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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
loved the prologue...

waiting for it to start...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aaargh! I know I told I wouldnt update until the 31 of March...its better that I dont make such statements from now on...Hmmph! Needed a break from this bloody Karnataka Board and its lack of responsibilities! My board exam paper got leaked! How about that! Leaked! That too, 2 main subjects...math and physics. With that uncertainity and fear of when are we going to see another paper leak that may lead to postpone of the exams again, all the 12 grade students in Karnataka are waiting! So this was the only way to put out my frustrations...my writing! So here is the update...next update will be after the successful completion of my exams, hopefully :) I hope you like it :)



CHAPTER 1
Coping with the reality…
'Delhi is prone to accidents. Every day we witness worse of the worst accidents occurring. Many people die and their families are left to endure the pain lifelong. Today again, we witness another horrible accident on the outskirts of Delhi and the victim is none other than Maan Singh Khurana, the son of famous industrialist Rajesh Singh Khurana' the news reporter babbled into the mike, letting the people know about the situation.
'Maan Khurana has been admitted to Panacea Super Specialty Hospital and is said to be battling between life and death. We are not getting any inside information as to how Maan Khurana is right now. Rajesh Singh Khurana has not yet arrived at the hospital. We are waiting for any more information to come. Suhana, over to you. With camera man Hrishi, this is Anjana, CNN IBN,' she concluded.
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Beep…beep…beep…
His cell phone sprang into life walking up Rajesh abruptly out of his sleep. He groped for his phone in the dark and looked to see a call from his secretary.
'What the hell, Anita! Is this the time to call?' he barked into the phone.
'I am sorry sir, but there is an emergency, Maan sir has met with a fatal accident…' the secretary muttered urgently into the phone.
For a moment, Rajesh's world came into a standstill as he realized the situation and without thinking, he ran out of the room in his pajamas and barked at the driver to take out the car whilst noting down the name of the hospital his son was admitted in.
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Roshan and Dev came running into the hospital, both panting for breaths and looking extremely confused. Everything was alright until Roshan received a phone call stating Maan had met with an accident.
They saw the doctor coming out an ICU and hurried to him.
'Doctor…' muttered Roshan.
'Are you family of Mr. Maan Khurana?' the doctor asked while checking some reports.
'Yes…how is he?'
'I cannot tell anything right now. He is in a critical condition. Was he drunk?' the doctor asked suspiciously.
'No doc…he left drinking long back' Roshan answered taking Dev by surprise.
'The accident was quite scary, I believe. His condition when he was brought to the hospital was really pathetic. Agar zinda bach gaye toh lucky hai woh. Bohot bura haal hua hai unka. I just can't say anything right now' the doctor said, sadly.

'Aur Geet?' asked Dev, suddenly remembering Geet being with Maan.

'Kaun Geet?' the doctor asked back.

'What is this doctor…aap toh aise pooch rahe hai jaise aapko pata hi nahi…Geet Maan bhai ke saat thi toh agar accident hua hai toh hospital mein hi hogi na…' said Dev, slightly rising up in his temper.

'One moment, kahi aap uss ladki ki toh baat nahi kar rahe jisne Maan Khurana ko yaha admit kiya? She was injured herself lekin treatment nahi liya usne. Chali hayi Maan ko yaha admit karke…' the doctor replied remembering the girl.

'Kaha gayi?' asked Dev, anxious, his voice loud.

'Pata nahi…hume kaise pata hoga…we were treating the emergency and she went away. Please don't get so angry on us' the doctor said sternly and Roshan kept a calming hand on Dev.

Just then, they could see their dad, Rajesh Khurana, rushing into the hospital in his pajamas and looking extremely tense. As soon as he approached them, he burst out 'kya hua? Maan kaha hai? Is he alright?'

But before the doctor could answer his question, a scream rent the air, shattering the silence of the hospital…

'GEEET!!!!'

And a nurse came sprinting out of the intensive care unit, muttering 'Sir, woh Mr. Khurana…' and all of them hurried towards the ICU.

PRECAP:
The shocked face kept looming back to him. His Geet had left him!

Okies, from now on, no promises whatsoever...
So, how was the update? Good? Bad? Worse? Please reply honestly guys...waiting for your likes and comments :)


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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
awesome update...

really loved it...

but wht's dis...shuruat mein hi geet maa ko chhod k chali gayi...magar yeh toh pyar ka safar hai na...toh geet k bina safar ka shuruat kaise hogi...

i dont like dis...sorry...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
I am sorry for not replying to ur individual comments :) I really am :) after my round of exams get over without any paper leak or anything stupid, I will give a mega update and start replying to all individual comments from then on :) Please do like and comment :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

awesome update...

really loved it...

but wht's dis...shuruat mein hi geet maa ko chhod k chali gayi...magar yeh toh pyar ka safar hai na...toh geet k bina safar ka shuruat kaise hogi...

i dont like dis...sorry...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


Oooh itna ghussa? :P :D just joking :)
I understand dear, this is pyar ka safar...I have mentioned in the first look and prologue that maan embarks on a journey to find his lost love...the one who left him and went away...this is a story starting from present and moving on to the past, with maan remembering all the moments with geet :)
I hope u understand and will wait for the entry of geet in past :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
GEET WAS WITH MAAN AT THE TIME OF THE ACCIDENT
THEN WHY DID SHE LEAVE HIM

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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Beautiful start dear!
Chapter 1 is really good :)
Better than Ehsaas to some extent, I am happy...

Well, after watching Gamyam, I Know the reason why Geet left Maan, but you being highly imaginative, I am just waiting for this story to unfold :)

Hopefully, we recieve some good replies to this new one :)

Waiting for chapter 2

By the way, when is our princess gonna come? I am waiting for her :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hope maan is out of critical condition and more anxious to know where is geet and why she left him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan met with an accident...

Geet was with him...she is injured but admitted him in hospital and left him...why?...

hope Maan will be ok soon...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Loved it...
So geet left him..
wats going to happen?

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