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Kagaz ki Kashthi Luv tht Sacrifices Life
Part 30
Geet: for coming in my life, for loving me so much,, for accepting my life like its ur,, thank u for everything..
Maan: thanks to u for recognizing me what is love'.
Its almost 1pm when geet finally manage to open her eyes' he sat up with a jerk, she searched for maan but he was not there, and then she heard the shower is open, maan must be in' she collect her dress and slipped in that before he will be out, but maan came when she was zipping her kurti.. he smirks and goes to help her, rather say tease her' feeling his cold touch on her back she shivered'. She can feel his finger sliding the zip down..
Geet: maannn,,, she turns instantly and he held her waist bringing close to his chest'.
Maan: umm?
Geet: aap kya kar rahe hain.
Maan: I guess it call love' she suppresses her blush n smile
Geet: no u r teasing me '
Maan: really he said with an innocent face' she nodded in yes' maan tried to come close but geet wacked his arm..
Geet: maan I want to freshen up 1st.. Remember we have to go for a party and that to my best friend's party' he cutely cribbed and nuzzle close to her neck' maan please'
Maan: its only 1 geet, we have loads of time'
Geet: hmm but we have to go early for last minute checking' he didn't budge instead started placing wet kisses on her jaw, she shivered in his touch and a moan came out' maan''
Maan smirks: u still want to go early? He whispers kissing the earlobe' she was breathing heavy'. He continues his torture and came to her shoulder, he slides off the kurti and places a deep intense kiss'. She held him tight, he bite the area in passion and that brought her senses'.
Geet: maan!!!!!! not now,, I have to freshen up. Please' maan sighes a frustrating breath and made a cute pouting face'
Maan: then chalo I will also give u company to the shower,, her mouth just fell on the ground..
Geet: no way..
Maan raise his one eye brow and took a step towards her, it was like a hungry lion walking towards it's pray' she looks here and there and before he can catch her she pushes him, the force was sudden and she ran off to the washroom'
Maan looks at her in concern: sambhal k geet'
Geet bite her lips remembering the baby, and turn to see his fuming eyes'
She held her ear mumbling sorry' he sighed relief breath and looks at her' she just smiles and enters the washroom'
Maan: ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi (the famous dialogue of MSK)
After doing some lunch and romance finally both headed towards the party venue at 5 pm' geet was really excited and maan was happy to see her like that' he often steals glances of her, she is his wife, they loves each other madly, he had touched her numerous time but the sweet feeling of love and to see her like that is unexplainable'
Love is not only about physical needs, its beyond any need or deed' it's a feeling heaven when u see ur love happy and u feel torment to see one drop of tear in his or her eyes' that is true love'
Geet saw him looking at her, a blush came on her cheeks, he finds it amusing everytime to see her blushing face but he will not deny he feels so good to see her that red cheeks' they reached the venue in half n hour and geet comes out excitedly, meera was there, she held her securely'
Meera: sambhal k ladki,, geet do u have any gajini problem of forgetting thing in 15 mins? Geet looks at her with confuse face' u are jumping like a old 22yr geet who doesn't have any responsibility, do u forgot u are pregnant and this type of excitement can be harmful for the baby'
Maan looked at her hearing the words, he felt some kind of pang to hear that.. she was only 22yr young girl who always loved to laugh and doing jumping here n there, full on masti' but because of him she got the responsibility,, a burden' his heart felt chocked, does she feels the life burden, she is not the same geet anymore because of him' every girl wanted a life of good memories, after marriage he never gave a pampering time, only responsibility was on her shoulder'.
Will she regret being with him later? Like geet can sense his tension, she assured meera that she will take care of herself and when maan is there she doesn't have to take tension'. Meera smiles at her unconditional love'
When she was in relationship with sujal, she never shows so much affection, meera saw the unbound unconditional love geet has for him that she never had for sujal also, though she thought being with him, caring him and spending time with him was love, she is not so wrong also, but the fact is maan has created a big place that covered sujal place also' his undying love and faith won her heart selflessly'
Geet slipped her hand in his entangling with her'
Geet: maan the gift is more precious than anything in this world for me.. and I m enjoying my life to the fullest' when u r with me beside I don't need anything' u have pampered me like a princess, maybe more than that' I know what u were thinking but please question urself and ur love u r doubting in our relation that is not so weak.. he can saw the sincere words and their meaning in her eyes' he kissed her forehead..
Maan: thank u' I love u geet'
Geet: I love u too' and more' she hugged him tight' both went to the hall, and saw the big hall n decoration' maan saw her excitement has no bound' he can see geet is returning to her old self, the bubbly and chatter box with a shyness ofcourse that added her quality'
Meera: sab ready hain u have don't have to worry anything geet' u just take care of the guest' and maan jiju has already arranged everything' he will take of jay..
