It's sort of a heady feeling, to get a chance to have your comment posted right after the chapter in your favourite story! 😃 I've never been first on any story and I still won't race but I now realise why everybody's so happy when they have the first slot reserved for their comment!! 😆
I tried waiting up and dedicate my 1000th post to this special chapter but it was too long a wait, so here I am with my 990th post. 😆
Two scenes, just two scenes is all it took for having us (me, at least) dreaming and blushing and swooning! 😳
I have, so far, felt sympathy towards Pinky for what she's had to face while being so young. But today, she kind of awed me! Her soft, motherly side shown for Geet made me feel respect for her. Then her big heart, easy-going friendly nature and playfulness had me wishing for a friend and confidante like her. The way she readily offered Geet her own dresses, the way she tried helping her choose one of them, the way she didn't want to force her choice upon Geet while shopping for dresses; all of this has just made me hope that she finds her own happiness soon. And with a heart so beautiful, I'm sure she will! 😊
What do I say about the spotlight scene of this chapter? You chose the perfect song for this dance! And who says you don't know about music and dancing? I could see everything the way you described it. I could see them sitting on the grass enjoying their coffee, I could see Geet enjoying the rain and Armaan enjoying the view. 😃 I could see them dancing away on the song which so aptly conveyed their inner feelings. It was like a movie playing in front of my eyes. And I loved what I saw! 😉
Well, I would say this
was a bomb! Never expected the seedha saada sa Armaan making this first move! Not yet at least and definitely not without saying out loud what he felt! 😆 Geet's reaction, I think, is pretty much expected. Lekin I don't want her to back out of the ball or turn a cold shoulder towards Armaan. And I have this feeling that the bomb hasn't yet fully exploded. What's Armaan going to do at the ball? 😉
I just hope you can update the next chapter soon! 😊
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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