'Devil's Desire' Thrd5.New Note Pg150 - Page 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeh dekhkar aisa lag raha hai ki Maan khud woh snake ko wahan place kiya hai.hmm..now wanna see how she is gonna seduce him.he is such a devil..
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Posted: 13 years ago
muah muah muah muah
superb :)
Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update...geet plans against him and brings uday as her lover...but is that too easy as she thinking...will he let her so easily without examining them...if maan tries to scare him of his life, uday would tell everything about their paln and again geet will be trapped...
As he trapped her in his desire bet snake, cliff and her devil...
Preacp - ahem...ahem... get should think fast else...!!!!!
Now I am waiting for her seducing act for him...it may be funny...lol...imagening her sedction ...wow enjoying now only...
Please update fast...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol, amazing update
poor geet traped badly up and down...
haaa...waiting for next update...sooo dreamy...
bechara geet's friend...too
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anshra

oh oh ...what can i say...about your sooo creative mind annie👏 👏 👏


i will faint one day for sure after reading those lines of your's in your stories...

you are rendering me speechless day by day...

do you want me to not to give you comments (that too long one)?????

well i will comment and give you the claps for your superb mind...👏 👏 👏

coming to update...maan is not only a desirous devil but clever too...

he knows how to prove himself correct and others wrong at the same time...

geet was like giving her competition by saying He told me to sleep here but he didn't tell me that I can't sit here.

I will just sit here whole night..! No way.. I am not going to sleep with him


but our devil was too smart than her,as he saw her getting down he threw her warnings😆

and awww...geet was left with no other option 😭

maan's line was so true and touchy technically you are the only girl with whom I slept whole night.👏 👏

hmm...ok am not gonna say too much about those creative lines of yours that were about lies (coz if i start then there will be ending of praises or not ,i don't know) so better i keep my mouth shut ...😊

just will say every thing maan spoke about trurth and lie was 100 percent true

and his lines This is how this world is. Truth is too bitter to bear and lie is too sweet to hear. were so true...

and oh this And one more bitter truth is that you can't leave this job for next six months ...i was like oh oh poor geet😭

and lastly hawww...he lied to her about that video thing??????

loved his thoughts...Lie.. A small lie and everything becomes so easy. He smiled sarcastically. You are a fool to believe my lie that I would have your video made in that condition of yours and bigger fool to believe that I would let anyone see that even if it had existed in the first place.

But lie is indeed powerful.


how can she trust him after what he said to her few moments ago about lies and all????? oh girl grow up!!!!!!!!


aww maan is caring towards her as he can't share her video with any one 😆


i guess its enough for one update😆


thnx for pm


continue soon


love rose😉






ohhh
my treat is here
comments by my rose
muah dear
loved the comment as usual
better than my update😳



hawww... dare you say that annie??????

your updates are much much much awesome than my foolish comments😆 😆 😆

well as i didn't get pm for part 9 yet so not commenting on that one...😆

kidding,,,,,,,,, posting my comment shortly on that one

muah to you too...

love rose😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
QUOTE=Speechless] So late comment...Where were you...disappeared for 2 days...I have not seen you yesterday...or celebrating your being Rockerz...
And Congrats for being IF-Rockerz...
Edited by Madhuri53 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
as usual awesome update
omgg geet is trying to get by with maan😆😆😉😉
she does not know what he is i guess
ufff what geet wanted to do and what is going to happen😳😳
looks like geet's plan is going to super flop😉😆
my god i can't believe that snake is there and maan is doing deal with geet🤣🤣
I am in big shock 😆😆 i need someone to pinch me😉😉

once again brilliant work annie👏👏 that all i can say.👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan is missing geet so much that he called her on a sunday too. loved maan saying "I love my life..."
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Posted: 13 years ago

hmm... so geet is trapped badly for 6 months...poor her she can't escape now...

even she gets some kind of false/ pretending BF then also who knows devil will leave his desire...

ahan...heer is very much samajhdaar and mature...😆

what an idea...👏

but i was thinking about that uday poor...will he be standing infront of THE MSK?????

guess not...

dev to patli gali se he nikal gaya tha ye to khud sher k muun me hath marne chala hai...

that too if geet told him k just pretend he karna hai and no touching...

so geet remembered what maan said I won't allow you to let someone lust on you with your approval. And don't compel me to do something you may regret later.

Just don't let anyone touch you..!

If someone touched me without my will..?

Then I will wipe off his existence from the face of this damn earth.

He won't be able to live long enough to lust for you

I won't let him breath in the same air you have passed.

so geet was well aware what can this devil do ... with or without her consent...😭


geet went to the devil's farm house with that poor uday to show the devil that she was in love...oh geet devil is way too smart to know your false lover...😆


if i go to that desire lines of the devil then this comment will be longer ...so skipping that one


but will quote your line...Yes this desire is my destroyer..!

yest it would destroy me..

yest it is destroying me but yet this very desire is my creator...👏 👏


loved the last line to the core...muah muah muahhh...


your lines were wow...👏 👏


this desire is my creator

but yet it is my very destroyer

making me feel alive

yet killing something inside


awesome...👏 👏 👏



maan is too much...she was screaming and pleading for help and that devil was putting conditions after conditions...😆

and then geet's thoughts I can't decide what is more dangerous, deadly water or the devil beside her. I even can't decide what is more poisonous, this snake or my devil..!!!!!!!!!!!!!


did she just call him MY devil??????


wondering will she seduce him??????? naah plzzz kuch to leniency de do maan?????😆


continue soon


love rose😉


t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
please tell me the snake is implanted by devil

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