Pt4/5 'Devil's Desire' thrd3 Pg31/72

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

wow!
jus heard
that you are updating!
thats awesome!
me waiting

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shristi1

@shristi1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Amazing update

Loved it to the core.

Now geet has 2 work as devil's Secretary.

What will happen now?

Do continue soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

OMG OMg... What an update di...!!!!

Me loved it sooo much...!!!!

Uff Me Loving ur DEvil sooo much...!!!!

Hayeee What an Attitude...!!!

Me mae jawa aniee di u gave DEVIL pe...!!!

Lolz Beachari...!!! Sooo much fear while going to office..!!!

Hmmm... Lolz she thought he didnt remember...???😆

Got nice shock after listning his words..😲😆

Ohh Geet Handa... Lagta hai Sherni is Back...!!!

Me loved Geet also sooo much...!!!!

Hayeee Party & one night together...!!!!!😳

Uff me to o lala o lala dreammyyy land me chali gayi reading that...😳

Lolz Loved the way when geet said but & he was increasing demands...😆

Ufff Di... U r making me greedy for more & more updates...!!!!

Di... Update sooon plzzz ab to.. Me cant wait after readin last line of MSK..!!!

The update was mindblowing...!!!!!!!

Stupendo Fantabulously Fantastic update...!!!!

Luv ya sooo muchhh...!!!!!!!

hugs to u...!!!!!!😳

Edited by mishtiritu - 13 years ago

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Aniee... what an update yaar...

Geet thought that actually devil would have forgotten the incident in his nasha... Poor gal... how can she have such high hopes when the devil is Maan Singh Khurana... 😉

I loved their meeting in Office... The cool devil and the scared Geet...

The best thing about this devil is that he is too cool... very composed... i loved his attitude when he asked Geet to come in and discussed about the job...

and when Geet started to relax thinking he forgot, his dialogue "Don't forget.. you have only six months"... that was such a brilliant one... uff... i was totally bowled over in that!!!

I loved their argument... and ofcourse the best was when devil increased the penalty for her each but... That was just ultimate!!!

And the best dialogue of devil was "In hell.. devil is god"

Am totally going gaga about devil...

continue soon Aniee...

Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago