My First FF: Tararumpum Part 27 Page 72 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
geet agreed...nice...

continue soon.,..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww... so both of d families r going simultaneously... hmmm... dat means Geetu ka rishta Maanu k sath hi fix hua hain 😉
waise u did nt mention abt Geetu's reaction on her wild dreams 😕 yeh adhurapan sahi nahi hain 😳
aur yeh teri serial kii tarah drag kar karke updt dene kii adat... ufff... ab naam pata lagane kii liye bhi ek aur updt 😡
aur precap 😲 kuch na bolu tho hi shayad behtar hain... bilkul teri tarah dimagh se hatke huye precap hain yeh... pura ka pura mere sar ke upar se nikal gaya 😆
chalo ab 3 days ka intezaar... kar leti hu... sirf tere liye 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...loved it...
eagerly waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago


Friends Before reading clear ur doubts.

Geet dreamt about Karan but unconsciously she took Maan's name which she don't realize in sleep.

She agreed for her parents and m surprised wat thinks u ppl thats so uick.. don't u remember uncle's long long lecture .

Moreover u all want to start Mannet Milan part as cards or watever so i cut short it.. actually i have to coz my friends start bashing n throwing chappals on me. the un-sound words really irritate dem. so heres my giving some sweet parts hope u ppl enjoy. and keep in touch coz now its not the end.. PIC abhi to start hay. .have fun n keep poking me wid HIT LIKE and comments.

Part 13:

At beach Maan was busy with his friends. All were enjoying, and teasing each other. It was great day so all are enjoying the weather.

Rohan: chal Yar ik volley ball match hojayen..

Arhit: no m going for diving.. aisy mausam m volley ball when so many hot, sexy,sweet girls around. Let me enjoy (wink)

Varun: stop it yar.. chor yr. rohan is right ik match hojayee.

The all boys started playing match. It was Maan's turn he throw ball and in response he was hit by someone at back. Both person fall. Maan on Geet and Geet under Maan.

Maan was memorized with her eyes. He thought it's kind of dream. He is hallucinating He forgot around and felt her so close. Geet was surprised and became angry at his hit n now dis bold actions in front of all. She can feel whistling n hooting around.

Geet: TUM ' I just hate it '' Hellooo Excuse me ..uthiyee

Maan: '''''..

Geet: hellooo Mr Dhak Dhak 'Mr Khurana m talking to u.. GOSH ur sick. Utthhhooo'

Maan: (came back in senses) m mmm sorry I was just hitting ball n didn't noticed. (Both stand Maan eyes towards his friends who ran before MK start.). By the way what ur doing here?

Geet: Ye Beach hay naa.. to naturally m here to enjoy dis weather.

Maan: ALONE???

Geet: (glare) Yes I don't need anyone. Bye

Maan saw her backmoving in opposite direction. His friends call him "Chal yar game start krein.

Maan: yar u ppl enjoy.. I m bored..let me enjoy.. see ya .

Rohan wink.. MAAN chor dey bohaat pittey gaa.

Maan: ssshhh apna kaam kr.

Maan move towards Geet and sat with her on sand.. she was lost in her thoughts so she didn't notice.

Maan: Hi are u following me '

Geet: (glare) NOOO

Maan: ooohh don't be. Relax yar m here just wana a give u some company..nothing at all.

Geet: did I ask for dat?? I don't need u and ur company.

Maan: Tumhari problem kya hay? Tumhein sab sy itni nafrat kun hay.? Wat u think of urself?

Geet: (angry) ur my problem. Aiwee peachy parey rehty ho.. JUST GO AWAY. She about to go when MAAN hold her hand..

Maan: wooo chill dude.. mein tumhein Ghussa dilany nhee aya thaa.. just a friend.. I felt that u really need someone dis tyme. Jisko tum kuch keh sako,kuch bata sako, being a one day friend I think u can share with me.

Geet: Friend n YOU'. NEVER.

Maan: Ok then u can talk me as a stranger isk 2 faiday hein.. U will feel better and moreover u have no guilty to share with ur heart talk wid some stranger who can used dis against u. I know u really want someone to share.

Geet: (silence)

Maan: take as much time as u need. But TRUST ME. Mery dost kehty hein m very best Shoulder to cry and perfect deep well where ur secrets are always covered. TRY krkey dekh lo.

Geet: plss Maan m not in mood. M really upset. Pls leave me alone.

Maan: hmmm ok now serious.. tell me. Parents ki zabrdsti ka issue hay, exam m failure ka daar hay ya boy friend ka chakkar hay (wink)

Geet: (stare) mery parents chahty hein m shaadi krlon?

Maan: ahaaan and u have boyfriend .. ar samagh nhee arahee unsy kaisy kahon..

Geet: nothing like dat ..i was engaged wid Karan. He was my best buddy n my life.. I love him so much.. I can't think about anyone else in my life after Karan but I lost him at car accident 3 years back.

Maan: ohhh very sad.

Geet: yeaah.. Karu love to be Rj and he was going for his interview when he was hit by truck.. (tears started from her eyes) he was very happy dat day'after his interview we had so many plans for rest of de day coz in a month we were going to be married but all our dreams shattered when after 2 hours we found karu dead body at home. Cops and ambulance got his address from his card and called at home. We found dats would be his prank coz he love to do such silly stuffs but he left us..usny mjhy dhoka dya.. mujhy akela chord ya.. she brust into tears, I will never forget him. How can my parents think I could accept some else after Karu. Uski death k saath Geet bhee maar gai. Maan hug Geet from side ways and she kept her head on Maan's shoulder. Tears wet the maan's shirt.

