'Devil's Desire' Thrd5.New Note Pg150

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#371

Mindblowing update
just loved it
poor uday he cant even hug geet
pls update soon

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#372

Superb update.
I loved it. Heer is too smart. Poor uday.
Precap is interesting.
Continue soon.

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

i hope uday comes there n rescues her...making maan angry...😆

continue soon..

thnx for PM...

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allibr

@allibr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Maan is what he is but don't know why Geet doesn't come across as an intelligent girl or the one with high morals either.

ok ok I know maybe I am over reacting but ofr me last part was lacking somewhere. First of all he is able to make a fool of her so easily. Secondly is she really dumb. He said he won't save her and she believes it. Just now did he not say that she was his desire. Atleast she can retort that what kind of a desire she is if he just lets go of her?

Also, just now she said she preferes death over him...and now she is agreeing to kiss him and seduce him? Fear of life...I agree but if this is agame sometime you have to bluff too. He bluffs all the time and she hasn't learned anything from him

Sorry Annie for such a long rant...but today I did not get any sympathy for her situation. To some extent she herself is responsible for it.

Awesome update though...i guess that is exactly what you wanted to portray here...there are multiple shades of grey here from both the sides

Edited by ritzy09 - 13 years ago

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Dee.

@Dee.

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

finalllyyy u updated :D :D

this maan singh khurana is actually very evill ..

gr88 update continue soon :)

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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#377

awesome updates of both ff's👏... the last part of sacred sin was so beautiful and romantic and geet's funny questions acted as icing on the cake😆...but its ending...😭😭 i will miss it a lot anniee...😭 waiting for the epilogue😊... devil's desire's update was just wow!!! i just read it...this devil is really very mean and clever😆😉...but i am loving him already😛...just cannot wait for the next part to see how geet will seduce her devil 😆and what will he do next😉😆continue soon dear...muaahhh!!!😛

Edited by ns.1 - 13 years ago

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#378

awesome part poor uday love maan and his mastermind

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#379

amazing update...

Maan is real devil...and that snake is still sitting there for so much time...

waiting for next update...

thanx for pm...

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#380

Aww just amazng part..omg ths devil is really mysterious rather say impossible to undrstand.i never be able to guess wat would be hs next step..hw easily he trapped geet and askd to kiss hm..ab toh geet ko kiss karna hi padega..and poor uday god knws wat happens to hm when devil finds hm.cntinue soon..