[MG FF] Safar...chapter 13 pg 61 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the first look...

start soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds good ...
please continue dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG! Your trademark black and white and VIVALDI! Duh! I had to guess you would do this! Wohoo! Anyway, what about the siggies or the background picture?? what are you going to do for that? oh anyway, we will think of it later!

I absolutely love the first look! That picture with the poem and an antique feel...yippie! I am really excited for this! Continue soon warna khoon kardoongi tumhari! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS ON THE NEW FF .. LOVE TO READ IT .. PLEASE CONTINUE :)
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congo. interesting. jaldi se shuru kardena
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congrats on the new ff😊
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I am really happy for the response I got for this fan fiction. I am really sorry for disappointing all of you. Here I am with the characterization of Safar. I hope you like it. If you didn't, please feel free to express it. I will change it if I can :)

(Maaneet ff)



Ever since that moment,
I was given a punishment for the sins that I must atone,
Those feelings that couldn't reach you...
All because I let go of your hand...
I lost the one I loved the most,
And I'm the one at fault.
If I hadn't let go of your hand,
Would you still be by my side?
If I hadn't... at that time.
My memories are becoming blurry,
I can hardly remember what it used to be like,
To have you by my side.
The pain is crushing me,
Eating away my soul,
I'm wondering around the frozen town,
Where one minute seems like hundreds of years,
I am ruined...I am in pain
Yet I know and believe that you are the only one
Who can bring happiness and rain...
Come back love! Come back to me!
Love is the most blissful experience but it also the worse of worst nightmares one could have. Safar...pyaar ka is the journey of love. It is the story of Maan, who has embarked on a journey to find his lost love...on the way, remembering the memorable moments that he spent with his love, Geet. What is the reason for their separation? Why did she leave him in despair? Did he learn the reason? Did he come to know the actual difference? Will he get back his love?

Only time can tell...

Let us embark on this journey of love along with the lover in pain and help him unite with the one who is his life.

SOULS OF THE STORY:
Maan Singh Khurana


The rude, the obnoxious and self centered brute. Doesn't know to value anyone. He considers his life of utmost importance and to achieve what he wants, he doesn't mind hurting others on the way, using them and throwing them when no longer required. A spoilt rich brat...son of a very famous and hardworking business man, Rajesh Singh Khurana and a lovely lady, Garima Singh Khurana. He is born rich and hasn't got a taste of the real life and the real world. Doesn't believe in God and considers himself the best. Ego and arrogance are his constant companions. He doesn't have an ounce of his parents' qualities in him. 27 year old, brutally rich, obstinately ruthless, heavily irresponsible and hard hearted. He has his own negatives which he considers an integral part of his on-the-edge life. He hasn't learnt to lose, not unless...

Geet Handa

A pediatrician by profession, she is also like a kid. A matured kid who knows what exactly is life. Believes in leading a life according to her own principles and doesn't believe in bending the rules she has created for herself. An embodiment of kindness, love, care and humanity, Geet lives her life as an example to others. Her mother is her world and she doesn't know who her father is, what he is doing or anything about him. Yet, she has no complaints from her life, whatsoever. This 26 year old beauty with brains knows everything and anything happening around her. She is intense, deep and a very strong individual with her own charm and identity in the world. She believes a lot in love stories and knight in shining armors. She has only learnt happiness and still believes that the dream princes always love their princesses unconditionally, unless...
The Other Characters:

Dev Singh Khurana
Cousin of Maan and a neurosurgeon by profession. He, unlike Maan, is very responsible and good hearted individual. He goes by his ideals and doesn't believe in hurting others to achieve something. The two brothers have stark contrast between each other right from their lifestyle. While Maan believes in enjoyment, Dev believes in duty. This 27 year old doctor is an orphan and is raised by Maan's parents. He shares a very good rapport with two of his brothers but not really close to either of them because of the choices he has made in his life.

Roshan Singh Khurana
Younger brother of Maan and like him, an arrogant brute. Follows his elder brother completely because he has everything that is required to be present in a man or as so he thinks. He feels that Dev is wasting his life by running behind sick patients when he was supposed to be enjoying it. He has his own flirty nature, able to please people in a jiffy. He has been gifted with a keen sense of talking and has uncanny ability of twisting talks. Dev often becomes his prey but as he doesn't bother very much, Roshan doesn't really feel that he is doing a great job.

Neha Singhania
A fellow pediatrician and the closest friend of Geet. Knows her best friend in and out. An individual of high principles and ideals. She doesn't believe in compromising. She does what she thinks is right but never hurts others nor is she blunt in her words. She is the biggest pillar of support for Geet after her mother. Being an orphan, she stays in a working woman hostel. She is like a second daughter to Geet's mother Gayatri and respects her like her own mother. If there is one thing that she can't tolerate then it is her best friend getting hurt.

Gayatri Handa
A single mother, living with her daughter. Her daughter Geet is her whole universe. After getting thrown out of her in-laws house, she managed to carve a life for her and her daughter out of great difficulty. She hasn't told Geet about her father and his family because she doesn't want Geet to suffer under that burden of complex family relationships. She has even changed her surname back to her father's because she doesn't want to have any sort of connection with anything belonging to her so called husband.

Sheela Desai
An influential lady in the world of business and aunt of Maan and Roshan. A high headed and an arrogant socialite. Gives lot of importance to appearance and status. After the death of Maan's mother, Maan and Roshan completed their studies staying with her in Chicago. Hates Dev and doesn't consider him a part of family. She absolutely adores Maan and Roshan and pampers them a lot. A wrong person to emulate but unfortunately Maan and Roshan follow her and her high society principles.

Rajesh Singh Khurana
A hard working businessman. Reached the top position all by himself. He considers sending Maan and Roshan to US as his biggest mistake in life. He reckons he had underestimated his Sheela's greed and stupidity because he can see the result of her care in the behavior of two of his sons. He respects and loves Dev more than his sons to their great irritation and considers him as an ideal man. Though Roshan is bothered about his father's closeness with Dev, Maan has gone over it and doesn't care nor get irritated. In fact, Maan doesn't give any importance to his father and his idealism.

Shatrughan Desai
The main player in the lives of Maan and Roshan. He has the ability to twist any kind of situation to his favour. A typical businessman looking for profits and losses in everything he does. No time and interest in the fields of emotions and doesn't give any importance to people around him. His life's aim is to ruin the lives of Maan and Roshan so much that will be impossible to get back to normal and in a way, he has already achieved half of it. His wife is his ally. Though Sheela is unaware of her husband's devious plans, she supports him in his endeavors, nonetheless. He treats Dev as just a mere family doctor doing his job.

Edited by bharadwajrad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
nice cs dear...
put the index dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the characters ...
thanx fr the pm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice cs dear...
continue soon plz...

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