Maan: hmm I will receive jay to the venue, I already said him to come here as a business party is going on'
Geet: he must be feeling sad for not wishing him'.
Maan & meera: geet,, he will be happy to see the surprise,, stop being melodramatic'.
Meera laughed at her and geet frowns at them'
Geet: ha ha samajh gayi,, just let him come, then I will show what call team,, my brother will be on my side only' badhi team bana rahe ho na aap dono' she made a cute baby angry face,, meera just hit her own head with her palm and signal maan to handle her who just smiles'
Meera was busy in the dcor when maan came from behind and held geet waist in a hug' she tried to shove him but he held her tight..
Maan: gussa hain meri mishty? She made a face and looks away' hmmm baby bhi gussa hain? she looks at her tummy and felt nothing' maan smiles at her cute gesture and kissed her cheeks.. sorry'. U know na i love to pulling ur leg'
Geet: ha ha u all always teases me,, no one loves me' ye baby bhi partiality karta hain' he just wanted ot eat her alive, the cuteness always sbrings smile on his face' he kissed her cheeks tightly'
Maan: I love ur cute angry cherry cheeks' she instantly smiles hearing him' he hugged her more tigt from the back'
Geet: maan now go' u should bring jay on time'. he bow at her command'.
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Guest started coming in a flow' their collage friends and business associated' geet and meera took care of everything... they greeted jay's parents, who was amazed to see the grand arrangement'.
Soon geet saw sujal is entering the hall.. of course being a long time friend how can meera refuse to invite him' he comes towards them'
Geet was a little apprehensive but she smiles at him' sujal return with equal affection' sujal hugged meera and then goes towards geet who just took one step back unknowingly' geet saw the sadness in his eyes' meera looked at the two with helplessness.. once the 4 was so close' she thought a idea..
Meera: a group hug? Sujal and geet saw her and smiles'
3 of them gave a group hug, that felt so good.. after so many months they behave like best friends.. whatever happen that couldn't lost the love as a friend everyone hold in their life' sujal saw geet has put a little weight but she is glowing' and then geet's cell rang' she broke the hug and a sweet smile came on her lips..
Geet: maan'
Sujal was hurt to hear the name with so much love, how can he forget his 4yr love' but to see her so happy he couldn't hold himself' a small smile came on his lips' geet excitedly excuse herself and starting talking with maan with glittering eyes'
Sujal to meera: she is really happy..
Meera: yes she is.. maan's love always made her so happy' then she realize what she blurted.. she looked at him with sorry face but he smiles'
Sujal: I know, meera was surprised to see him like that' don't look at me like that meera' yes I have feeling for geet still now,, but her happiness is more important to me' and if she is happy with him be that only.. but yeah that doesn't mean I have forgiven maan.. I will still watch his every move.. if he hurt geet by any single point I will never leave him for that' and that a promise from a true friend'
Meera smile through tear: don't worry he loves her more than his life' I m so happy to hear that u wanted move in ur life.. geet will be really happy to hear it sujal..
Sujal: hmm,, but 1st we should concentrate on the party,, where is jay?
Meera: he is still not here, jiju had gone to receive him.. sujal was shocked'
Sujal: maan singh khurana and receiving someone..
Meera smiles: yes he is' he had changed himself fully rather say geet's love changed him for the good'.
Sujal: I hope his love can change her destiny also..
Meera: he will'. she hugged him side way'
Geet came there: guys jay is coming' switches off the light'
Sujal: I will' he went for that'
Jay enter the hall that is now pitch black'
Jay: kaha leaya mere bhai? Is this a haunted party?
Everyone suppress their smile'.
Jay: koi kuch bolta kyun nahi.. maan where r u man? God I can't believe I m entering a ghost party.. or a haunted place'.
He was blabbering him self and maan make his way towards geet'
Geet meera sujal was standing in a row,, geet felt a hand sliding on her wais, she wanted to scream but he places his palm on her mouth'
Maan: shhh mishty,, ur maan' she took a sigh relief and then wacked his hand on her stomach..
Geet in a hush tone: aise koi darata hain, u now how much I get scared..
Maan: what do u think, I will let anyone touch u? I will cut the hand who will try to touch u, I will take out the eyes who will look at u,, her eyes popped out and before he can say anything she placed her palm on his mouth..
