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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
dear we want geet to be eduacted as maan
andpls let her make complte her mba like that dear
pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

lovely part dear

u did not send part 4 pm dear
pls
update next one soon
oh when they ll meet again
but one reqest is
pls make geet to study a lot dear
cant see her in state of some unedacuted
we wann her to be like architect or something dear
pls dear
pls dear
waiting for the next part dear


abi dont worry...geet is as brilliant as maan...and she is in one of the best schhols of hoshiarpur...(read part1- its already there mentioned,)well abt degree u ll have to wait and watch...its not sure she ll be doing MBA only😛
even m not sure right now...pls keep giving ur suggestions...and clear ur doubts if any...thanksss a lottt😊

and sry yaar ...kal raat ko bahut late ho gaya tha,,,,so cudnt send pm's...!!!
Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

brilliant update dear..loved it...
precap...ho abb maan kaisa jayega geet ko chodke...
thank u for the update...continue soon


Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

interesting continue soon


Thankuu sooo muchhh:))
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
liked d concept
send me pm 4m next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
its fab maneet friendship precap time to separate please do next soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Depth Of Love-part5


now it was there daily routine for a month...kissing hugging playing talking ...and the days went by like paper in the wind.

It was no more a frenship if they cud understand...but their deep love which made them feel yearning for each other at this tender age.

They were breathing coz they were meeting..

Ahuja Haweli(Morning):

Maan comes to know they ll be leaving in few days and his vacations almost come to an end and malaika had to resume her assignments...

Maan knew he cud not escape now and was gloomy when he met geet the next day...

Geet did everything to see that shine in his eyes which he always had but he was blank today..., maan was not speaking at all ,was just staring her from head to toe...

Here geet was trying her best to break his stance ...blabbing, laughing, hitting, hugging ,kissing but his stare was getting more and more fixed on her behaviour and expressions ...he ll miss her...he dint know how to tell her he is leaving...

Geet: aapko kya hua...kuch sun he nahi rahey ...

Maan:...mmm

Geet: mai kabse bol rahi hu mujhe candy khana haii...

Maan:..hmmm

Geet: mujhe chocolate khana hai

Maan: hmmm

Geet jerked her hands making him leave his hold on her...and smiled

She knew how to bring him back...and that was it...

Maan: geeet...chup chaap yaha betho...bus ...ek word aur nahi...mujhe tumhe dekhna hai ...bus..aaj kuch bhi nahi...

Geet went mute...she did what he said...sat on the bench facing him and he kept looking at her her taking her hands

After sometime...

Maan: geet i am leaving ...

Before he could complete..Geet eyes went red and she started crying...

Geet: nahiii...aap mat jao...

Maan was mature enough to understand its not possible either to stay here or take geet with himself...it was already so hard to prepare himself and here geet was making it difficult for him...but Maan was prepared for the worst...he cud feel geet's pain...

Maan: bilkul nahi rona...mai aaonga yaha har vacations pe...phirr ek din mai tumhe hamesha ke liye yaha se apne sath le jaonga..

Geet: nahii...mujhe abhi jana hai aapke sath...aap kab ja rahey ho...mai maa baba ko bol dungi ki mai aapke sath ja rahi hu...

Maan: kyu ab daarji se darr nhai lag raha jo mere sath chalna hai..

He tried to convince her in other ways...but was not in his right senses and ended up scaring her even more

Geet was petrified hearing darji's name

Geet got up frm the bench and started running away from him...

Maan: geeet ruko...mai tumhe chod ke nahi ja raha hu...

But she was no where to stop...she cried all day...supriya was worried abt her...geet told her maan is leaving and asked can she go with him...

Supriya was stunned hearing such words frm her...she always thot they were childrens and njoyed each others company...but never knew she had this much bonding with maan that she is behaving like this...

Supriya told her she cant leave with maan...else she ll have to leave her maa and baba...so that she understands what actually she was asking for...

But geet was not in her right senses ...she was crying more on supriya's refusal...

Supriya did her best to convince geet...not wanting daarji to know all this...she was hell scared how she ll stop her absurdity...and shouted on her ...

Supriya: geet agar tune ab ye pagalpan band nahi kiya to mai tujhe maan se milne nhai jane dungi...

The moment Geet heard this...

Geet suppressed her cries and and it started coming in hiccups...

Supriya made her sleep and she told sachin everything...for him it was strange and something unbelievable ..they never thot their princess could face something like this ever in her life...that too at this age ...he cudnt see her in this condtion...geet had a very high fever and was sleeping entire day .

Ahuja Haweli:

Here maan's condtion was no less...he kept snapping and hitting things..was feeling weird ...he hated himself for saying those words to geet...her cries were echoing his ears and glance of her sad face was breaking him...as always he took his anger playing football madly .No body knew what maan was going through,coz dadimaa maa was not there,he dint even bother to share with malaika or others. .he went their meeting place in the evening but geet was not their...he came back helpless after waiting for hours...

Malaika had a call from one of the fashion magazine company and they wanted her to be there in delhi asap and her departure from hoshiarpur was preponed all of suddent to next day...now maan decided that if geet will not come tomorrow he'll directly go to her place..

It was his last day..and tomorrow their last meet..he will not leave hoshiarpur in any condition without meeting geet..he cudnt leave giving her pain and tears... he wants to see her smiling. The only thing made him survive now was ..HE WILL COME BACK TO HER...and he wanted to assure her the same...that he ll come back to her v soon.

next morning he took his krishnas idol his naani gave him and all the toys he had...

There geet had a dream that maan is leaving her and she woke up jerking...her body was shiverin...she was feeling very weak...though it was quite early in the morning ..she got up frm bed when all were sleeping...she took ganesh's idol from mandir and reached the garden only to find her maan

She hugged him whimpering please mujhe chod ke mat jaoo...maan felt her all burning...tears rolled down his eyes..

Maan: geeet..bukhar hai...

Geet: mmm

Maan: geet meri baat suno dhyaan sey...pehle rona band karo...

Geet:mmm...

Maan: hamare mom dad shaadi karkey sath rehte hai na...jab hum badey ho jayenge to mai tumse shaadi karunga aur phirr hum bhi mom dad ki tarah saath me rahenge...

Geet was getting things now...

Geet: shaadi karenge..

Maan: haan...lekin abhi hum chotey hai na...to shaadi karne k liye hume bada hona padega...

Geet: mai kab badi ho jaungi??

Maan: geet mai har vacations me tumsey milne aunga...tum jaldi jaldi badi hona theek hai..aur bimar padogi to kaise badogi geet...

Geet(smiling): theek hai...

The moment she smiled maan breath deeply and hugged her tighter and tighter...they exchanged the idols they bought for each other...and maan removed her anklet and kept in his pocket...

Maan said he ll be leaving early so that he ll come soon...both had tears in their eyes..it was extremely painful for them to leave each other today..after heart full of hugging and kissing (if it was possible) they left each other with the promise to meet again.

IT WAS THEIR FIRST SACRIFISE IN LOVE...LIVING SEPARATE!!!

Next: 5 year leap


part6

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Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
awesome update
so now lea of 5 years means maan wuld be 15 and geet 13 lets see what is store for them
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey hi...just came across ur ss nd i must say i loved it

will b waiting desperately 4 da next update...will b glad if u could plz pm this 2 me 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Awesome
I loved it
Cant wait for da leap

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