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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritusoni2233

geet loves maan too much na...


geet k dimag ka kuch part muje b dede na divz...

1 gante me papr finish kr diya

wowww

waiting 4 next


mereko to mine de fir de dungi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24

Awesome update dear... 🤗

Geet is too much... Sample...hehehe.. .Apne exam ki nahi Maan ke exam ki soch rahi hei...



sampleee LoLzzz 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princes939

Awsome...pm me!!!!
Ab next 14 part!!!ab tw dono ko mila do!!!
Cant wait 4 next


wait babes...wait 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

THIS GEET IS FANTASTIC

SHE IS SO YOUNG BUT HER LOVE IS SO STRONG
SHE KNOWS HER MIND AND NOTHING ANYBODY SAYS WILL CHANGE IT
LOVE THE WAY SHE WISHED HIM BEST OF LUCK EVERYDAY AND HOW SHE TRIED TO SOLVE HIS PROBLEM

WHAT WILL SHE DURING THE HOLIDAYS


aowww thnxxx lotss yaara
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kamiya


loved it
geet is so sweet n cute
she loves maan so much

waiting for the next update to know that in the holidays how geet will meet maan or see him

thanks for the lovely update d for pm too


holidaysss... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

awesome n beautiful update...

amazing...hw she let him knw d answer...i want maan to knw abt geet...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


hehehe dats my fav part as well
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Posted: 13 years ago
Owesome update
Thanks for Pm
Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 13
awesome part...
Geet is so lovely and so cute...
gosh Maan ko pata hota...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Heart Of Heart
Part 14

geet was super sad that day
sam tried her level best to cheer her up but nothing seems in place she was not feeling like going back to school as she knew she would not get to see him for a month now

how is she suppose to take her days now...how will she survive without watching him
even if it is all from far but...she feels him beside her

how will she be able to...

beta ji tussi theek to ho na'aaj ka exam nahi aata hai ache se'aise kyu hai mere bach ka munh

maa asked worriedly feeding her dahi shaker'

while papaji was just consoling patting her cheeks lovingly in concer'

beta ji kuch nahi hota'mera sher puttar ghabraa kyu raha hai

dekhna sara ka sara exam chutkion main khatam kar k wapis ghar aa jaayegi meri sherni

sam was a mute spectator knowing the real reason of her coldness, uski khaamoshi ke peeche chupa dard

but she knew nothing could have been done to make her feel better just her everyday dose of a glimpse of her heartbeat

but to tryn lighten the atmosphere she plastered a chirpy face and came downstirs running

ooo am late'am late

but guess what aaj iss alarm clock ne noise pollution nahi kia

she hugged geet and got maa papaji"s blessings

dekh na isne to humse bhi dhang se baat nahi ki'kuch hua hai kya'maa asked worried

nahi maa bass issko na ek zorrr se lagne waali hai or kuch'sam again made a vain attempt to lighten the atmosphere


koi mere bache ko kuch nahi kahega...papaji hugged her protectively


but nothing was working for geet so with a sigh breath she took geet with her and made there way out and started paddling again towards school

The auckward silence the threatening silent sobs of her gudia was worst for her to bear

She asked in concer'gudia yeh kab tak or kyu chalega'

basss kar na'

yaa to use bol de'nahi to'move on baby..

You know I can't see you like this

Not for yourself but at least for the one who love you

aaj tune maa papaji ko nahi dekha'

But nothing came anywhere close to the dumb ears of geet

she was numb immune to her surroundings

she kept paddling lost'in her own sorrows'in the fear what will she do the whole month

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Today even sam dint say a word and let her take her breath calmly watching her maan from far

Again from behind the tree..

Again with the same longing'

Again without being noticed...


how much she wished he might have given a single glimpse to her today

a single gesture that he could even feel her

a single acknowledgment of being loved


but sighing she knew nothing would happen in this way


Sam stood there watching her gudia lost with a lone tear in her eye

She knew her inner turmoil but couldn't do anything to calm her furiously beating heart


After a while when he again drift away from there without noticing her

She came out of the bushes

Again like always


But today one thing was missing and that was nothing but the contentment she had after wishing him always

After having a single glimpse the life she had on her face was missing

Sam looked at her in worried concern

Gudia you fine?...she kept a supportive hand on her shoulder

And geet just nodded in positive and made a way out towards the campus silently

Examination hall was also more than silent not just for geet but for other students as well and even teacher was concerned looking at her dull face

not just sam but each and ever classmate of hers was missing there geet

the old chirpy geet

even sir was missing his brat today


Geet'what happen sweety'you looking off lately is everything fine'teacher asked her

Geet just nodded again like she was doing it since morning

Wo since morning I dint heard a word from this birdy so was missing that'sir tryn lighten her with a little chuckle

And geet gave her best smile to him saying'sir was just a little down with health so'

Take care baby'he patted her head and left

Examination was the worst for her she wasn't able to scribble a single word in conscious

Just pens it down absentmindedly, lost

Again like always she stood up making her way towards his class lending her papers back to invigilator

And

Again waits for him like always

But this time'she was looking nothing more than a lifeless corpse struggling to live

Sam was getting hyper worried looking at her like this was never in hers and here she was nothing more than a corpse

She tryn make her lighten by cracking silly jokes pulling legs

But nothing worked

Dev was getting worried looking at his gudia like this was new for her

His lively gudia struggling to breath under her choking sobs

Was killing both sam and dev from inside

They gave their best but nothing works

Whole day the poor soul was lost watching her life'enrapturing her soul with his essence

Filling her senses with his site

Just living and gathering her to live the entire next one month

And finally when nothing seems to work

They finally made their way back to home in a hope she'll feel better away


Precap: Silent Cries 😭 😭


Prev:Part 13 Next:Part 15


sooo tell me hwz it

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I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM OTHERWISE


❤️ Luv Divzi

Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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