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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Just read all the parts in one go😛...awesome...
mindblowing part...
looking forward to know the next...


thnxuuu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

till part 10
lovely story...
Geet loves Maan and is also a fan who happens to be Dev's bro but no one knows about it...
Sam is so lovely and caring...
Dev is very nice and naughty...
so to Maan Dev's friends are monsters and to Geet and Sam Dev's bro is Khados Singh Khurana...
cont soon dear...
pm me plz and sent the buddy invite...


hehehe yess mosters and cruell singh khurana
i too love sam n dev as well 😉
but maaneet suprrr rocking 😳
n thnxu
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Posted: 13 years ago

Heart Of Heart
Part 11

Geet paddled her cycle still angry

Geet sorry na'breakfast to karne diya kar'sam made a baby complaining face

I was geeting late'you know it'geet made a baby angry face

Yaa yaa'for your drooling session'sam teased making faces

Geet gave her a deadly glare

And both burst out laughing all the while paddling the way to school

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Bro...yeh kya hai...dev asked pointing towards the band with which his bro was continuously fiddling

ring band...he answered lost in himself

ring band...kiska...dev asked all confused

mishthy...
he muttered unconsciously drifting off to that time again
he was just nibbling her lips more of a peck with heavy head...dizzy, tipsy...kneading his fingers tightly in her hand

pecking her lips..feeling her warmth with himself when her ring band itself came into his hand he looked at it still placing his lips on right place'on her soft supple one

he thought of making her wear it again but then some unknown fear made him do it's reverse

totally not MSK style

and he swiftly sneaked it in his denim's pocket
he smiled at his foolishness to drift away someone's commodity like this.

MSK ne ab chori bhi shuru kar di...very good MSK...yeh ladki ne to abhi se pagal kar dia...but anyways...she was my mishthy'
waise'

thi to bahut meethi...and again shock his head for his idioticy thinking of her like this
but his sweet dreamy session when dev screamed

what..
Mishthy...
Bro...don't tell me you have a gf and I don't even know
dev made a silly angry face and looked away

nautanki fir shuru...maan murmured just to himself not willing make him more angry
bro...
bro..
tell me na...who's she...

is she hot...is she'dev winked...

ohhh were you with her last night...he smiled cheekily

but just an angry glare from a frustrated brother was enough to shut him up with all his questionnaire

dev looked away from the window knowing better to drop this topic or else bro gonna eat him up

you know bro...gudia have the same ring band
she doesn't remove it at all..
he blubbered without thinking...

she wants her prince charming to were this for her...he chuckles a little and move his gaze towards just to witness an angry lion

tune fir apni unn pagal gundion ka jaap shuru kar dia'

those so called shehzadion ke names lia...

ek to tujhe jhelna mushkil
n wo
wo to monsters hai...
or wo teri gudia...chalta firta disaster...
I better stay away from them
and dare...mind my words dare...you again compare this band with your idiot gudia's
samjha tu
maan charged all over dev while dev meekly protested

bbhh...bbhhaa...bhai...you know I won't take any word against my shehzadian and specially gudia

she is really nave and sweet...
he answered back whispering a stater fearing his charged up bro

whatever...but don't you dare it again
those little wild cats..
You know even teachers fear of them


in your case to even princi is scared of you...dev again protested in a low voice while maan was losing it now

stop the car..he closed his eyes to calm himself knowing no way he can fight with his idiot brother on this matter he can die for then but won't let anyone talk against them

driver parked the car nearby and waited for maan to leave

I am going...you better reach school on time or else

bro yeh aapka roz ka kya hai...aap itna chal kar kaise jaate ho...hum ek hi school jaa rahe hai na if I am not wrong

maan rolled his eyes towards driver...main 2:30 yahi milunga mujhe yaha se pick kar lena

saying so maan moved out of the car with his bag pack again while dev drifted away for school

as soon as the car moved away he again took the band in his hand and smiled sheepishly
see mishthy you are already driving me insane'

see even dev could recognize me smilling lost in your thoughts

agar dadi ne dekh lia hota to

don't know kya kya sunn na padta

you know little princess the time we meet again you are gonna pay heavily for all these

he smiles weekly to himself

will we meet again'

I don't even know who you are...I don't even know your name

He pouted cutely again shoving the band back you pocket and started walking in his own pace lost'lost'lost'

