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Posted: 13 years ago
i dont like it...there is no maan...n when they agin will meet face to face...kab tak bechari aise tarpegi ...plz plz plz want maaneet moments...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz


hehehe sahi hai sabka wideee dscrptin hehe 😆
Maan ka jab aayga Maan hi chayega na so abhi Geet ko seh lo 😉



sachchi... thank u thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely...

she loves him so much...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing updates 👏
thanks for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.. Divzi aap Goldie congrats yaaar!hmmm ...nice update with happy bhai bahens love ..loved it!poor baby missing her maan so much!
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 19
lovely part...
the kids are so sweet...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guyz
i don't know how many will come to know about this post
but i am here to do my job
Di not well so she wont be able to update for 1 or 2 days
i dont know by when but she will be discharged by tues so she will update after that 😊

wish for her
sorry for the delay and thanx for cooperating
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates...
awww poor geet missing maan...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Heart Of Heart
Part 20

Geet tried to calm herself the whole day

And she did

But now

She can't do it anymore she hugged sleeping sam silently and sobbed silently snuggling closer to her

Whispering to herself

I miss you'Love you

Come soon na please

She sobbed holding sam tight'crushing herself into her

How could sam have slept peacefully knowing her gudia is crying silently holding her shattered heart tight in her embrace..!!..

Sam dint opened her eyes but brought her closer cocooning her in her safe secure embrace

To hide her from the big world outside

Baba ji keep your good eye on my little gudia she is too naive to understand her own heart even then she is madly in love with a person who couldn't even recognize her mere presence around her

Please baba ji always protect her from every sorrow every grief

Keep her in your embrace forever

Please baba ji..mehar karo

Sam wished silently in her heart shedding bloody teas in her closed eyes

When a lone tear made his way out geet instantly looked above to find sam's cloudy misty eyes

Sam'sam kya hua

Why you crying'are you missing that monkey who dint even managed to call us

Forgot about us in his family trip

Geet asked worried forgetting about her own sorrows

While sam just stare at her gudia in disbelieve a second before she was crying remembering her own love and now she is all worried for me

Sam just couldn't stop the sweet smile enhancing her beauty and shook her head and kissed geet's hairs

Let him come babyness we both will kill crack him to nuts'sam winked trying lighten the atmosphere

As if he is not crack already..geet giggles

That is also right princess isn't it'sam giggled with her

And there nonstop chatter patter again starts with their silly fights, cribbings and manifyings

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Bro just one call please'just one'I haven't gave a single call since we landed here and it have been a day now'please have some mercy on you poor brother na'dev begged to an ever ignorant maan

Shehazadian would kill me you know na..he shudder with fear

It would be good na'are sweet mother earth will not have to bear you anymore'Maan winked and kept moving ahead

Dev made a O mouth at his brothers audacity to say this infront of him

What'what do you mean hain'dev ran behind him owing an answer

I mean exactly the same you heard

Please na bro'you know them

I don't

Then you must know them

Yaa know your jangli billi's

Bro'

And here Maan bang shut his hotel room on his face and enters his room for some peace shouting from inside

Now just get lost for some time I need some rest as well

Bro'.at least give me the cell I need to call

Or give me the permission'Please'dev banged the door hard but in vein

Sighing he left cribbing

Sheeeshhh how much this idiot can crib on a single matter god knows'and he get up from his bed and starts unpacking his luggage

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Dadi am I a khurana or not'dev paced dadi's room deliberately owing an explanation

Making Annie and Dadi giggle

Let me think'dadi made a thoughtful face enough to irritate Dev to core'hmm your full name is Dev Singh Khuran na..she asked not sure

While annie giggle saying'hmm yess dadi

So yess you are a khurana'dadi finely manages to answer

And burst out laughing with annie

I dont think so'See you both even making fun of me'dev made a baby face and sit on couch holding his head in his palms

What do you want little khurana'dadi asked in amusement

Wanna call shehzadian you know them na..they gonna kill me the time I land Delhi'he cribbed

