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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG 66 likes on Part 9😲??? Me flying'😳.

a big waalaaa hug to all those who commented and liked!!!!😳
thank you so much sweeties!!!!!!!!!!😳

sweet heart ye to start hai... aag agg dekho hota hai kya...hum log pagal they deewangi ke liye... or ab twisty deewangi ke liye...66 likes se 166 bhi hoge or 266 bhi

PART - 10 (part 87)

loved the way you r exploring the story bit by bit...

"Welcome to hell sweety'"😆 ... i reallt loving this confident geet...rimi bata ab tera kya hoga... muski ke deeangi mai to sirf maan ne tera bura haal kiya tha vo bhi thora sa sirf ek part mai... ab jab geet km mai aa hi gayi hai to soch tera kya hoga...

muski ki deewangi mai to sirf rano maa ne dekha tha geet ko ab to dadi bhi sath hai... both r understanding her ... ab rimi to gayi...

"Sasha mam, I trust you a lot as a friend. I really liked you ever since the day I saw you 10 years back when you came to thank Maan sir for scholarship."...

these were the part i missed in muski deewangi... that shasha should know that she is geet the same small girl whom she saw with maan 10 years back

Sasha was taken aback. Only three people knew about this besides herself, her dad, Maan sir and'

i really missed this part.there thanks for giving us ...

She later on had got to know that whatever she is today it was because of Geet. ... yes the same lines from shsha muski missed...

"She is a cheater Sasha di. I hope I can call you di?"...👏👏... loved the ways y r detailing tiny miny detail...

"I will do anything for you dear. Just name it."...

loving this positive sasha


PRECAP

OFFICE mein ILU ILU' 😳...

is mai naya kya hai... 😉muski ke to har update mai to ye roj hota tha... maaneet drooling in office...







Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... loved all the updates... really superb!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
love it
i want to see how geet face that stupid creature
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Posted: 13 years ago
all part just awesome
loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee


OMG 66 likes on Part 9😲??? Me flying'😳.

a big waalaaa hug to all those who commented and liked!!!!😳
thank you so much sweeties!!!!!!!!!!😳

sweet heart ye to start hai... aag agg dekho hota hai kya...hum log pagal they deewangi ke liye... or ab twisty deewangi ke liye...66 likes se 166 bhi hoge or 266 bhi

PART - 10 (part 87)

loved the way you r exploring the story bit by bit...

"Welcome to hell sweety'"😆 ... i reallt loving this confident geet...rimi bata ab tera kya hoga... muski ke deeangi mai to sirf maan ne tera bura haal kiya tha vo bhi thora sa sirf ek part mai... ab jab geet km mai aa hi gayi hai to soch tera kya hoga...

muski ki deewangi mai to sirf rano maa ne dekha tha geet ko ab to dadi bhi sath hai... both r understanding her ... ab rimi to gayi...

"Sasha mam, I trust you a lot as a friend. I really liked you ever since the day I saw you 10 years back when you came to thank Maan sir for scholarship."...

these were the part i missed in muski deewangi... that shasha should know that she is geet the same small girl whom she saw with maan 10 years back

Sasha was taken aback. Only three people knew about this besides herself, her dad, Maan sir and'

i really missed this part.there thanks for giving us ...

She later on had got to know that whatever she is today it was because of Geet. ... yes the same lines from shsha muski missed...

"She is a cheater Sasha di. I hope I can call you di?"...👏👏... loved the ways y r detailing tiny miny detail...

"I will do anything for you dear. Just name it."...

loving this positive sasha


PRECAP

OFFICE mein ILU ILU' 😳...

is mai naya kya hai... 😉muski ke to har update mai to ye roj hota tha... maaneet drooling in office...








awww.. that's so sweeet!!!! me waiting for 266 likes!!!😉😆

really very happy you liked the sasha geet relationship so much!!!!😳

me trying to build a strong bond between them…

about Rimi, vo to gayiii...😉

abbb maaneet bina ILU ILU ke kaise survive karenge in deewangi???😉

thank you so much for encouraging me so much!!!!😃

love ya...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey are u updating again dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
likes gone up' 74 LIKES!!!!🥳

thanks for encouraging me by your sweet comments!!!
me flying after getting cho chweeet comments..

special thanks to Maansee for her super sweet analysis!!!!!!😳

@anu-ananya- sweety, IFU soon!!!😉


here's the next update'
please let me know if i can improvise somewhere...😳
please buddy me for PMs'.😳

PART - 11 (part 88)

Sasha just smiled at her little sis's antics, when Geet skipped all the way to Maan's cabin.

