MG FF-VIVAH-Thread 2 - Page 24

okay

haaayeee!!!!!!!!!!!

eagerly waiting for nxt part !!!

kab milega nxt part ????

plzzz update soon ...

love kanika

awesome love it

PART 10 AND 11

Amazing update.

Ritzy:

Hurriedly caught up on Parts 10 & 11 - I need to read and savor them more slowly when things on the work front ease up. As always, I am deeply drawn in by how sensitively and realistically, you are taking this story forward. The situations you create and the dialogue you write are so achingly real -- nothing fictional or filmy about them. Some scenes may appear boring but then that's life - -right? Can't be on an emotional high all the time. As far as I am concerned, what you wrote is faultless.

Part 10 - -Rano's advice, Geet's private conversation with her Babaaj, the sign from the skies in the form of a rainbow... simply purr...fect!

Regarding the Hope painting - -wasn't Maan completely taken in by it the first time he saw it that he wanted to buy it. SO how come he is allowing it to be stashed away in the garage (unless, he is going to surprise her by having it up in some part of the house that provides comfort and solace to Geet).

I have a feeling VIcky is going to play an important bridge in bringing them together.

You have sculpted this amazingly mature woman -- full of love her man and at the same time pragmatic with a remarkable ability to handle pain and sadness; no rancor about the SR confession from Maan; calling him up and asking him to join for dinner... by giving him the space he needs, she is going to draw him closer to her.

Itna aacha likhti ho -- iss liye kya karein, ek bechaini see ho jaati hai, if I don't get an update every few days.

amazing part di it was not at all boring...it was really touching specially d last part...awww maan was pained seeing d low confidence geet has on him...
but i luved d way geet surprised him wid her behavior n dat richard of york gave battle in vain was awsome...
but again it was painful to see geet not replying to maan...
but yeah nxt moment she asked him dat was gud...
awww geet was waiting wid her held breath but alas maan decided otherwise...but yeah geet is strong n she'll try her best without expectations...
incredibly beautiful part di...
magnificent job...
luvya di...

hope geet did not see that picture of poonam, or she will be more hurt