~::Love is Blind::~(Thread:3)~

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome to Thread 3 of:




Love is a devil. There is no evil angel but Love. Love is the most beautiful of dreams and the worst of nightmares." (Shakespeare)

CHARACTER SKETCH


Dev Chopra-27years old

He is a brilliant entrepreneur with a lot of talent. His company had started out as a very small, but starting right after getting out of college, in just two years it evolved into a very well developed company. Except 6 months ago he almost declared bankruptcy because one of his own and trusted partner deceived him and ran away with all the company's money. It was a rough 6 months, which changed the man he was. He started to gamble and even started to drink. He takes advantage of his wife, Geet, which he used to love dearly and the question still remains if he still loves her? But it has been a month where the company is doing much better and is slowly going back up to its original place slowly.





Geet Chopra -24 years old

She fell in love with Dev Chopra in college and after about a year of dating they got married. She was happily married for 1 1/2 years. Her life was like a fairytale the first 18 months of marriage than everything took a different turn. Dev's behavior changed, especially with Geet. For the last 6 months he has been behaving with Geet in such a way as if she is worthless, but nonetheless she just tolerates every pain and believes that everything will get better soon and that Dev is just going through a hard time. Her life revolves around him and only him so she tolerates everything. She is also a stay at home wife.





Maan Singh Khurana-28 years old

MD of Khurana Constructions. His life revolves around his work only! His family consists of only himself and Daadi. His parents had died when he was a kid in a car accident and therefore his Daadi took care of him and the Khurana Empire, until Maan was old enough and finished college and took over. He is a huge buisiness tycoon, with high standards and morals. He was living a normal and quiet life, but everything changes when he sees a particular girl in his dreams for the past month.










Love is a dreadful game that plays with everyone's life. Sometimes one's love for someone is so strong that they can go to any lengths for that person good or bad. Whatever pain they give to you, you blindly take it. Your love for that person is so strong that nothing else matters...nothing else!


Story So Far

Dev and Geet were married and it was a love marriage..They fell in love during college days..both loved each other very much but dev started ignoring her all of sudden when his company got bankrupt.

On other hand, Maan Singh khurana who's life revolved around his family, for the past month has been seeing these pair of brown eyes haunting him ...asking for help. He sees nothing but her veiled face and eyes full of masked pain holding him prisoner...Who was this anjaani girl? WHo was this brown eyes?

He bumps into this girl accidently one night and time stood still as he watched the girl of his dreams walk away. Again her face was covered in a veil only showcasing her hypnotizing eyes. Was he dreaming? Was his brown eyes real?

This brown eyes is none other than Geet. He again encounters her at a business party again face covered with a veil, but at that party he fell in love with her in first sight.Her brown eyes captured his heart the most.

Dev told geet to dance so that she could impress MSk and do bussiness with him.
During the party only, Geet got drunk and started dancing and on the way to home with dev she asked him about her husband and dev got irritated and slapped her and told her to leave his house and geet left the house and in way when she was enjoying the rain maan saw her and recognizes her as his brown eyes and geet in drunken state told maan that he is her husband because she sees love in his eyes for her.

After that maan tried best to get rid of her with his harsh words and after some encounters she started calling him hippo.Then they both went to hotel to take a room and surprisingly only one room was available. Inside, Geet tried to get intimate with maan thinking he was Dev but Maan rejected her and geet got hurt and seeing geet hurt maan clarified that he cannot take advantage of her in this condition and they both slept cuddling with each other.

In the morning when geet saw she is sleeping with some random man,she lost it and slapped maan and then maan came to know that she is married geet then went to dev and there watchman told that dev has told to not allow her and geet thought that it is because of maan.

and so to get an answer she went to maan. Maan Singh Khurana seeing Geet confront him in his office out of rage he also goes and kisses her in front of the whole crowd! She ends up fainting.

Geet regains consciousness and finds out that she misunderstood Maan. She blurts out a sorry to him before running away trying to hide her tears. Maan finds Geet and clears everything between them. He even is willing to go help her and get the answers she deserves to get from dev. But when they go they find out that Dev has left to london for some time. Geet is completely broken.

Maan takes her to his house and is doing all his best to ease her pain and bring a smile onto her face. But Geet has started to feel this unknown attraction toward Maan! Are they feelings developing for maan or is it just an attraction?



Part: 18
"FITTING ROOM NAUGHTINESS"

recap:

He didn't have time to beat this guy black and blue for drooling over his brown eyes back. He just grabbed Geet from the side putting her infront of him, as he covered her back with his body. All Geet could feel was his scent and warmth and instantly she knew it was Maan, but she didn't know why he behaved like that towards her or have time to figure out where they were going.
Before she knew it she got pushed into what looked like a stall, a fitting room to be more exact. All she could due was gasp in shock as he closed the door and started to approach her. In the little space that she had she took two steps with every step he took towards her. Except when she gets backed up to the wall, there was no escape, all she could do his suck her breath as she felt his hands touch her waist.