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Geet hum fir se yaha gatekeepers k job pe lagg gaye hai kya...sam made silly face to get a little attention from geet who was lost drooling over her prince charming

haan...she replied absentmindedly

what...sam's eyes just popped out and she screamed on top of her voice
geet tu roz yaha mereko bhi apne sath uss not so interesting boy ki shakal subha subha dekhne ke lie iss bushes ke peeche laa kar khada kar deti hai
now I really do feel as if school has appointed us two as official replacement for gatekeeper bhaiya
you know what geet...I am going now
you stay here...do your watchman...oopppsss watchgirl'giri and I am going to attend classes

geet diverted her all precious attention towards an idiot faking anger like every single day now and rolled her eyes...tu roz footage kyu khaati hai...

Shukar mnaa main tere uss maan ko nahi khaati...she murmured under her breath

what..!!...

Kuch nahi chal move fast now

yaa chal waise bhi mera kaam ho gaya...geet made a chirpy face and picked her bag again ob back an started moving away from the bushes

while poor sam just could make a O shaped face again peeping from the bushes to see whether maan was still there or not...

but baby sam...he was to long gone na divzi winks


..what...means tujhpe aaj bhi meri baaton ka asar nahi hua...god tu just isslie jaa rahi hai because wo class k lie chala gaya
great...simplly just great


sam moved her hands up in air in surrender

or nahi to kya tujhe kya laga...tu to rozz yeh same song sunati hai...

ab to wo mereko sunta bhi nahi...

totally beat less hai...ek dum besura...geet showed her tongue out to sam and ran inside the campus for her dear life

what...
tu...
tu rukk ek min abhi btaati hu...
sam picked her bag and ran to chase her...

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sam...isko bol agar isne ek baar or apne uss nakchade, attitude se bhare, akduu, matlabi, bhai cruel singh khurana ka name lia to main isko kacha khaa jaayungi
main iss se maan k baare main puch rahi hu or yeh apne bhai ka gungan gaa raha hai...
geet cribbed sam while she just pretended to be lost in her books

dev was just cursing his bro for this

he can't even tell his friends about this and always get stuck between this jungly wild beasts and that horrible hungry lion
geet ke baba ji ab maine kya kia...isne jo pucha wahi btaya na...fir vhi dekho mereko hi daant padh rahi hai..dev prayed to god wishing this earth to swellow himself...yaar ghar main sara time bro mereko sunate rehte hai...n yaha yeh...koi meri bhi sunn lo

dev...tu bolega bhi yaa nahi
ohhh...
Bhul gayi tu uss MSK ka bhai hai na...bina matlab ke kuch kaam nahi karta...
Backstabber kahi ka, traitor singh khurana...

tu mera dost ho hi nahi sakta
tu...
Tu...
Haan...tu to uss MSK ka bhai hai

wo to main hu...kyu nahi hu kya...dev thought for a while

ab bolne ka kya lega Mr Dev Singh Khurana...get was supper annoyed and angry

wo...wo...dev thinking..abhi to btaya wo pasand nahi aaya ab kaise btaau...
haan...
Wo maine unhe ghar pe drop kar dia tha
he was fine..
Even cheeked out with them in morning even his hangover was normal

Unke sir main bahutt dard tha kya..
geet asked innocently making baby faces

nahi gudia tension kyu leti hai main hu na...
He was fine..
dev was more tense for his gudia watching her tensed face than his bro's illness

sachi...she confirmed with glittery eyes

muchi...dev gave her a bear hug

oye classes nahi hai kya...jaa tera class start ho gaya hai...waise bhi teri class monitor ko hum easily bribe kar sakte hai tujhe class se kich out kraane k lie...sam smerked while dev just jerk open his eyes

ooo shitt...Hitler...
And ran off...tripping twice on way leave sam and geet laughing there head off at the little joker in front

wo di se itna darta kyu hai...geet wondered
di nahi uski hitler...sam corrected and both gave hi-5 and again burst out in laughter


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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loving this luka chuppi :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic one...loved it...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN STOLR HER BAND AND IS IN LOVE WITH HER NOW

DEV AND GEET ARE TALKING ABOUT THE SAME PERSON BUT IN A DIFFERENT WAY

VERY FUNNY😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahaha...maan want to meet agn wid hz mishty..sahi jarahe maan babu...nxt part jaldi dena...hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved all the updates

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Posted: 13 years ago
😆awesome update yar
loved it a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago

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