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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: music_girl
Ufff...Maaneet makes me insane...that's all i talk to my best buddy at school...

😆Bad Frankie concentrate on school😛

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

I was not planning to update for a long time because my exams are coming up and I just gave you guys a double update. But because Frankie became a spammer here is a update. I won't be updating soon because need to study guys.But because I am starting from tomorrow I may may the chance is really little give another update today.

Part 7

I will never deceive my wife even if we are just living together like friends. I will prove it to you that I have moved on and I am happily married. None of your sick plans will work this time.

He looked at the bracelet from a while.He put it in his wallet at that moment his phone rang. His wife was calling.

M: Hi. How are you.
: Hi Maan I am here missing you and you lied to me.
M: Lied???
:You said you have a important meeting in California but I just figured out from Adi that, that it is not true.
M:ADI Uski toh main
:Maan don't curse Adi and tell me why you lied.
M: Actually it's almost our wedding anniversary. So I came to California to get a special surprise for you.
:Maan you don't need to do that.You know na
M:I know but I just felt like it.
:I hope you are falling for me Maan
M:No I mean we're just friends. I mean
:Don't worry Maan. I mean I just wished you could let you past go. It has already been 10 years Maan.
M: I know and trust my I don't love her anymore.It's just that my heart doesn't beat anymore.
:Maan stop it she not worth it.Come she deceived you it's time to be happy and to move on pleas Maan for my sake.
M: what do you mean.
:I love you. I love you for the last 10 years.
M: WHAT!
:Yes Maan.
Maan heard her crying over the phone.
M:Pleas don't cry I will try I promise.
: Fine I am coming to California tomorrow.
M: What why No I am coming back after a couple of days.
:Maan I want to start a new life with you. And I want to make that start in California. I want to celebrate our 10th annyversy there.
M:but
:No buts Maan I have already booked my ticket. I will be there tomorrow.
M:Alright see you tomorrow. Bye
:Bye see you soon Maan.

Maan hung up.
Maan's monologue
Great just great. Only this was left. I just hope she doesn't come face to face with Geet. I don't want her to feel more sad. I have already give her enough pain.All thanks to you geet. Why the hell can't I just move on. But I promise I will move on now.

Maneet grabbed the diary papers as fast as he good and he started reading.

Dairy
Geet went home.

Evelien:Geet why Emma crying.
G:I...I
Evelien:I what Geet
G:I don't know.
Evelien: Where the hell were you. I told you to stay with Emma all the time didn't I.
G:Yes Evelien mom and I was but
Evelien:But what Geet
G:But she left from the lunch room
Evelien:So why didn't you leave with her huh tell me?!
G:I left immidiatly when I figured out that she was gone. I just went outside for a couple of minuts.
Evelien:Why. When I told you to stay with her. Now look what you have done she is crying.
G:I will go and see what happend.

Geet ran upstairs.

G:Emma what happend. Why are you crying.
E:Leave me alone Geet.
G:Wow Em since when do tough girls cry.

Emma sat up on the bed.

E:You know your right tough girls don't cry gosh I am acting like a wimp. Just like you Geet. While saying that she hit Geet on her arm.
G:Ouch Em
E: That's what I mean such a wimp
G: Anyway why where you crying.
E:Someone stole something from me.
G:😆 Oh my gosh Em I got scared that was why you where crying so the cool Em cry's over such little things😆

Emma Hit Geet on her arm.

E: Zip it Geet it was something really precious. Okey. But don't worry I am going get it back from that thief.
G:😆Okey just tell what got stolen. Your football😆
E:hahah very funny no my footbal player's brother.
G:😆Well lucky him then he is safe now
E:😡Whatever I need to shop
G:You and shopping😆
E:It's importantb okey.
G:Fine Let's go
E:NO I am going alone

Evelien came walking in to the room.
Evelien: No Emma take Geet with yoo. She will be helpfull to carry your bags.
E:Mom can I take to you privatly.

After a while they came back.

Evelien:Geet come and help me in the kitchen. Emma can go shopping a alone.

Evelien left.

G: What did you do Em.😲
E: Nothing. Need to run have fun in the kitchen and you can thank me later that I safed you from babysitting.
G: Thank you my foot I rather go with you then help in the kitchen.
E:Whatever bye Geet.

Back to the present
Maneet closed the dairy he heard footsteps.Geet came running upstairs. She went straight to her room took the dairy out of the closet and burned it.

Maneet monologue
I heard footsteps, so I knew mom was home. When I went to mom's room I saw her burning the dairy. Thank God I copied the diary pages. Meeting Maan really made mom upset. Poor mom but don't worry agent M will fix everything but whatever happens I really have to read out the dairy and fast.

Maneet went to his grabbed a fake history book cover put the diary papers in it.
So Maneet it's homework time😉 he told himself

Geet came to Maneet's room.

G: Maneet what are you doing. She sat next to him.
Maneet closed his so called history book.

M:Nothing Mom just perparing for my history paper.
G: alright sweety. I'il be in my room if your searching. Need to make some skectes.
M:Alright mom you go need to perpare for my test.
G: Alright sweety.
Maneet's monologue
Hey I didn't lie to mom I am really studying history. I am studying mom's history😈.

precap:A date with the past.

Next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2758605/deceived-link-to-thread-2-p-1?pn=34

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

part 5
so its indeed Maan...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

part 6
ye duffer thinks Geet is planning...
so hes indeed married...
who is the wife?

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: spvd
part 6
ye duffer thinks Geet is planning...
so hes indeed married...
who is the wife?

You will find out soon.And how could you call THE MSK duffer😆

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

part 7
so Maan is married to Emma?
and Emma separated Maan and Geet?
cont soon...

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

very interesting update...

who is this wife of Maan who is coming to California to start life with him...😡

Maaneet is very intelligent...hope he does something fast...

the question is if they both love each other so much that they are waiting for each other from 10 yrs then what has happened that they seperated...

waiting for next update...

thanx for pm...

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@music_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

i hate it

stop making me crying now i'm hungry for one more update...hell

i wanna kill maan, his FRIEND-wife loves him and he'll try to recriprocate her feelings...pls put maaneet into action...make him bump into maan or whatever so...and make him say that he doesn't have a father since his birth...blah...blah...i feel like killing maan you know...hey dont tell me emma is at blame! maneet and history was funny