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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK



hahaha. . . thx for the warning. . . i will run into my Mr.ZSK's arms 😉

he will make u melt with his intense glare and eyes ...and then the chappal will drop from ur hands ...muahahahaha 🤣



let me think what is the antitoxin of Mr ZSK yes i would take MRS GMSK with me
them ur Mr ZSK glare would have no effect as them GMSK'S effect would be on him🤣
so better watch out
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

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yeah i als love the way he calls sammy
but i m missing bobby
and in tomorrows episode lucifer would take sam to break point😭😭
wonder what would happen to sam this time



I still have to watch todays epi.
He'll be back...dont worry. 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

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wher was dean gone that he was back😕




He was killed in yesterdays epi na...lilith wanted to kill him na...he was in hell then...but today i saw that he is planning to come back.
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Posted: 13 years ago
what are you upto Zee...???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

what are you upto Zee...???


My zaalim mind is taking over 😈. . . drama darling. . . drama.



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK



My zaalim mind is taking over 😈. . . drama darling. . . drama.





I know you are Mrs Zaalim singh khurana 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu



I know you are Mrs Zaalim singh khurana 😡


i know what should i do with myself.
this update turned out to be painful...but much needed.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK



i know what should i do with myself.
this update turned out to be painful...but much needed.




Painful 😲 😭
Nooo...you cant do this.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part: 20

Set me free


Maan still lost in his thoughts and pain, pays for the sari and is about to head out when he hears, " I wish I was rich! Maybe then I would have hot girls over me and locking me into fitting rooms".
Maan instantly freezes in place as his fingers turned into angry ball of fists!
The sales person who had helped out Geet earlier replies, " Tell me about it! Kya maal hai yaar! Such a beautiful face and even more sexy body! Just watching the zipper of her dress slip ever so slowly down her back was turning me on! Damn how I wish I had her under me just one ni. . . ", but before he could even finish his sentence his body got flung all the way across the store into the clothes racks, knocking down everything.
Maan was trembling in rage! He was already burning in his pain and rejection, and now this perverted guy was talking so low of his BROWN EYES!!! Over his dead body!!! He used him as his punching bag, punching and kicking him left, right, and center. But it wasn't enough. Neither did his anger subside nor did his pain. All the salespeople tried to get Maan off him but they weren't enough. He was too strong and deadly in this state. Until he felt a familiar touch and warmth against his hand, did he stop his outburst! He closes his eyes as her mere touch did wonders to his body and slowly diminished the anger flowing through him. The salespeople picked up his bloody and beat up body and took him as far away from Maan as possible.
Maan opens up his eyes to find Geet looking at him with her pain stricken eyes. She instantly throws back Maan's hand that she was holding and walks out of the store. Maan just follows Geet out who was now running.
" Geet . . .wait . . . Geet", Maan called out to her, but she still ran trying to hold back her tears.
However before she knew it she felt a strong grip around her wrist and felt herself twirling back into his hard chest!
" STOP TRYING TO RUN AWAY FROM ME! IT'S TOO LATE FOR THAT NOW!" he said with anger as he made her meet his eyes.
" Kyuuun", Geet screamed holding his collar.
"Kyun kar rah hai ho yeh sab meri saat! KYUN!"
Maan: I should be asking you this question brown eyes! But you have no reason to feel bad for me beating up that cheap filthy dog! He was talking bad about you and. . .
" and what??", Geet interrupted with venom springing from her voice!
Maan: and I couldn't take it DAMN IT!!! I CAN'T TOLERATE SOMEONE SAYING ANYTHING ABOUT YOU!!! OKAY!!! IS THAT WHAT YOU WANTED TO HEAR!!!
Geet: You are not my HUSBAND! So stop trying to act like one!
Maan: NO I AM NOT YOUR HUSBAND!!! I AM MUCH BETTER! But you still love him!!! I see now why your heart still beats for him!!! You have a soft stop for perverted cheap dogs like your husband and that salesperson. That's why instead of thanking me you are fighting with me!
Geet: MAAAN!!!! Don't you dare say something about my husband!!!
Maan: Kyun huh? Kya karogi? Are you going to slap me again? When will you accept the truth that he left you and is most likely in the bed of another woman right now!
Once the words came out, Maan regretted it terribly. He went too far! But the broken pieces of his heart were aching in pain and empowering him causing him to lose control. Geet however refused to believe it, but having Maan throw such a blow right at her face was as if her heart was getting dipped in oil and getting set ablaze!
"Maan" was all she could lowly mutter looking at him with her broken heart.
Geet turns around to leave! Maan grabs her again blurting out, "I am sorry Geet'I didn't mean that'"
She shoved his hand away with the tears that were running down her eyes.
" Leave me! I don't need you'and I don't need him! Samjhe", she said trying to break away from his grip!
" Jhoot! Don't try to hide your pain with those lies. Let's go'"
" I don't want to go anywhere with you. I said leave me!", Maan didn't listen and dragged her by her wrist with him as he dialed a number.
" Bring the limousine over we are outside the plaza", he said before hanging up.
Geet was still struggling against his hold. " CHORO MUJHE!!!" she screamed with glaring eyes and a serious face this time. She was tired of it!
Maan squeezes her wrist harder and crushes her closer to him murmuring, " Nahi chorunga toh. . . ".
" I hate you", she says as she bites his hand and runs away.
She had ENOUGH! All her life everyone has been pushing and dominating over her! Can't they see she is not a doll! She is a human who has feelings! They do whatever they want with her and say whatever they want to her not caring what she thinks or feels about it! NO MORE! She says to herself wiping her tears away.
She looks back to see if Maan was behind her. Just as she was about to breathe a sigh of relief she feels herself getting pushed against the corner building of the alley.

