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Posted: 13 years ago
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ITS FAB MAAN meet the caring people and geet care toward him love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome

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Depth Of Love-Part3

He never knew someone cud feel others pain...even his parents never knew how many times he got wounded while playing in school and came home with dressed knees only dadimaa to notice...But here two angels were not only treating him but were actually concerned and feeling his pain .

When supriya was done with bandage , she moved her hands on his hairs, didn't asked why and how he got hurt ,just smiled at him and asked geet to be with maan so that she can go and inform his guardians. ... When she was abt to ask his name, there servant came inside looking for maan...she asked him whos child he is...servant informed her that he is devki daughter's son...

Supriya was happy to know that devki's daughter is here today...as she knew her history from ppl in hoshiarpur...

She told him that maan got hurt and asked him to look after maan.

As maan saw supriya coming towards them his hands moved towards geet and holded her hands with his hurted palms.

Supriya saw him holding geets hand and smiled at maan and said...

Supriya: u both want to play...

Maan was quiet

Geet: haan maa...mujhe khelna hai ...its very boring outside ...can we play.

Supriya thot for sometime and said : ok...but take care...jyada masti nahi...nahi to phirr sey lag jayegi..theek hai...saying this she went outside leaving their servant behind with maan and geet to look after them.

maan ran upstairs taking Geet to one of the room of haweli away from the servant ..

Inside the room ... Geet was panting

Maan: are you an angel?


Geet: (Panting)oh god u run so fast...kitni thak gayi mai...and made a cute face

maan: oh my delicate darling... par maine to pada hai ki angels can even fly.

geet : paani ...

maan: ok come with me...again held her with wounded hands but she instantly left his grip.

Maan gave her an angry glare...but to his surprise she quickly took his other hand which was ok .

Maan then realized why geet left his hand and he was holding her frm wounded hand all the while.But still it was not paining.

He gave her a glass full of water gaping her with curious eyes

befor she drink she gave her glass full of water to him and asked him to drink first.

he drank from the glass and then gave her leaving half for her.she drank rest of the water,but before she cud finish it.

Maan stopped her ...

he took the glass frm her to again drink whatever was left.

she kept looking him what he was doing ...

Maan: aur chaiye?

Geet: nahi...bus..rubbing her lips from back of her palm...looking ever so sweet...

maan kept gazing her


Geet:you stay here in hoshiarpur

He shook his head ..looking at her without blinking even once..

Geet: what is your name?askingg the much needed and valid question;)

Maan: maan ...and urs..

Geet: geet..

Maan (smiling lil): Geet...

Geet gave even bigger smile and said: Maan

They were standing there glaring each other when dadimaa called maan.

Dadimaa: maan...maaan...maan

now geet cudnt help...she touched his shoulder breaking his gaze frm her

Geet: koi aapko bula raha hai...

Dadimaa reached kitchen when she saw him standing there and immediately took his hands...

Dadimaa: ye kaise lag gayi..kya hua maan...ab kis baat pe gussa aaya aapko...

Maan: kuch nahi hua dadi mujhe...ye dekho meri geet...

Dadimaa: aapki geet...????kaun hai ye...aur ye kaise lagi aapko...

Geet: glass lag gaya haath me dadi...

Dadimaa smiled at her ...she really looked like an angel...she dint knew who she was...but she had an instant liking towards her...she loved her when she called her dadi...

She dragged them outside the kitchen when she saw a lady coming towards her...

Supriya to dadimaa: Namaste,she took her blessings and looked at geet .

Supriya: ab chaley..ho gaya khelna aapka...

Dadimaa:oh to ye aapki bachi hai...badi he pyaari hai..bilkul aap pe he gayi hai..

Supriya: aap maan ki dadi hai na...maan bhi bada he pyara bachcha hai...

Supriya told dadimaa that childrens wanted to play so she left them here..On the other hand maan was again fuming to know geet will be leaving now..he dint wanted her to go away frm him...

while dadi and supriya were busy talkin,maan to geet...


Maan: are u leaving?

Geet: maa ke sath ...

Maan: phirr kab aogi...


geet: pata nahi :(


maan: where do u stay...

Geet was scared telling him where she lives...daarji never allowed her frens to come home to play with her..


geet:we ll meet at the playground tomorrow.


Maan: ok done..i ll be there...


Supriya: maan ab theek hai haath...


Maan: nodded his head ...


dadi thanked supriya for checking maan when she was not there...


She smiled and placed a caring hand on maan's face and took a leave from ahuja mansion with geet...

Maan was standing there looking at Geet till she was away from his eyes...


next: oops maan didnt asked the time of meeting;)


Part4-https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2741747&TPN=5

Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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both the updates were awesome
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congarts on ur new ff ...
intersting ...
love it ...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww dey r too cute
Awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsem meri geet haye r you angel awsem update do next soon can't wait to read more

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey kiddos maan nd geet r so cute!!
waitin 4 more..
nd plz add me 2 ur pm list!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so cute update dear...
loved maan and geet convo..
he addressed her as..meri geet...so cute
loved the update dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb part.i specially liked when the maan called the geet as the angel.now what will the maneet do ??,don't no the time of meet.Waiting for the next part.

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