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Posted: 13 years ago

#461

loved how Maan showed Emma that she is nothing for him...

I really doubted that Eveline wants Maan to date Emma that is why she faked concern for Geet in front of her father...

awesome update...

.thanx for pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

hey do reply the previous posts of mine on pg 71

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: music_girl
hey dear
no em and evaline in tgnext door! hehee...

hey have u ever read Chris Higgins books?

No and I have replied on all your other messages. Are they great books.I didn;t saw this one earlier

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Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: mel420

No and I have replied on all your other messages. Are they great books.I didn;t saw this one earlier

noshe writes novels for teens, she lives in scotland i thought maybe u'd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#465

53996663 an interesting game; try it;

u've to say something nice about the person above u!

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: music_girl
53996663 an interesting game; try it;
u've to say something nice about the person above u!

okidoki

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: music_girl
😭

why are you crying

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: music_girl
noshe writes novels for teens, she lives in scotland i thought maybe u'd

which of her novels did you like

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#469

Alright Ananya and Francessa Maneet is back in this update. (Just for you guys)
Part 13
M:Geet come out of your dreamland oops I mean out of Maanland.
G:Huh

Geet blushed.

M:Come on it's time to go home.

Geet and Maan stood up. they started walking out of the graveyard.

G:Maan did you tell Meer, to drop Emma
M:Yes Geet I had text ed her immediately. And she text ed me back that she would do it. After that I followed you.
G: Maan why did you followed me.
M:Because I care about you Geet and I hate to see tears in your eyes.

Geet smiled hearing that.

G:promise me Maan, you will always care for me like that.
M:I promise you Geet.
G:Maan I will go home by myself
M:No Misty I will drop you
G:Maan you haven't had the talk with dad yet😉
M:Hmm fine. Bye Misty.

While Geet was going home she saw Maan secretly following her. She smiled to herself.

Geet's monologue
Yeh maan bhi Na, he is just impossible. Geet looked up to the sky. Mom he's cute na. Suddenly she heard GEET. Before she new it Maan was hugging her.

End of the diary
G:Maneet are you listen, are you okey son.
M:Huh what Mom.
G:Son are you okey. I am calling for so long, but you were not answering. Then I came to your room. And you now what a saw?
M:what mom
G:One moment your crying and the other moment you have a smile on your face.
M:Woh Mom you now history is a weird subject. It awakes all kind of emotions.
G:Acha

Geet sat next the Maneet and tried to grab the history book (Ohoh😕). Maneet put the book next to him and grabbed Geet's hand.

M:Mom why were you calling me, everything okay.
G: Oi Dramebaaz. Where you really reading history, show me that book.
M:Mom if the book says History, then obviously I am ready history.
G:Fine I wanted to now if you had your milk.
M:Yes mom I did
G:Ab both paraai hogi hai Go to bed.
M:But mom let my study. I've got a test, na?
G:I thought you we're free tomorrow.
M:I am, but mom after tomorrow I've got a test.Come on, which mom stops her child to learn.
G:You seem to like this history a lot. About which country is it.
M:Eh

He remembered his teacher saying something about France.

M:France mom.
G:hmm
M:Mom you okay, what are you thinking.
G:Nothing don't study to long. I am going to finish send the sketches to my client.
M:You mean Maan.
G:What.
M:That's his name. He told me his name in the morning, you now mom when a met him.
G:Yeah

Geet walked out of the room feeling low.

Geet's monologue
Gosh Geet you promised your self not to think about him anymore. Come on Geet forget it.

She send Maan the skechtes. Maan called her.

G:Hello mr. Khurana
M:Mrs.Brown. I got your skechtes. Can we meet tomorrow to discuss them. I want everything to be perfect for my wife.
G:Hmm. Sure Mr. Khurana. Why don't you call my secatry to make a apointment.
M:Sure. Bye Mrs.Brown.
G:Bye

Geet hung up, feeling even more low.

Geet's monolgue
How can you be so causal Maan, like you never knew me. Like I meant nothing to you. You now I am happy, that your happily married. And it makes me even happier to now you married on the day we were supposed to marry. Because now I no forgetting you is the right thing to do, I should have done it way back. You will se a entire new Geet in front of you, a Geet you won't be able to reconize. I promise Maan. I promise.

Maneet's monologue
Mom, Maan or should I say dad, seems like a nice person. But if he was just flirting whit you, He will have to face the wrath of Maneet.

Maneet said with attitude. Time to study history again😉 Maneet told himself.

Dairy

Geet's monologue
Yeh maan bhi Na, he is just impossible. Geet looked up to the sky. Mom he's cute na. Suddenly she heard GEET. Before she new it Maan was hugging her.

M:Geet tum thik ho na. Agar tume kuch ho ya ta tho me kya kartha. Dahm it Geet. I love you.
G:Maan I am okey.
M:Geet koi sky ko dehk te we road cross kar ta he kya?
G:Maan wo main
M:tum kya Geet.
G:Sorry Maan I will never do that again.
M:You better never do that again. Come I will drop you home
G:Maan woh dad.
M:Geet pleas I will explain your dad.
G:No I will go pleas Maan.
M:Pleas Geet zid mat karo
G:Hmm fine, but I will tell my dad
M:Fine Ma'am as you wish. Ab chalo.

They walked to Maan's motorcycle.
M: Come on Geet sit behind me .
G:NOO Are you mad what will dad think about me. No Maan not without dad's permisson.
M:Fine let's walk
G:Great idea let's walk. Maan if we are going to walk, it will cost as a hour before we are home. Let's go with the bus.
M: Forget it Geet.,

Maan texted something.

G:Maan who are you texting.
M:You now soon.

After a couple of minutes, Leon arrived with Maan's car.

L:There you go sir.

He handed Maan th keys of his car and left with Maan's motorcycle.

G:Who was that Maan
M:Leon mine driver.
G:You've got a driver. So you are a richy rich he?
M:Well next to my study I am taking care of my company.So yeah I am pretty rich.
G:Oh pleas Maan. I am sure parents do everything.
M:I agree that my dad pays him. But Geet I just openend a company called Khuranna constructions. I want to make it the biggest a company in the world.
G:I hope you succeed Maan.
M:If your wishes are with me. I am sure I will Geet.

Geet smiled.

M:Shall we leave Ma'am.

Maan said opening the door for Geet.

G: Sure let's go.

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#470

cool yaar
but why he got married that too her
and he is not understanding geet state yaar
she is feeling low
come soon with an update which has good result mel
i cant see them like this