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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bunch of Hearts

So Geet was deceived??? 🤔
Caught Love
And Maneet is trying to mend the broken hearts????
so sweettt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey i like ur ff .but i missed some prts and now i hv very less time to come to if.would u explain in few wrds wht happened till now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww mel awesome teaser yar
waiting for update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: music_girl

Bunch of Hearts

So Geet was deceived??? 🤔
Caught Love
And Maneet is trying to mend the broken hearts????
so sweettt...


Love the pics I don't know if geet is deceived She won't tell me 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I don't know nobody wants to tell me asked both geet and maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mel420


Love the pics I don't know if geet is deceived She won't tell me 🤣

lol, dont you know the method, give her a chocolate and saw "tell me?" she will def tell you am sure, girl with blue hair 😆 stupid didn't know how to ask *kidding* 😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: music_girl

lol, dont you know the method, give her a chocolate and saw "tell me?" she will def tell you am sure, girl with blue hair 😆 stupid didn't know how to ask *kidding* 😆😉


I gave her chocolates she ate everything didn't even share and after that she told me she forgot what happened
But I think who should try to ask @t_areeb heard she is Mrs. Khurana. She must know more then us.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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will try my level best to update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3
Maneet's Monologue

I came to get the diary and I saw mom reading it, a tear escaped her eyes. It felt horrible to see her cry and the word mom escaped my lips. I saw mom putting the diary on the table and she wiped her tear a away.

G: Maneet did you take a shower and clean your room up?

M: Mom what happened? Where you crying?

G: No there was a hare in my eye Yes that was it. Geet said with a shaky voice, trying to convince Maneet. But forget that did you clean your? she asked with a stern voice.

M: No mom wo ehmm he started stammering.

G: no excuses go clean your room up.

Maneet's monologue

She found the diary dahm it and she was crying again. What was in that dairy that made her so upset. I need to know.I want my mom to be happy. I need to do something. Tonight when she is sleeping I will go up to her room and steal that diary. Yes that's a brilliant plan.

Geet crapped her diary and put it in her closet ,on the highest self beneath her sari's and she went off to bed. Maneet who was waiting for Geet to fall in sleep sneaked into her room. He was secretly watching Geet, so he knew where she put the diary. He stood next to Geet and waved his hands in front of her closed eyes, to see if she was still awake. Nope Maneet told himself she is a sleep.He walked over to the dressing table took the chair and put it in front of the closet. After he got the dairy he sneaked downstairs to Geet's home office and he copied every page of the diary. He went back to Geet's room and put the diary back in his place.

He put the diary papers in his drawer and locked it. The keys he put in his teddy bear. His teddy bear looked like a normal teddy bear the only difference was that in this teddy bear you could put stuff, without any one noticing it. Maneet had plenty of such crazy stuff. He wants to by a spy, so Geet bought him all the crazy things you can image. Even Geet doesn't remember what she bought him. Maneet got teddy with a camera in it, a laser pen, glasses whit which you can see what's happening behind you, you named it he's got it.

The next day.

G:Maneet wake up come on it's time to get ready, you have to go to school. Come on hurry up then I can drop you, or else you will have to go with ramu kaka.

M: I am up mom. I don't wanna go with ramu kakka. I wanna go with my sweet mom.

G: Good then get ready fast. I have a important meeting at ten, I don't want to be late. So hurry.

Geet owned a huge fashion company in California, called D&G Designs. People wore the brand D&G all over the world.

Geet was sitting in her office working when her phone ringed it was her secretary Abigail.

A: Ma'am I scheduled a appointment for you with Mr Khurana on Monday 9 pm.

Mr Khurana the name wandered in her brains. No it can't be maybe she is talking about some other Khurana's.

G: Mr Khurana.

A:Yes Ma'am. He is coming all the way from India to meet you. It's his 10th marriage anniversary on the 11th of July. He want's you to design a dress for his wife.

Alright just remind me it on Monday itself again. Geet hung up.

Geet's Monologue

Gosh Maan why can't I stop thinking about you. Well not every Khurana has to be you. What a irony on 11 July our entire life got upset down. The day you deceived my love and that day this Mr.Khurana got his love. A tear escaped her eyes as she thought back at the worst day of her live, which was supposed to be the best day of her live.

Geet was getting ready for her marriage, within a couple of hours she would be Mrs Khurrana. At least that's what she thought, but destiney had something else for her in plan.

She heard loud noice from downstairs. Then she heard Maan yelling his lungs out asking where she was.

M:GEET GEET WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU!

She ran downstairs as fast as she could.

G:Maan what are you doing here. What happend Maan, is everything okay.Maan gave a sarcastic laugh.

M:Oh it's more than okay Geet it couldn't be better I

Ma'am Ma'am huh Geet came out of her thoughts. She saw Abigail standing near her desk.

G:Yes Abigail. What happend.

A:Are you alright Ma'am

G:Yes I am fine but what are you doing in my cabin.

A: Ma'am I called you but you didn't pick up that's why I came to your cabin. Mr Deas is waiting for you in the conference room.

G:I am coming in just a minute you go. When Abigail left Geet straightend herself. Come on Geet don't let the past distract you. Maan is not worth you thoughts this is something she was telling herself for the last twelve years, but she knew she couldn't stop herself to think about him. She walked out of the door heading to the conference room, determined to concentrate on the deal.

Maneet came back from school. He immediately ran to his room. He opened his drawer and crapped the diary papers.

Diary

The bell rang I walked as fast as I could to Meera.

Meer: And Geet how did it go.

G: Oh Meer I made a complete fool out of my self. It's like I can't think when he is around.

Meer:I didn't think you did that bad. She pointed with her eyes to Maan who was coming our way.

G: Oh no Meer let's get out of her. But it was too late Maan was standing behind us.

M: Hey guys going out for lunch. Mind if I join

Meer:No of cource not Maan that would be great

precap:Geet meets MR. Khurana

That's it for now. I don't know when I will update again am really busy the next couple of weeks. But will try my level best to update as fast as I can.

Thx everyone for you lovely comments the are motivating

Part 4: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2758605&TPN=16

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please update soon! Want to see the meeting of geet and mr khurana

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