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Posted: 12 years ago

aweee Eza di ...u r simply awesom ..😃
pehli baar mujhe sachi samajh nahi aaraha mien kahan se shoro karoon aur kya kis cheez ke baare mien boloon 😆...ek ek line every word was soo touching ...u really made me feel like i am watching it all ...😳

was she breathing or it was just his illusion, more than that was he breathing and it was more than anyone his own illusion, ..⭐️
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As if she was angry with herself , to make her maan suffer , to make her Maan cry, to hurt her maan, she wanted to woke up only when he would be wd her ..😲

i cant believe u actually wrote what i thought when i ended that OS with that particular thought ...😳

he never thought once, he is gonna be the same prince of his snow white ..

haaayeee ...well to tell u the truth i was never facinated with these princess n prince stories EVER but now me falling big time for this prince ...a true prince n the king of his words ...😳

they were Maaneet, and word LOVE itself is their definition, the word LOVE is only thing which define both of them, ..
i loved this line ...⭐️

Maan failed to see the love in her eyes, and moved on with hurt in his own eyes, she closed her eyes so she wnt be able to see the pain in his eyes ...
i am wondering did i really conveyed the OS this well u understood all what i wanted to convey ...😳 😃

Maan what you doing here Go away, don't come near me, M nt for you, she said bit sternly yet pain and hurt was evident in her voice ..

sob sob ...yet again those painful memories n the same fear ..😭

Nahi armaan, I cant put his life in danger for my love, I can live without her, but annie cant ..⭐️ 👏
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maan wo chaand hai jiski aarzoo mujh jaise tare ko ho toh sakti hai, lekin wo sirf ek ko hi mil saktaa hai, who deserve him, and who meant for him ..😳
me bowing in front of u di ...😃
i ws awee struck with these heart touching lines ...👏 😳 ⭐️

The Maan singh khurana, The only hire of Khurana's his father was well known person in underworld, some of them called him God father, His father Ranjeet singh Khurana ...
waooo ..talliyan 👏..kya baat hai Eza di tussi great hu ..😛
ek Don ki beti dosra God father ka beta ...😆
no wonder hum poora underworld yahin lane wale hain ...😆

batao agar koi king bhi aane wala hai tou ...😆 😛

Aur aapko kho kar jaana ke jiske saath rehnaa nahi chahti thi , usske bina rehna kitna dushwaar hai... jisey pane me koi taklif nahi thi, ussko kho kar pata chala zindaghi kitni mushkil hai...😃

exceptional dialogues 😳...truly n honestly i wont be able to do justice with any of my words over this ..its sooo damn good Eza di ...⭐️


Tujhe chah kar mujhe sab milaa

Tujhe kho ke me ne tujhe paa liyaa

Tujhe bhool jaane ka yaqin tha

Tujhe sochne pe thi pabandiyaa

Me ne jaana yeh tujhe chood kar

Ke kitna mushkil hai tujhe bhoolna


i loved this one ..awesom piece of poetry ...


Mere saath chaloghi naa geet, meri berang zindaghi me rangh bharne...

Mere andhere ghar me apni khubssorti ka ujala karne ...

thud faint ...🤢

kya sweet confession hai ...

mahi ve ...


your eyes reflects my heart geet, agar tumhaari aankhe udaas hoghi mera dil khush nahi ho sakegha ...
what a line yrr ...
me wondering itni touchy lines aati kahan se aapke mind mien ...fab it is ..👏

Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏



chalo abhi yeh batao kitna time laga comment parhne mien ...😆


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Eza_analyst



me waiing for ur response 😊


COMMENTED ...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
U left me speechles
ek to yeh song again n again sunkr pagal ho rhi hun nd upar se maaneet. double combo
lovd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb loved it amazing part
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


aweee Eza di ...u r simply awesom ..😃
pehli baar mujhe sachi samajh nahi aaraha mien kahan se shoro karoon aur kya kis cheez ke baare mien boloon 😆...ek ek line every word was soo touching ...u really made me feel like i am watching it all ...😳

was she breathing or it was just his illusion, more than that was he breathing and it was more than anyone his own illusion, ..⭐️
.
.
As if she was angry with herself , to make her maan suffer , to make her Maan cry, to hurt her maan, she wanted to woke up only when he would be wd her ..😲

i cant believe u actually wrote what i thought when i ended that OS with that particular thought ...😳

he never thought once, he is gonna be the same prince of his snow white ..