Geet: bas maan'. she hide her face in his chest' and he kissed her forehead lightly'
Sujal can hear everything as he was just beside her' a tear fell from his eyes but he smiles at his misery'
Maan make her see the front where jay was still blabbering and no-one has the mercy to say anything to him'
Jay: ohh God, I will never ask u anything please save me today' he saw the door was closed and then the whole hall lighten up' for a moment he was blind with a sudden light'
And then he heard the sound of clapping and birthday song' everyone sang for him and jay's smile got wider' he saw geet n meera was singing the song and just rushes to them' he pulls both the girl in a big hug with a cute smile'
Jay: I knew it, u can never forget my birthday.. I love u guys' maan n sujal watches them in amusement as jay actually shed his tears'
Geet: oye bas bas, we know how much u know us,, u thought we forget and that's why so upset ha?
Meera: yeah and that's why so senty talk on the call.. he bites his lips and smiles weakly' and again hugs them'
Sujal: wah looks like I m not exist in the world..
Jay: oye aaja,, he pulls him in the group hug.. its long time they didn't hug each other like this' maan saw warmth in the hug that he never felt as a friend from anyone.. everyone was always behind his money,, no one cared for the maan' geet saw his sad eyes and gesture him to come but he sweetly refuse, he thought he is not fitted in the place' he was walking away when geet held his hand and pulls in the hug' now this gang has 1 more member, said meera'. He looks at geet saying thank u with the eyes' she rest her head on his chest'
Sujal saw that and felt maan is not so bad'.
After all the emotional sweet sweet talk finally jay cut the cake and fed to his parents and his friends'
Jay was talking with maan and geet finds it fishy as they were talking in a hush tone' she tapped jay's shoulder who just jerk that,, maan saw her and indicate him to look back but again jay jerk her hand'. it made her annoyed'. He poked his shoulder again'
Jay: kya hain yaar, let me plan the proposal 1st, I want it very smooth.. don't disturb me'.
Geet: propose? Jay gulp hard and looked at fuming geet..
Geet: what is cooking in both of u?
Maan: he want to propose meera'
Geet's eyes goes widen: u n meera, u are proposing her? she said in a flat tone..
Jay doesn't know what to say: wo umm actually' maan shook his head in negative
Maan: jay go..
Jay: but..
Geet meera,,
Jay: ha?? Don't tell her geet please' she will kill me' (tich wondering he wanted to propose her and now he is afraid ufff, jay kab sudhrega)
Geet: uff jay, u want to propose her and now u r sweating so badly.. look there is she'
He saw meera was coming to them only'
Jay: mujhse nahi hoga'
Maan: uff jay, remember u practiced it so many time.. geet looked at him unbelievingly, he knew it but didn't told her, and moreover MSK helping someone for confessing his love' she doesn't know what to think, how many sheds has he'.
Jay: hmmm ok I m going,, agar kuch huya it will be ur responsibility, I m single child of my parents maan.. he laughed and gives him his wishes' geet smiles and hugged him with best of luck wish'
Geet: u knew it?
Maan: I told u'
Geet: u never told me that he is planning to proposing her
Maan: he took me swear'
Geet raises her eyes brow and looked at him suspiciously but maan pulls her by holding her waist,, she saw the crowd and warn him but he is nowhere to listen.. he kissed her cheeks and whisper
Maan: he loves her and wanted my help, how can I say no to him when I know what feels when u r in love..
Geet leaned on his chest and kissed his chest over her heart'
Maan: geet don't make me lift u in my arm to the bedroom,, her mouth went a O and hit his chest playfully'
Geet: I love you'.
Maan: I love u too'
Jay & meera standing in the middle of the hall: I LOVE YOU'. Maaneet looked at them in amusement'
Both wanted to confess their feeling' and both came towards each other,, but before jay can say anything meera said she wanted to say something, then jay said the same.. and then both said in unison I LOVE YOU'.
Geet: confession is over?
Maan: I think so he said doubtfully'
Meera smiles at jay: wo actually I always wanted to say this but being a girl
Jay: I know and actually I was so afraid of u that couldn't said anything.. but today I thought to confess my feeling' so what say?
Meera looks ta him with great anger: what say? That's it? U want to say this only? I mean how can u say this only' I thought atleast u will do a proper confession.. it looking like a bargaining'
Jay: bargaining? Do u think it is looking like a bargaining? When both are agreeing that we love each other then what is bargaining?
Meera: but u said what say? What does that means? Atleast propose me in a good manner..
Jay: I did na
Meera: was that a proposal,, that was statement only
Jay: but'
Geet: what is going on there?
Maan: I don't know'
Sujal: rat cat fighting in love'.
Maan: god ye dono kab badhe honge
Geet: unusual love
Sujal: unusual proposal'.
Preacp: again a proposal???
one more twist'..
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How s the twist guys? So finally what do u think about sujal now? But one think I want to say there are lots more twist to come hehehhehe'..
ok i won't be able to update other ff except "Kaise Kahen" tomorrow and the next day also,, as i have writen some part of it will update next part tomorrow... sorry again i m on leave for 2 days...
Edited by tich.1990mg - 13 years ago
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