She kept crying and narrating whole incident and love story of Karan and hers , Maan became silent audience, just he pat her shoulder and console her by making his grip tight on her. she hugged him more closely, sobbing and crying, her silent screams are enough to show how much painful she had. .. Jaisy aj sab kuch peachy chor jana chahti hoo. Sab dukh, gham jo kitny saalo sy dil mein dabaye bethi thi aaj MAAN k gallay lag kar sab bhool jana chahtii hay. Jaisy usko isi ki talaash thi. Aj Bhagwan ney uska intezaar khatam kya.. Both are together as a friend, stranger or secret sharer but they are connected and its already wrote in dere lifes book.

After hours of cry Geet realize and free herself from maan's grip.

Geet: m really sorry.. ..m sorry I don't want this. Actually mjhy pata nhe tumsy baat karkey kya hogaya. Sab kuch bol diya. Or rooty pata nhee chala. Tum bhi kahogi kitni bold hay ..jhut sy chipak gai. I 'i'

Maan: (naughty smile) WO TO HAY ..KYA KAREIN MAAN SINGH SY CHIPKANY K LEYE DUNIYA MAARTI HAY TUMHEIN TO FREE PACKAGE MIL GAYA.

GEET: (glare) m not lyk dose despos. Seriously don't like to be'

Maan: (laugh) Relax Geet ..m kidding (came closer n saw in her eyes). I know Ur different.

But on serious note m happy that TUMNEY MUJHY APNA SAMGHA.. mujsy sab share kiya. Bohaat Lucky hay Karan jisko tum jaisii pyaar karny walli mili. Ye life na bohaat strange hay aur uss sy bhi strange ye LOVE.ye Jitna deity hay uss sy zaida cheenti hay.. but tumhein uski yaadon k achay pall sirf yaad krny chahye..leave ur past behind and welcome dose laughs and smiles which are waiting for u.

Geet: tum aisa keh shakty ho kun .. u never been in love. Jab apna koi cheenta hay to dard hota hay.. Karan was my life how could I forgot her. uski jaga kisi ko kaisy dedun.

Maan: Meri choroo coz I don't want to be in love ..wasy bhe mujhy kabhee koi aisi milli nahee. Sabko MAAN SINGH KHURANA the Son of KHURANA EMPIRE and the DHAK DHAK Rj sy pyaar hay.. I want someone jo real MAAN ko pechany. Jisk leye mein sirf MAAN hoon . I lost my mom when I was just 4 years old. I cry a lot and was really felt alone. No doubt I have happy family and great friendly Papa but still I missed my mother liken Daadi ney sab kami puri kardi. Unhon ney mujhy wo sab dya jo ik Ma deity hy. She is my best friend, my mother and my love. Tab hee mein ny jana k life m ik jata hay to Bhagwan ny dosra uska alternate rakha hota hay which is best. No one is alone , no one is ignored .. we just believe in our destiny and most important give our life new chance. Ik chance leiny m kya hay' Ary Life ka mazaa inhin challenges mein hay. M sure tumhary leye Bhagwan ny karan sy bhee zaida acha insaan soocha hay, jo tumhein tumhri painful yaadon sy baher ley aye ga. Tumhry sab ghum bant ley ga. U just TRUST on urself. Ik Baar khush honey ki koshish to karo .fr dekho Khusiyan tumhary sath hamesha raheingi.. apny leye nhaee un logo k leye jo tumsy pyaar karty hein. Jo tumhary saath hein.. Zinda hein..Tumhary parents tumhein Khush dekhna chahty hein. Tumhein bhee zindagi ko dobara moka deina chahey. Life is too short for dese sorrows.

Geet: (lost in his words)

Maan: ( wave hand) helllooo u dere madam??? Kya speech acchi lagi.

Geet: No I was just surprise m I talking wid the same non-serious and over-confident MAAN SINGH KHURANA' m really Impress hmmm.

Maan: don't be impress lady.. ye sab to I read in some stupid novel.. aj yaad agaya (wink)

Geet: uuu She hit her on arm.

Maan: ouuchh M not ur boyfriend so pls behave.. lagti hay (wink)

Geet: u never be' huh,.. I will sucide. Ur such a '.

Maan: Dhak Dhak na' I know I am really coooll.

Geet: (tring tring) Hello

Pinky where r u? kahan chali gai.. tujhy pata hay aunti kabsy tujhy dhoond rhee hein.. kidher hay?

Geet: ohh m coming.. traffic m phans gaii baas 5 min .

Pinky: jaldi ajaa warna aj teri khair nhee.

Geet: ok Ok

I gotta go.. Mom is waiting. Pinky ki call thi.

Maan: hmmm I think we should leave coz its really dark now. Tum kitna bolti hoo OH GOSH really sab picnic meri kharab kardi.. Guess MAAN SINGHKHURANA ki sham ik rooti larki ko chup karaty guzrii haaaw too bad.kya halaat hoagyee.. (fake act)

Geet: Tum nhee sudhrogey.. anyways THANKS. I really feel Good. Tum itnay bhi buray nahee hoo. Its nice meeting u.

Maan: haaa finally one more down ' (wink) Well anytime.. Btw Friends (he take his hand out)

Geet: hmmm Okk Friends.

Maan : great lets move..

'''''''

Precap: same "How could u do dis to me..."

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Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
today me 1st 😉
beautiful update
finally Geet shared everything with Maan.
Maan is so naughty teasing her.
Loved Maan's dialogues soo much.
interesting percap
continue soon
Edited by -maankimishti- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb updt..
geet sharing her pain wid maan.. maan supporting geet!!
twas gr8!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome



great geet share her pain with maan
continue soon

thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was superb..
Maan really made her pain simple with words which has a very deep meaning..
Loved it a lot..
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb updt.
loved the convo b/w maaneet.wow geet shared her pain with maan.loved maan diallogue it showed his mature side also.

thanx for the pm n cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved how they both shared their stories...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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