She lets out a shriek of fright except a strong and familiar touch covers her mouth in the nick of time.
It was so dark that she could barely see his face, but she could see his eyes and there was a different burning gleam in them sending chills down her spine. His eyes were spitting fire of pain masked with anger!
As if his mere touch wasn't enough to make her heart flutter, his eyes were piercing through her soul now as well. She pleaded with her eyes to let her go, but he wasn't going to listen to her anymore.
"kab tak tum door jaana ki koshish karogi mujhse . . .Huh!" he says crushing his body against hers and closing any distance that was left between their bodies.
" Till when will you continue to lie to yourself? Jawab doh mujhe" he sternly asks her!
Even if Geet tried she wouldn't be able to answer him as he still had his hand over her mouth!
Geet hasn't realized the extent of pain she has been causing him! Tonight she has released that monster in him and he was hungry for answers!
Why did you make me fall in love with you if all you were going to give me was pain! Huh!!! I had stopped believing in love a long time ago, but who gave you the right to make a place in my heart for yourself and then decide to run away?!?! BOLO Brown eyes!!


"Till this day I have been holding the pieces of my heart that you shattered and been trying to help you, lekin tum . . . " He just winces in pain not even able to finish his sentence.
He just grits his teeth and inches closer to Geet's face hissing, "BOLO! Hai koi jawab tumhari paas?"

" Please tell me how so easily you can say the 3 words, " I HATE YOU". . . Please teach me as well because I am tired of loving you! Teach me brown eyes how you are able to ignore the feelings that are brewing in you but bring the words " I HATE YOU" on to your lips!

Just then he feels something wet against his hand. Seeing her tears on his hand, he takes his hand off her mouth, realizing he was loosing it with his anger and pain again.
Maan: Set me free from the spell of your eyes!
"Just set me free!" he says one last time before turning around and walking away from her!
"Maan" she calls out, but he continued to walk away.
"Maan please wait. . . Maan" but he had already left!
"MAAAN" she screams at the top of her lungs as her legs fail on her and she falls on to her knees against the cold concrete ground. Her shriek of anguish terrorized through the looming darkness of the alley.
Tears sprang from her eyes as she looked up toward the sky. She detested herself so much! She was a monster! A Selfish monster "I am SORRY" she cried.


Geet: I am so sorry Maan.
" I don't hate you . . .I." her voice cracks as she sobbed.
"I . . . don't know what's happening with me! I don't. . . I don't even have the answers to my own questions . . .so how could I possibly answer yours?!?!
I feel so lost. . . so confused! I don't even know what I want anymore! I don't even know what is right anymore! Just please don't leave me like this. . . I don't want to lose you too.
Just then the thought of him leaving her knocked the breathe out of her! She scrambles off her feet and starts to run after him. There was a new restlessness in her heart and it wouldn't find peace until she found him!
"Just set me free" his voice filled with terrorizing pain played back in her head increasing the restlessness in her heart! Geet didn't know what was happening with her all she knew is that she just had to find him. He can't leave her like this! He just can't!


Pre-cap:

Drunk Maan at the beach..uhh ohh...

Previous~ A Game
Next~Soniya dil thoda na hi tha toh bata dil kyun lagaya

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Note
I made a Facebook account and page for my maaneet stores. Hopefully it will be more convenient for all of you. Faster alerts and all :) as well as to better keep in touch with all of u😳

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Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow me first after so many days

i loved the update
it was an emotional update

maan was right to show his anger
on the salesman
but the things told by geet broke all the barriers
of maan
he has been broken beyond repair
what would happen to him now
whatever maan told about dev was true
but geet's heart didnt want to believe it
atlast maan begging her to set him free
the last part of the update made me teary

geet's restlessness is increasing because maan in on the
path to set himself free which means doing something to himself

precap is again sad maan fully broken
and drinking in beach
now get ready to bear some chappals from me
as u made me teary with this update 😭😡
😡😭
now u better give the next part soon😆😆😆

continue soon yaar
love u 🤗

Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago

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