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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

kutta😡

kamina😡

ullu da pattha😡

jerk😡

ass😡

moron...and the list is endless.😡

Will come back tomorrow with more.😈

P.S. : I will personally come to bang your head dayan if Geet DOES NOT ignore him royally from the next update onward till he falls at her feet.😡

Geet ne usse maaf kiya to main kabhi nahi maaf karungi tujhe...samjhi tum?😎

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Hina khan

@Hina.khanxxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

It was Heart wenching update aashu... I hate ur maan

wait let me finish off cursing maan 1st...
Idoitic creature, anaconda, monster, hippopotamus, leapord, snake, lizard, cockroach, ullu ki dum... Abhi Itne hi yaad hai... Khota kahi ka rula diya geet ko, what does he think of himself... How can he b so rude, Jo b prob thi he cud hav explained geet...

Anyways as per ur note at present naintara & gang r in secundrabad dat mean at my place, can u plz tell me d address, so dat i can meet dem... Hehehe...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

First off thanks for the update. You have a very nice way of creating mystery and intrigue in your story. Each update that I read I want to read more, why they are where they are today, what's all that went on, where does Geet's family fit into it. Storytelling is an art that keeps the reader/listener at attention and you do it very well. Please update soon.

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divareena

@divareena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

aashu lovely update. 👏👏👏

uff maan's has no patience and that is why he gave the wallet straight away as he knew they wanted money. I love how maan noticed how beautiful geet looked waiting for him. 😳

Me loved how he lifted her gungaat and was mesmerised by her beauty until his anger came in once he sees the mangalsutra. I can imagine geet's confusion on maan's reaction.😭😭😭😭

He is so rude to geet especially on her wedding night. All she asked is where he was going and he acted so rude and arrogant to her that it bought tears to her eyes. 😡😡😡

Me not happy at all at the way harsh way he spoke to her. It was so sad when he said that the marriage means nothing to him. He broke her heart and dream.😭😭😭😭😭

One day he will regret the harsh way he spoke to her😡😡😡. Good that geet asked him for a reason for him marrying her. You can feel her pain and me cannot see geet cry. 😭😭😭😭😭

aashu - I want to see maan apologise to geet and we want to see a proper SR next time once maan realises how much he loves geet. 😳😳

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

aashu i loved the update but just wanted to tell u something but decided i wont...

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Ohhh Aashu loved it!

The poor girl...really felt like giving Maan a slap. So like a man to think he is the one inconvienenced and not the woman!😡

Well can't wait to see him melt for Geet and regret his actions.

Love you sauts!

Update soon😆

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

How rude maan left geet. . Its awesome dear. Add me

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

😭😭
but i kind of feel it is too early for geet to expect maan to feel for her...
i kind of like that maan didn't take his right as a husband before he got to know her...
it is a diff mattter that he has no such intetions as 'getting to know her' for now..still...
love maan's principle...😃

Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago

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craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

hey aashu...how are u... awesome update... beautifully writtem!! loved it!!! u are becoming a great writer... hats off to u sweety!!!Waise tune phir geet ko rulaya...

u shpuldnt have done that... mere dil ko bhi tez pahunch gayi seeing her cry that that...

maan baba was very wrong... 1 sec full of desire one sec full of hatred...