OS - 'Unseen Dream' - Page 8

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

Ritzz... finally i read it...!!!!! 😃
chappal khaane ka mann nahi tha... 😆
okay lemme jz tell u bout ur OS... 😛

it was BEAUTIFUL...!!!!!!
speacially ur poems...
aaahhh... as I always say they are brilliant my girl..!!
the way u weave the feelings together in ur poems is remarkable..!!
deep emotions through simple words... that's ur art..!!! 👏

I loved the idea of the OS..
thnxx to Aniie appi that u posted it... 😆
but i really like the idea...
aaahhh... sachhi kahun... when u mentioned the eye lock.. i cud see every maaneet eye lock flashing right in front of my eyes..!!!
brilliant...!!!!

aur haan... i love the earring thingi... nice nice...
dadima to bohot hi fast forward nikli...
shaadi attend krne aai thin aur apne pote ki shaadi fix kr di... heheh..😆
way to go Dadi..!!! 👍🏼

n then the hug..
srsly.. i instantly remembered the maaneet hug on their first date...
beautiful Ritzz...

love u..❤️

so sweet.. its true when love comes knocking it will happen and no one can change it.. as its in ur destiny

it was a very simple beautiful os.poem was gud.geet losing her parents made me upset

awesome os
I loved it...
Me already vachla hota ha os...juz rd 2nd tym😊

Aowww that was too cute one u know!! One of the most refreshing one from my ever boring books which were all bent to render me to sleep 😆

aoww Maanvi is one of those cute friend who help rebuilding a new persona when we feel everything is empty a hollow, that's the true need where we need a friend to be beside us

aowww love at first sight *winkies* waah beta Maan kya sahi track pakda hai ladki ko dekha baad main n ladki Inn pehle 😆 wwooopp wooopp

waah mere sher earring dhundte dhundte ladki ka dill gayab kar dia sahi jaa re ho Maan beta 😆 aowww I Just Love it
and the searching scene was too cute
and then the final dhundne pe kissie wissie kya return gift mila na Maanu Jaanu ko bahttt naacha raha hoga wo gift le k, but uske reply main uska naughtiness dikh raha tha n wo b khooobbb mazee main 😆

singing jab se mere dil ko tujhpe marna aa gaya sabko chehra padhna aa gaya *winkiieesss* issilie to dadi maa bhi samjh gayi

waahhh i luv it have i told yaa

and then finally when the room scene, me wondering was there any need of words *winkies* nopesy

n meri poetest the poem was a bowler, I Just Loved the poem, it was tooo mesmerizing u know, trully depecting the unseen dreams of Geet which were perfectly seen by Maan and also rendered fulfilled
Ritz I Just Love it
but U know i have read it once before i dont know when aaj wapis read kara to yaad aaya

Bohot acha laga...lovd it ... 😊 ...!plz add me to u budy list n send pmz...plz...

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

Aowww that was too cute one u know!! One of the most refreshing one from my ever boring books which were all bent to render me to sleep 😆

aoww Maanvi is one of those cute friend who help rebuilding a new persona when we feel everything is empty a hollow, that's the true need where we need a friend to be beside us

aowww love at first sight *winkies* waah beta Maan kya sahi track pakda hai ladki ko dekha baad main n ladki Inn pehle 😆 wwooopp wooopp

waah mere sher earring dhundte dhundte ladki ka dill gayab kar dia sahi jaa re ho Maan beta 😆 aowww I Just Love it
and the searching scene was too cute
and then the final dhundne pe kissie wissie kya return gift mila na Maanu Jaanu ko bahttt naacha raha hoga wo gift le k, but uske reply main uska naughtiness dikh raha tha n wo b khooobbb mazee main 😆

singing jab se mere dil ko tujhpe marna aa gaya sabko chehra padhna aa gaya *winkiieesss* issilie to dadi maa bhi samjh gayi

waahhh i luv it have i told yaa

and then finally when the room scene, me wondering was there any need of words *winkies* nopesy

n meri poetest the poem was a bowler, I Just Loved the poem, it was tooo mesmerizing u know, trully depecting the unseen dreams of Geet which were perfectly seen by Maan and also rendered fulfilled
Ritz I Just Love it
but U know i have read it once before i dont know when aaj wapis read kara to yaad aaya

Originally posted by: nishnal

Bohot acha laga...lovd it ... 😊 ...!plz add me to u budy list n send pmz...plz...

Superb os dear Loved it to the core...