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Posted: 13 years ago
Read A rangrez mere
aowww
my my my...dat was rlly supr cute supr addorable supr supr supr lyk fr it
hmmm now undrstnd missy y u sooo much belv in arrangd marriages *wink wink*

i luv it yaar...hayeee to bfully describd the 6mnt journy...there ech emotion ech longing ech lov
evrythin was flawless...jst fab

luv to read it again n again...

Luv Divzi
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Posted: 13 years ago
haye yeh to khatam hogaya
mai to khoi wi thi ismai
beautiful OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oyee TJJJ Update karooo
Itsss your turnnn


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Posted: 13 years ago
HUhhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kahi To Hogi Voh...
(Jaane Tu... Ya, Jaane Naa)
(Youtube link-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KFwjibi-JRU)


MUSIC...


A big party was held by 2 rival companies in the same hotel... It was their childrens' engagement party... The Handas and the Khuranas, who had been very close frndz, but some 5 yrs back, they have now become rivals all of a sudden and everything changed for their kids...
Geet and Maan had loved each other since they were born, played together, grown together, and hence fell in love with each other since their early age... But the sudden rivalry between their fathers gave kept them apart for the last 5 yrs... The soulmates were separated and deliberately tied to someone else... This party was held by their fathers to show that they found out a better person for their children and also their power of money, but the two main souls were wrecked apart from each other and thrown into the darkness of loneliness and pain without each other and their parents have fixed them with some fools who have been after their money for a long time... The party was divided by just thin and transparent curtains, obviously to show off each others' party... A very sweet song was played and both the couples were dancing with their to be fiances but the two souls were not at all interested to be with them when they were so close to each other after separation of full 5 yrs from each other...
God has given us everything in pair except the heart, as the other one is fitted in someone else and that person is thus called our soulmate... They can feel each other near, thn how can they be with someone else who's not even worth the cloth of their sweethearts' clothes, let alone being their soulmate... Maan and Geet were dying to be with each other, but couldn't embarrass their parents... but now, it had become unbearable...

Kahi toh, kahi toh,
Hogi voh,
Duniya Jahan tu mere saath hai...
Jahan me, jahan tu,
Aur jahan, bas tere mere jazbaat hai...

Very much near each other, but still so far away, they could fell each other, smell their fragrance, hear their souls talking to each other, just not able to see each other, which was excruciatingly painful for them... they wanted to be together with each other and not with those stupid idiots of people... they were craving for such a place where by they could live in peace with each other, their love, their happiness, their togetherness... Kya aisi jagah hai iss duniya me, jo inn do dilo ko milne se kabhi na roke, koi na toke...

Hoti jahan, subha teri,
Palkon ki kirnon me,
Dori jahan, chaand ki,
Sune teri, baahon me...

A place where, he can get up with the sunshine of his life, his song, his GEET... She was held by her to be fiance, Jay and he was with Simran... But their hearts cried and recited only 2 names, Maan and Geet... They felt disgusted with the touch of others on their body, which was marked by each other... Their love never had any barriers but they always knew their limits... Kissing, smooching, love bites, they had surpassed this all... All these were now nothing but their way of showing their love... Whenever they met each other, it had always been with a long and breathtaking smooch, till the time they were out of breath and bone crushing in each others' tight hold... She in his tight hold, hanging in mid air, balancing herself on her tipsy toes on his feet, and holding him around his neck... Thus, these filthy touches were making them feel cheap about themselves... Both, Jay and Simran, were behind Maan and Geet for their money and sinfully sexy and handsome looks... But Maan and Geet could never see anyone other than each other, when together and still thought about each other when not together...

Jaane na kaha vo duniya hai,
Jaane na voh hai bhi yaa nhi
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,
Itni khafan nhi...
Music...

Where is that place??? Does it even exist??? The place where the two souls can be with each other,without anything between them, neither parents nor clothes...

Sanse kho gayi hai kiski aahon mein,
Me kho gayi hu jaane kiski baahon me...

Their breaths had always being entangled with each other... They had alway felt each other with their flesh... Since they has grown together, not a single thing was hidden from each other... But at this moment, they were in someone else's arms which made them just push the person desperately and search for each other... They were madly searching for each other now... Dhundte dhundte, both reached on the terrace of the hotel, both by different lifts, but kind of mutually decided by their minds to meet on the terrace...

Manzilon se, raahein dhundti chali,
Aur kho gayi hai manzil kahi raahon me...

Manzil to bas voh hi the ek dusre ke... They never changed their tracks from each other... Par Life ne aisi bajayi ki, unke tracks me apne aap diversions aa gaye the... But how long could they live apart from each other, dono ka thikaana to ek hi tha na... Ghoom fir ke unhe, ek dusre ke paas hi aana tha...

Kahi toh, kahi toh,
Hai nasha, teri meri har mulaakaat mein,

As soon as they saw each other on the terrace, Maan at the far end of the terrace and Geet at the entrance, they just ran for their life, to take their lives in their arms... Inke mulakaat me aisa jaadoo tha ki kudrat bhi iss baat ko jhoothla naa saaki aur ro Padi... It started raining... They hugged each other as if there was no tomorrow, totally drenched in the rain and also each others' love...

Hoton se, hoton ko,
Chumti, oo rehte hum har baat pe...

They kissed each other senseless... 5 yrs, they were trying to compensate for 5 long yrs, 60 long months, 1825 days, and lots and lots of minutes and more lots of seconds... But would that time be brought back??? They just kissed, bit and nibbled each other till their lower lips were torn and bleeding, and till they tasted their blood and flesh... They parted after full half an hour which seemed only few minutes for them, that too becoz they were out of breath...

Keheti hai fiza jahan, teri zameen aasmaan,
Jahan hai tu, meri hasii, meri jaan...

They were so happy, seeing each other after such a long time... Both had tried lots of times and different ways of meeting each other but all efforts in vain... Both had lost lot of weight crying and dying for each other... But at the end, bhagwaan ko bhi unki judaai bardaasht nahi hui... Atlast, they were together now... Duniya, gharwaale, Gaye bhaad me, they were happy with each other... They never had any want or desire for money... Both had gr8 degrees which would get them awesome jobs in top MNC's... They both just desired togetherness of each other... ek dusre ka saath mil jaaye, utna hi kaafi hai...

Jaane na kaha vo duniya hai,
Jaane na voh hai bhi yaa nhi
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse,
Itni khafan nhi... (x2)

They left that place and went away to a place which was their heaven and where there would be no one to separate them, or even know them... They went to the outskirts of Darjeeling and lived their life happily and content away from the lusty and greedy world, finding the world in themselves...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally Me Get the time for Commenting


yuppieee...
TJu You rock it Girl...
Loved it ...
Loved each and every thing about them
Their Love
Their Sepration...
Their Sorrows...
Their Rivalary...
and yup atlast their obedience for their parents (lolll)
You written so well TJjj
Your Bindaaas avtar
its like you actually pen down your thoughts
without the barriers of langauage

Boley toh EKDUM mumbai maasala







Edited by Angelic_analyst - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG

now dat was beautifull

specially d song is my so damn fav

and u created such a beautifull theme on it...

loved deir craving n longingness for each other

deir breaking all d hesitation at d end

n finally submitting to each other..

loved every bit of it...

love u tj

u rocked


Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful OS...

at last they left for love with their love...
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Posted: 13 years ago
A Rangrez mere is superb...
sorry 4 late comment...
Edited by Sailor_N - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
the song very much...
Update is awesum...



Edited by Sailor_N - 13 years ago

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