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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
I dont understand if geet and hewr father are ghost how can they live a normal life like us and how did they die and why only geet's father is there with her why not her other family members.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
awesome loved it
m really enjoying this ff
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Awesome
Loved it
Very different...I wonder whats gonna happen next !??!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Aww this is so sweet!!!! made my day reading this but what are geet and her father hiding???? wait to find out!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
amazing update
continue soon
thank u for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Wow
Beautiful update..
Fabulous...
Luved Maaneet scenes.
Luved it .
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
👏. LOVING IT. CONTINUE SOON
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

A sweet ghost Part 4

plz giv long comments

Maan and Geet were sitting under the banyan tree.
Maan joked:The ghosts in the banyan tree will be celebrating our union.
Geet said in her mind:It's your sweet ghost who is celebrating our union.
M:The famous photographers Baby John are going to take our wedding snaps.They are staying in our house.
Geet was shocked:Photos?No.I don't like taking photographs.
Maan smiled.
G:Maan...i am serious.
Geet's face became red due to anger.
Geet walked off.
M:Geet!
Geet did not look back.

Baby and John went to the ground at night.
Geet who was draped in white saree tickled them.They turned back laughing.She laughed loudly.They got scared and went inside.

Maan in his room..
M:How will i tell Baby John to go back without taking photographs.
Baby and John ran inside his room.
They were sweating.
They:We are going.
Maan was shocked:Why?
They:Are you bringing up ghosts here?We saw a ghost here.
Maan controlled his laughter.
He thought:I think they are mad.
M:So you both will not come for the wedding to take photographs?
They:No way.Ghosts will come there to have dinner.So good-bye.
Maan laughed.
M:So funny.Anyways i did'nt have to do anything.We got rid of them easily.

Maan and Geet had a joyful wedding.
Geet and Maan wedding pic (161175) size:1280x800
Grihpravesh..
When Geet put her foot inside the Khurana Mansion there was a storm.Everybody got scared.It ended in a few moments.But everybody's including Geet's face was dull.
D:It is ok Geet.Don't worry about that.
Geet was relieved.

Geet entered their room.She was surprised to see the room decorated with lit candles.
Maan came smiling.
G:Maan!
Maan lifted her up in his arms singing
'Dil kyaa kare jab kisee se
kisee ko pyaar ho jaaye

jaane kahaa kab kisee ko kisee se pyaar ho jaaye
unchee unchee diwaaron see
is duniyaan kee rasme

naa kuchh tere bas mein jyoolee
naa kuchh mere bas me

dil kyaa kare jab kisee se kisee ko pyaar ho jaaye
jaane kahaa kab kisee ko kisee se pyaar ho jaaye...'{Julie}.
She blushed.


Geet,Annie and Maan entered Dadima's room.She was shedding tears looking at veena.
G:Dadima!What happened?
Annie:She is thinking of dadaji are crying.He only taught her to play veena.
G:Oh Dadima...
Geet hugged Dadima.
G:We all are there with you.
Dadima was still sad.

Geet started singing a song.
Slowly dadima became cheerful.
Maan and Annie were surprised to hear her song.
A:Geet...we did'nt know that you sing so well.
D:Yes Geet beta...you sang so well.
Dadima kissed Geet's forehead.
G:Thank you so much dadima.
Maan rolled his eyeballs on her.

Geet comes out after bath.She was looking sizzling in her night suit.Maan could not take his eyes off her.
M:You sang so well Geet.It reminded me of the song i heard near the banyan tree...that ghost's voice was exactly like yours.
Geet's face became dull.
Maan chuckled:I was just making fun of you.
G:This is how you tease?If you tease me like this i will go.
He pulled her towards him.They shared a killing eye lock.
M:Where will you go?You can go only if i let you go.Right?I will never let you go.

Geet in her mind:I don't want to go away from you Maan.But i have to go.Otherwise some witch will catch me and stick me to some banyan tree.If so even our Queen will not accept me as i did'nt return on time.

Nadesh and Hridayshalab in their room.
N:The other house will be given to Annie.Khurana Mansion will go to Maan.It should not happen.Maan should be finished before Geet delivers his baby.Maan should be killed.
H:But Geet?She will get the property if Maan dies.Right?
N:You try to woo her.If you marry her,you will get wealth and a wife.
Geet who overheard this was shocked.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
awesome update
loved it

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