Maan was very busy finalizing the blue prints for the presentation in the evening. He was disturbed by the knock on his door. He thought Adi had come with the accounts file he asked for.

"Come in."

Geet came in and got busy drooling over him. He looked so cute and handsome busy concentrating on the blueprints. Every time he thought about something, his forehead creased and Geet had a strange desire to kiss away those wrinkles. She got shy at her own chain of thoughts and started blushing.

Meanwhile Maan was getting irritated with Adi's silence. He had not yet realized that it was his Meet and not Adi. Without lifting his head from the table, he started shouting-

"ADI... WHERE IS THE ACCOUNTS FILE? EK KAAM BHI TUM SE THIK SE NAHI HOTA. BHAGWAN JAANE KIS BEWKOOF NE TUMHE YE JOB DI. NOW STOP SITTING ON MY HEAD AND..."

Words died in his mouth when he saw Geet looking at him shocked. He was pleasantly surprised to see her. He immediately got up and went towards her. He engulfed her in a tight hug immediately. He was so happy to see her there.

"Waise Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, Adi sir ko job par rakhne waale BEWKOOF aap hi hai..."

Maan broke the hug and got puzzled listening to her but when he realized what she was saying, his face got red with anger. While Geet who was trying hard to suppress her laughter until now broke into fits of laughter.

Maan was mesmerized by her face that had lit up while laughing. He couldn't resist and pecked her rosy lips sweetly. Geet's smile froze on her lips because she wasn't expecting it.

"Waise main ne tumhe ghar par rest karne ko kaha tha. Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?"

He asked with sternness and fake anger while inside his heart, he was extremely happy that she had come. He was waiting for her to say that she was missing him as badly as he was missing her.

Geet rolled her eyes and replied.


"Main yaha sasha di se milne aayi thi. Aapko koi problem hai."

Maan got sad after hearing that she didn't come for him but he got curious as why Geet was calling Sasha as Di?

"DI???"

"Oh ho….. ab aap mujhe pareshaan mat karo. Aapki idhar udhar ki baton mein main aapko main baat to bataana bhool hi gayi. Wo chudeil wapas aa gayi hai."

"Kaunsi chudeil??"

"Arre wahi parkati….. Rimi. Iss baar use main aisa mazaa chakhhaongi ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhegi. Mann to karta hai main usk chhote chhote tukde kar ke…..."

Maan was really enjoying it. He felt he had once again got his little wify back. He got a flashback of the Pari chocolate incident also but right now he tried to control her temper, as he knew it was not good for the baby if she gets hyper.

He hugged her from back and started placing butterfly kisses on her nape. Geet who was busy cribbing earlier got lost in him. Maan smirked at his victory and lovingly kissed her cute nose, which had turned red due to anger.

"Jaan…."

"Hmmm….."

"I love..."

Geet's heartbeat rose as she anticipated his next word. She was dying to hear it from him for so long. Her breathing hitched.

"... you…..r.. nose.."

"WHAT???"

Maan roared with laughter while Geet pouted cutely. She tried to get away from him showing her fake anger. She was extremely happy to see him laughing so freely after a long time. Maan didn't let her move, and held her even tighter. Their sweet moment was interrupted by Adi who had FINALLY managed to come with the file as he was unable to find it earlier…..(courtesy Sasha😉😆)

KNOCK KNOCK

"Come after 10 minutes"

After Adi left Geet gently moved away from Maan, she rose on her feet and lovingly kissed his cheek. She was leaving but then she thought of something and came back to him.

"Waise main to bhool hi gayi, mujhe pucchna tha ki aapko kaise pata chala tha ki main Geet hoon aur kab?"

"Geet I will tell you everything when I come back home tonight."

She nodded, gave him a sweet peck, whispered, "I love you" in his ear and left blushing. While Maan touched his lips and gave a smirk.

PRECAP

MYSTERY REVEALED!!😳

PREV - PART 10 NEXT - PART 12

hope you guys enjoy reading it as much as i enjoy writing it!!!😳

please do leave your precious comments

they encourage me to write more!!!!😳

and hit the like button!!!!😳



Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
wanting to know the mystry
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome loved it
i m enjoying it very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow yaar
amazing with ur writing like musu di
awesome

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