haaayeee ...well to tell u the truth i was never facinated with these princess n prince stories EVER but now me falling big time for this prince ...a true prince n the king of his words ...😳

they were Maaneet, and word LOVE itself is their definition, the word LOVE is only thing which define both of them, ..
i loved this line ...⭐️

Maan failed to see the love in her eyes, and moved on with hurt in his own eyes, she closed her eyes so she wnt be able to see the pain in his eyes ...
i am wondering did i really conveyed the OS this well u understood all what i wanted to convey ...😳 😃

Maan what you doing here Go away, don't come near me, M nt for you, she said bit sternly yet pain and hurt was evident in her voice ..

sob sob ...yet again those painful memories n the same fear ..😭

Nahi armaan, I cant put his life in danger for my love, I can live without her, but annie cant ..⭐️ 👏
.
.
maan wo chaand hai jiski aarzoo mujh jaise tare ko ho toh sakti hai, lekin wo sirf ek ko hi mil saktaa hai, who deserve him, and who meant for him ..😳
me bowing in front of u di ...😃
i ws awee struck with these heart touching lines ...👏 😳 ⭐️

The Maan singh khurana, The only hire of Khurana's his father was well known person in underworld, some of them called him God father, His father Ranjeet singh Khurana ...
waooo ..talliyan 👏..kya baat hai Eza di tussi great hu ..😛
ek Don ki beti dosra God father ka beta ...😆
no wonder hum poora underworld yahin lane wale hain ...😆

batao agar koi king bhi aane wala hai tou ...😆 😛

Aur aapko kho kar jaana ke jiske saath rehnaa nahi chahti thi , usske bina rehna kitna dushwaar hai... jisey pane me koi taklif nahi thi, ussko kho kar pata chala zindaghi kitni mushkil hai...😃

exceptional dialogues 😳...truly n honestly i wont be able to do justice with any of my words over this ..its sooo damn good Eza di ...⭐️


Tujhe chah kar mujhe sab milaa

Tujhe kho ke me ne tujhe paa liyaa

Tujhe bhool jaane ka yaqin tha

Tujhe sochne pe thi pabandiyaa

Me ne jaana yeh tujhe chood kar

Ke kitna mushkil hai tujhe bhoolna


i loved this one ..awesom piece of poetry ...


Mere saath chaloghi naa geet, meri berang zindaghi me rangh bharne...

Mere andhere ghar me apni khubssorti ka ujala karne ...

thud faint ...🤢

kya sweet confession hai ...

mahi ve ...


your eyes reflects my heart geet, agar tumhaari aankhe udaas hoghi mera dil khush nahi ho sakegha ...
what a line yrr ...
me wondering itni touchy lines aati kahan se aapke mind mien ...fab it is ..👏

Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏 ❤️ ❤️ ☺️ 👏



chalo abhi yeh batao kitna time laga comment parhne mien ...😆






heheheheee m actually laughing like this u know I just come home and after changing the first Thing I did opened My lappy I knew it u would commneted heheheh
Its damn good Thank u thank u
Oopsss Sorry sorry
I LOVE YOU...
BADA WALA LOVE YOU A BIG HUG 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Eza_analyst





heheheheee m actually laughing like this u know I just come home and after changing the first Thing I did opened My lappy I knew it u would commneted heheheh
Its damn good Thank u thank u
Oopsss Sorry sorry
I LOVE YOU...
BADA WALA LOVE YOU A BIG HUG 😊


luv ya too di ..
me sulking yrr ...
iss idiot khutte net ki waa se mien 1hr late hugayi aur abhi bhi nahi chal raha theek se ..
stupid idot ..


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


luv ya too di ..
me sulking yrr ...
iss idiot khutte net ki waa se mien 1hr late hugayi aur abhi bhi nahi chal raha theek se ..
stupid idot ..




aww koi nahi Its Okhh
All the best for ur test tomorw aacche se likhnaa waise sachi batana poems Ki first ki lines u ko samjhi nahi naa 😆 Though It was in Urdu still ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This song is one of my favourite... I just loved the os... Plz write more os... Coz i prefer os than ff... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

awee mene abhi dekha ...MERE SAIYAAN RE crossed 100 ...

yupppieee
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sobia4maaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Eza_analyst



aww koi nahi Its Okhh
All the best for ur test tomorw aacche se likhnaa waise sachi batana poems Ki first ki lines u ko samjhi nahi naa 😆 Though It was in Urdu still ...



ehehe ...😛
mujhe bas ek word ka meaning samajh nahi aaya n thats coz i mujhe woh line samajh nahi aayi 🤢n that was regzaar ...

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