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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs

UPDATING in Few Minutes!!🥳

waiting eagerly dear ...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

hehehe😆 i asked and at the same time u put the updating status what a timing 😉of both of us 🤣


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will need at least 30 minutes!!! trying for a looong update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs


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will need at least 30 minutes!!! trying for a looong update!!!

wow dear ...me waiting for a long update now 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
waitng
how much tym wil it take?
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Posted: 13 years ago
do fast na dear plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

me very happy with the sweet response i am getting!!😳.

a big waalaaa hug to all those who commented and liked!!!!😳
thank you so much sweeties!!!!!!!!!!😳

here's the start of Creature's doom!!😆

SUNDAY, a holiday, so no update tomorrow...😉
please buddy me for PMs'.😳

PART - 12 (part 89)

When Geet came back to KM, she saw the chudeil sitting in the lounge and busy painting her nails. Geet frowned seeing her sitting so calmly. She cribbed to her favorite Babaji-

"Hey babaji ab iss chudeil ke khuraafaati dimaag mein kya khichdi pak rahi hai???"

Rimi noticed her when she heard her muttering something to herself. She looked up and gave her an extra sugary nervous smile showing all her perfect white 32 teeth as she had seen Daadi ma standing upstairs watching them. While Geet wondered-

"Kaise daant dikha rahi hai…. Mann to karta hai tod doon... Par kya fayda, waise bhi nakli lagte hain….. Haye ye bina daaton ke kitni sundar agti hogi na…."

Geet started laughing when she imagined that creature without teeth. Rimi got thoroughly confused and a little scared too seeing her laughing like that. She was already scared for her life and now seeing her laughing like that. She peeped upstairs and saw that dadi ma was not there. She started sweating. Soon Geet gained her composure and decided to have a little fun.

"Arrey arrey Geet ji aap itna darr kyun rahi hain. Main kaunsa aapko kha jaaongi? Waise bhi itni unhygienic cheezein to hamaari gali ke kutte bhi nahi khaate."

"JEE…. Aap meri insult kar rahi hai kya???"

"Nahi nahi.. meri itni himmat kaha? Vaise main ne suna hai ki abhi jab sab aa jaayenge tab aapko sab SACH bataya jaayega?"

Rimi nodded still wondering what Geet was upto. Even Brij was out of town and his number was unreachable so she didn't know what to do if Geet disclosed her identity.

"Aap kaha kho gayi? Actually main ne to sirf aapko ye inform karna chahti thi ki aap sab ko yeh bataayengi ki aap khud hi Maan se shaadi nahi karna chahti thi... infact aap kisi aur ke saath pichle 2 saal se affair chal raha hai...aur agar aapne aisa nahi kiya to..."

"To kya??? Main aisa kuchh nahi karoongi, tumhe jo karna hai kar lo..."

"Arey aap to bura maan gayi…. main to sab ko sirf itna bataaoongi ki main hi Geet hoon, aur iske bahut saare proof hain jaise ki mera ORIGINAL passport, mere college ki photos, mere college ke teachers... Aur iske baad aapka Maan jo Karenge wo….."

"Nahi please tum aisa kuchh mat karna. Main wahi karoongi jo tum kahogi."

"Good... see you…."

Geet happily skipped and went to her room smirking "Plan 1 successful!", while Rimi wondered what to do. If she says she was cheating on Maan when she had got engaged to him to bhi uski chair nahi... For her it was idhar khaayi udhar kuaan….

EVENING

Maan had called Geet in outhouse, as he didn't want anyone to hear what he was going to tell her. Geet entered wearing a beautiful black net saari with a sequin work blouse. She had left her hair open and had no make up on. Maan was mesmerized and kept on drooling over her shamelessly and advanced towards her.

Geet blushed seeing his intense gaze. She knew what would come next, but right now she wanted to know the facts first. She pinched Maan bringing him out of his reverie.

"Ouch…. GEEETTT. Ye kya tha?"

"Main jaanti hoon ki aapke iraade bilkul nek nahi hai. ye aapko hosh mein lane ke liye tha. Ab aap yaha bethiya aur mujhe sab bataiye."

Maan shook his head and rubbed the area on his left palm which had become red due to his sherni. He knew now nothing can stop her. So he sat down and made sure that she also got comfortable by putting extra pillows behind her back.

"Geet mujhe sab kuchh uss hi din pata chala tha jab tum faint ho gayi thi."

Geet looked at him shocked. She thought that he knew this all along. She could not even imagine how hurt he must be while getting engaged to that creature. She knew his heart had recognized that it was not his Geet. She gently held his left hand and squeezed it, gesturing him to continue.

"Wo when that Rimi signed up as the model in her firm, she had to undergo some medical tests. Un logon ne ek copy ghar par bhi mail kari thi. By chance I got that copy. I don't know why, I opened the file. Uss file mein blood group was B -ve aur tumhara blood group is O +ve. Uss hi din mujhe shak ho gaya tha, mera dil to pehle se hi ye jaanta tha ki wo meri Geet nahi, par dimaag ko bhi ek wajah mil gayi. I had kept her under surveillance of my private detectives since then. Unhone uss din phone kar ke ye confirm kiya tha ki Meet Khurana is my Geet…."

She didn't say anything and just engulfed him in a hug.


PRECAP

TWIST!!! 😆


so dears hope you liked it!!!

Hmmm ab it's twisty deewangi to ek twist to banta hai boss!!😆😉

me still busy with my college assignment

so me on break tomorrow, but still you never know!!😳😉


PREV - PART 11 NEXT - PART 13

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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome yaar...

nice revelations of maan...

yeh rimi toh gayi...I could just imagine her scared facial expressions

the last scene with maaneet was too good...

and how maan still belived in his heart that meet was geet...

oh how cool...

thanks for the update..

i hope ki ur headache is better dear...

me updating unwantedly tied soon...

thanks for the PM...

Love

Mrs. Bond
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amazing aab dekhenge yeh rimi kya karte hai hamre geet ke kehne par lolz waat lage mamu lolzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem love it rimi ki band bajni shuru ho gayi



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