princess's chest

Her feeding the little baby

Her holding the angel in her hands

His contentment knew no bounds

He made his way towards them as the baby was done feeding and geet was trying to lie the baby down on her bed again

Geet'that's all he could utter in happiness


but his whole happiness again shattered in a second

Don't have high hopes Mr. Khurana'my dress was all wet due to your Child

I started lactating and doctors also said that it is better for me to feed the baby

As it will help me cope up my health soon

And am really bored of this plac I need to go back mansion as soon as possible

It suffocates me

Saying so she was about to leave a baffled Maan when she turned and looked towards him with a smirk

And as of now Mr. Khurana

Don't you think you should payback as I did your wish?

To feed your kid

It's time for you to return my dead Mr. Khurana


Precap: Payback 😲😳


Prev:Part 12 Next:Part 14


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