[MG FF] Safar...chapter 13 pg 61

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

interesting character sketch...

u stated in ur note on first page that u have discontinued ur all other FFs and will update this only...

what about The Sunshine...will u update this story or not...

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bharadwajrad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

interesting character sketch...

u stated in ur note on first page that u have discontinued ur all other FFs and will update this only...

what about The Sunshine...will u update this story or not...

No, no dear I had discontinued only ehsaas sacha pyaar ka and safar took its place. I havent discontinued any other ff of mine and will update all those soon enough :)

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Remya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Gud character sketch..
waiting for the update.

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Nice CS...
please update soon...😛

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stuti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Nice cs...this story seems a but darker than ehsaas...
Continue soon...

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allibr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

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TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

congarts on ur new ff dear...

love it..

continue soon

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punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

GREAT CS

WAITING FOR THE STORY TO START

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bharadwajrad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Prologue

Apocalypse

I lay there, unable to move, in the shattered mass, counting the seconds that were leading to my end. My whole world was appearing a hazy red...

Red, the sign of destruction; the sign of danger; the sign of blood.

I blinked several times to understand the peril I was in but my mind seemed to be rusted due to the blood. I was unable to comprehend anything...

I was nauseous to blood. I couldn't stand the sight of blood yet I didn't make any efforts to move out of the shattered universe that was coated with blood in its every single inch. That was because of pain...

Not because of the pain my body was enduring but because of the throbbing pain my heart was enduring...

I looked at the seat next to me with my blurry eyes, with great difficulty, as a sharp pain shot up through me, momentarily paralyzing me. I could see a hazy outline of the person I loved the most. I could only see an extremely blurred silhouette of my love...

She wasn't moving but my heart was still beating and I knew that she was alive. But for how long, I didn't know...because before I could reach her, I was engulfed by an intense darkness that sucked the life out of me...

Wow! The prologues of my recent works vary greatly in size. While one has come really long, this one is the shortest prologue ever. Tell me honestly how it has come. Waiting for your replies :)

Edited by bharadwajrad - 13 years ago