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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
awesome part
loved it
so geet is a ghost
waiting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
who is geet?? n banyan tree...what is it associated with??

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
loved it was is geet loved it pleas continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
amazing dear
loved it
geet is mysterious
i think she is the ghost 😛
cont soon dear
cant wait to read more
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

A sweet ghost Part 3

Maan went to the place where Geet was found.He did'nt see anyone.
M:Geet said every evening she comes here.Today why is she not seen here?
He sat under the banyan tree.
He heard a girl singing a song.Very sweet voice.
Geet was singing the song wearing a white saree.
Maan tried to get up to search for the owner of the voice.But he was not able to get up.Geet saw Maan.

She became happy.
Her saree changed into a salwar kameez.
Maan was struggling hard to get up.
G:What happened Maan?
He was surprised to see her.
M:I am not able to get up.
She extended her hand towards him.
G:Hold my hand and get up.
He held his hand and got up.
G:Why did you say that you were not able to get up?
M:I swear..i was not able to get up.
G:It must have been your illusion.
M:Maybe.Because i always think about you,nothing else.
She simply looked at him.
M:Do you think this banyan tree is the shelter of ghosts?
G:What if i think like that?Should i get scared?All ghosts are not cruel.
M:I felt that i heard a beautiful song.Dadima says that song or voice which is heard near a banyan tree will be ghost's.
G:Oh!Why did you come here?
M:To see you.I felt like seeing you.
G:Why did you wait near the banyan tree to see me?You think i am a ghost?
Maan giggled:If you are a ghost,i am in love with a ghist...a sweet ghost.
Geet was sweating.
He laughed:I was kidding.You said you come here regularly after sunset.That's why i came here.
She was relieved.
M:When should you leave your house?
Geet stared at him.
M:Annie told me everything.Don't worry.After marriage my house will be yours.Dadima also wants a Radha for her grand son,not a wealthy girl.So don't worry about that.I can never forget you.
Geet raised her eyebrows and looked at him.
G:I don't think even i can forget you.I have become this Krishna's Radha.
She was shy.Maan was very excited.
G:It's really getting late.You go back.We will meet tomorrow.
M:Ok.Good night.
G:Good night.
M:Sweet dreams.
She blushed.
He walked off looking behind to get glimpse of her.

Geet told her father:I tried my maximum to avoid Maan.But i am not able to..Am i wrong?I can't forget Geet.I can't hurt him.But when i go back it will be like hurting him.
She was confused.
He:If you ignore him he will be shattered.He will never be happy.At least for some time let him live happily.
Geet sat under the banyan tree and thought about it.

Maan ran towards Annie.
M:Annie...Geet loves me.
A:Did she tell like that?
M:Yes.
Dadima came.
Maan was embarassed.
Dadima smiled:I know that you have fallen in love with Radha.I am so happy for you.
Maan was very happy.
Annie put her arm on his shoulder:So Finally our Maan Singh Khurana is going to be a responsible guy.

Annie and Dadima giggled.

Maan and Geet were on long drive.
He stopped the car.
G:Why did you stop the car here?This is suicide point.Right?

M:Yes.But it's so beautiful.Let me see it properly.
G:Don't go so far.
M:Don't be scared.I will be back soon.
Maan went.Geet was tense.
After some time also Maan did'nt coe back.She got out of the car to look for Maan.She did'nt find him.She got scared.She screamed:Maaannn!
Suddenly Maan came before her.She was so emotional that she cried.
G:Maan!
He smiled:You got scared?
G:Why did you go so far?I am not scared to come here.I will not die for sure.But if you come here...it's dangerous.I am scared Maan.

He carassed her face:Do you think i will leave you purposefully and go somewhere?
Geet looked at him emotionally.

Maan's family went to Geet's house to fix their marriage.
Hridayshalab observed the banyan tree.
H:A special smile.
He saw a snake on the tree.He shivered due to fear.
Geet came with sweets for everyone.She touched Dadima's feet.Dadima blessed her.Dadima liked her very much.
D:I knew that my Krishna's selection would be perfect.Geet is a perfect Radha.
Geet blushed.
Maan became very happy.
Geet looked at him.They shared a beautiful eye lock.
Hridayshalab got inside the house with fear.
H:There is a banyan tree and a snake here.
Geet's and her father's face became dull.
Annie laughed seeing his fear.
Geet's father:There is no ghost in the banyan tree to attack us.
Dadima:Leave it Hridayshalab.If there is a banyan tree also how does it matter.
Geet and her father were relieved.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
ha ha ha
too gud
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
omg!wat is happening..
is maan going to die?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
wow its getting ..vry vry interesting ...updt sooon plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maan
sooo sweet
finally geet confessed
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

seems she too cant hurt him

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