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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome love it dear very nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
cant she stay for some more time
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Posted: 13 years ago
a very interesting update...wondering what will be maan's take on this
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Posted: 13 years ago
am scared of ghost... amazing update dear
love how geet told H and swami about her legend
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
waiting for next part
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful...
Oh no is geet really going to return
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Posted: 13 years ago

A sweet ghost Part 8


Since it's d last part plz giv long comments.plZ WRITE uR FAV charac & fav scene

Geet started crying.There were storm,rain and thunder.She looked at the sky through the window.She saw a white face in the sky.
G:I am coming back Queen.
Queen:Don't come now.You are a wife now.So separating you from your husband is a sin.
Geet was surprised.
Queen:You pray to Goddess for changing you into a human being by getting rid of all ghostly powers.You seek permission from Goddess to possess this body forever.If Goddess blesses you you live here as Maan's wife.Otherwise after a week you come back to the land of ghosts.
The Queen disappeared.
Geet's white saree turned into salwar kameez.
Maan,dadima and Annie came there.
Geet lied:Chandranayan Swamy went back saying that i have no problem.Hridayshalab is so embarrassed that he can't face anyone.So he also left.
They all were happy.
Maan:I knew it.
Dadima:I am happy for you.
Dadima hugged Geet.
Annie:Good that Hriday left.He was such a big disturbance.

Maan and Geet prayed in the temple before Goddess' idol.Geet opened her eyes.The flower from the idol fell on her hand.Her eyes got filled up with tears.
She said in her mind:Goddess blessed me.Thanks a lot.Now i can live with Maan forever.
Suddenly Geet fainted.Maan was shocked.He held her tightly screaming:Geet!

The doctor tests Geet.
The doctor smiled:A good news is there.Geet is expecting.Maan Singh Khurana...you are going to be a father.
Geet and Maan were excited.
Annie:Wow!So sweet.
Dadi:I am going to be a great grand mother.I am so happy.
Dadi sat near Geet:I can't wait for the baby to arrive.
Maan and Geet hugged Dadima.
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Maan and Geet with Dadima from show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

D:Annie...we both will go out.Let Maan and Geet have some private moments.
Maan and Geet were shy.
Dadima and Annie left the room.
Maan carassed Geet's hand.
M:I am so happy Geet.
She blushed.

Her face became dull.
G:Maan...this is the second phase of our life.Before we start it i want to tell you something.I want to make a confession.
Maan looked at her seriously.
Geet told him everything.Maan could not believe it.He was numb.Tears dwelled in his eyes.
Geet became upset seeing his tears.
G:Maan...please don't hate me.I am not a ghost anymore.And i love you a lot.Please don't think i hid such a big truth from you because i don't love you.I love you a lot and i can't live without you.
Maan wiped her tears:I know that you love me a lot Geet.I went to the suicide point to test how much you love me..how much you care for me.That moment you were scared whether you will lose me.That itself proved how much you love me.I love you a lot even if you turn out to be a ghost again.
Geet became very emotional:Maan!I am so lucky to be your wife.
She embraced him with tears.
M:Geet...your father?
G:He left earth putting an end to his fancy life.
Geet was upset about her father's exit from this world.
M:Geet...don't be upset.I will tell you something to make you happy.We will sit under a banyan tree.
G:No Maan.I am not a ghost anymore.So it does'nt make me happy anymore.
M:Then what will make you happy?
G:Can i sit on your lap instead of sitting under the banyan tree?It will make me happy.
M:You naughty girl.
They laughed.
Geet sat on his lap.
G:Maan...is your lap paining?Is my weight a burden for you?

Maan giggled:So funny.Your weight is not a burden.I feel very nice when you sit on my lap.
She became shy.
They both shared a lovely eye lock.

After 8 months...
Geet delivered a baby girl.
It was a beautiful emotional moment for Maan and Geet.
Geet's eyes became wet:Maan...our baby...
Maan looked at her:Thank you Geet for making me a prowd father.

They pampered their baby.

Maan makes their daughter Ritu wear a lovely white gown.He carried her in his arms.

G:Maan...what is this?
M:I just dressed up my lovely daughter.She is a sweet little princess.Exactly like you.
Geet smiled.

The end
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the whole concept a lot Jasmine
For me two parts really stood out
one where Geet shows the mirror of reality to Swamy and harsh and secondly when she confessed her truth to Maan.
In this FF, Maan had a very small role as I felt it was all about Geet and I loved her as a character most
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
really loved it
atlast u made geet a human love u for this
i loved that geet told the whole truth to maan
awesome ending of amazing ff

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
thanks for the pm
i really luvd this story

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