Aoww my baby missing his friends'but beta it must be mid night na'dadi patted dev's cheeks

Dev thought for a while and finally decides'so can I call them in morning he asked with a pleading face

Off course beta you can

Pakka'dev asked in excitement

Promise sweetheart atleast give me a smile back now'dadi asked kissing his cheeks

Now can we all go and unpack are bags'

We on holiday I guess..dadi said a little annoyed expression

Hmm we guess so'the two said in unison with a smirky face

And climbed her tickling making her roll laughing'

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Maan took his wallet out and took the metal ring in his hand and slowly caresses it smiling

So mishthy you know we all in Switzerland for holidays

Dev ate all my head up blabbering about those two gundians of his

They really get on my nerves now'

you know I never saw them but the way Dev describes his shehzadian I guess they wild cats are more than dangerous

if you find them anywhere na

beware don't go near them they might hurt you

you too fragile you know'he chuckles to himself

ohkiz how much you distract me you little girl..let me work

you know I have this whole back to unpack and set in the cupboard

even you not here to do this..wish you should be here

will you ever be here to do all this for me'

miss you..where you'

do you miss me as well..but don't know why but I wonder you to miss me the same way I do

he smiled sadly and kissed the band again and swiped it in his wallet

and starts back to his work'.

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Gudia sachi muchi I tried but you know bro dint allowed me to make any call

He swiped my cell and I was left with nothing

Even now I am calling from dadi's cell

Please na sorry

And that hitler..even she's not talking to me'

Are maaf bhi kar do na

Am sorry.. Am sorry..Am sorry..Am sorry..Am sorry..Am sorry..Am sorry..Am sorry..

Dev pleaded for the nth time

And started singing maniacly

Humdum mere maan bhi jaao kehna mere pyaar ka'

He screamed in his own melody making Sam and Geet laugh rolling holding his stomach

Letting Dev breathe a sigh relief

Hushhh at least forgiven

Guess so'Geet said teasingly still laughing

Acha hain ok that wasn't that bad either'dev fought back feeling offended

Yaa yaa ask us..sam answered rolling her eyes

Oyee heloo'dev flt offended

You want forgiveness..geet aked in her full fighter form

Yess'dev answered meekly

Then listen to us

As if I can ever ignore'dev pouted

Making sam and geet laugh more at his plight

Miss you'dev answered making baby face

Miss you more'both the girls said in unison

Haan haan you two enjoying movies and saying you missing me'did anyone asked me out..dev changed the topic

As if you called us while staring at those gorian on beach'sam answered teasingly

While dev's eyes just would pop out any moment

What

What'how do you two know'dev asked looking here and there

Oyee we not there ok'so let it be'sam rolled her eyes

But we two know you very well'geet winked giving hi5 to sam

While dev sighed in relief

I thought meri chori pakdi gayi'did you hiitler di around

Does she know about my mischief here'dev asked in hope

While poor sam just hide her pain in a smile

No jhalle she is not round and she don't know about your drooling sessions on those half clothing girls on swizz beaches'sam answered meekly

Oyee heloo you called for us or to enquire about di's where abouts'Geet put on the fight to hide more heart break to her sam

Wo'wo..obviously for you two

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There endless call came to an end when maan knocked on dev's room

Dev are you coming or shall we three move all alone without you

We already getting late and you

I really wonder what taking you this long to get ready..maan screamed banging hard the door

Bro just coming wait for a while'he answred back

Ok call you two afterwards now'need to go bie..miss you two...love you...take care little brats'and hangs up the call'making his way out


Precap: Maaneet 😉


Prev:Part 19 Next:Part 21


sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry FOR ALL THE LATENESS AND ALSO FOR GIVING IT TILL HERE

I WASN'T REALLY ABLE TO TYPE MORE 😕 ME STILL NOT ALLOWED TAKE STRESS

and sorry sweeties i couldnt reply to all so i didnt replied to any

but

THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LOVE YOU PEOPLE SHOWED


so now give me my comments and like

will be waiting

AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM OTHERWISE

❤️Luv Divzi

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago

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