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Geet instantly grabs his hand and stops it right there . . . along her waist!
She brings the gaze of her eyes up to meet his eyes. "Yeh aap kya kar raha hai" she softly murmurs as she tried to read his intentions from his eyes but instead she was finding herself getting intoxicated and falling prey to the fire she saw in them. It was a different shade of him she never saw before.
Not only does he crush his body more against hers he also huskily whispers back "wahi mujhe karna chahiye". Nothing but chills ran down her spine as his skin made more contact with hers.
" Yeh Aap Kya karna chahiye? Please stop. . .", she said half in trance having no idea where he was taking this conversation.
"Why don't you try and stop me?" he huskily whispers back a couple centimeters away from her lips, their breaths already diffusing into one.
" Yeh ghalat hai. . ." she whispers back, but her eyes had already closed and was waiting in anticipation.
"yeh bahut ghalat hai", he quickly retorts slipping his hand behind her back and tugging her in closer as he ever so slowly reached for the zipper of her dress. He tugged her so abruptly that her lips planted right against his cheek. Maan's skin was now burning from the fire of desire. He had to wince and close his eyes to control the carnal desire that was rushing through him.
He finally gets a hold of himself and slowly zips up the dress as his fingers slightly graze up against her exposed skin and trail up her spine! Geet now finally understanding the reason for the fire in his eyes just sucked in her breathe as these pleasurable shivers traveled down her body chilling her to the bone!
Maan then suddenly felt the zipper get stuck.
Geet shyly murmurs, " This is where it got stuck before as well".
Maan starts to tug on the zipper a little harder but it wouldn't budge. He abruptly turns her around her body getting crushed between the wall and Maan's body. Geet just closes her eyes as the cells of the skin he would touch surrendered in defeat. She could feel his sweet breathe fanning off the side of her neck and down her back. Geet's hand just scrunched up the material of her dress as she tried to surpass the sinful desire that was flowing through her. He bent down and used his teeth to cut the strong piece of thread that was stuck between the zip linings preventing the zipper from going up. The tip of his nose kept on brushing against her back sending jolts of sensuous shocks through out her body. The whole time Geet's fingernails dug inside her skin as she tried to control this sinful temptation that had taken over her senses and mind. There were even some tears welling up in her eyes. She was battling with herself and her heart.
Maan finally rips the thread off and zips her dress. Maan then turns her around and makes her meet his eyes.
" Yeh bahut galat hai. Pata hai kyun?" He says as he adjusts her hair.
" Kyun" Geet says still in trance.
"You don't see me sharing my abs with the cute girls out there. So then what makes you have the right too show your sexy back to that pervert out there!" he says the last bit with venom in his tone.
Geet all of a sudden gets startled with his change in tone and seeing the same fire she saw earlier back in his eyes. But in a way she gets kind of angry herself! It is not like she wanted to wear this stinking dress in the first place or those manhoos heels!!!
" It's not like I wanted to wear this dress in the first place! So show your Dusht Danav self to someone else. Oh and one more thing I WAS DRUNK THAT NIGHT!!! Get over it! You and your abs could have an affair for all I care! hmpph!" she says turning away from him.
Maan: KYAA!!!!
" You heard me!" she says running out of the fitting in her angry stride!
" Ughhh!!! Yeh larki pagal hai aur uski saat mujhe bhi paagal kar degi" Maan says storming out after her.
As Geet walks out of the fitting room her eye falls on the apparel section. There was a sari that caught her particular attention. But she continues moving with one high heel on her foot!
But then her foot twists.
"aaahh!!! God damn these manhoos heels" she takes it out and throws it.

Geet: Oh my god. That feels so much better
"aahhh" she heard a scream.
She looks up and sees she hit the cute guy worker that brought her the shoes on the side of his forehead.
" Babajiii" she whined and went to help the poor guy.
" Lagi to nahi" she said to him with concern all over her face.
Although it did hurt a lot, the cute guy decided to take advantage of a hot woman like her.
Guy worker: Lagi! But it's okay madam you please stay away . . .ahhh ouch!
Geet: kaise baat kar ra hai ho aap. Let me see.
Geet slowly moves his hand away from his forehead and saw that the tip of the high heel actually hit him hard and there was a slight gash and it was bleeding.
" I am so sorry sweetie", she says blowing against his wound.
The other workers and people in the store started to giggle and laugh.
The guy worker actually gulped down in fear.
Geet: Kya hua? Am I hurting you more?
" uuhhh. . . nahi. .Your bodyfriend is very possessive and I must also say very lucky. Look behind you" he says with a wink.
She turns around and sees Maan seething in anger! The way Geet was touching him and even called him sweetie! SHE called that PERVERTED GUY SWEETIE!!!
"Is that why you took him to the fitting r. . ." he says trying to control his smirk.
But Geet just made a dash for him her eyes enlarged with shock and her face burning with embarrassment. How did she not see that before?
She grabs his hand and pulls him to the fitting room stall. ( Zee thinking Ohhh babaji not again😉🤣 )
She locks the fitting room and looks over to Maan who couldn't understand why they were in here again. Not that he didn't like it, but he was going to play the angry man game.
" Move! I don't need to be in here," he says giving a stern look and tries to push her out of the way.
She spreads out her hands and blocks the door.
" You are not going anywhere before I am done with you" she says in a soft tone.
Maan kind of liked what she was saying and in a way taking in another meaning. He slowly walks up to her placing both of his arms around her body!
" Oh yeah and who is going to stop me . . .You?" he says gazing deep inside her eyes and inches away from her lips!

Pre-cap:

fitting room again hayyyee😉

Index
Thread #1 (Parts 1-13)
Thread #2 (Parts 14-17)

Thread 3

Part:18
above

Part:19
A Game

Part:20
Set me free

Part:21
Soniya dil thoda na hi tha toh bata dil kyun lagaya

Part: 22
Love in disguise
Part:23
Close yet so far

Part: 24
Only mine

Part: 25
Let me find peace


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abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yes me first again

loved the update



when i read the sneak peek today

i was confused that


why geet is telling this

and what maan is doing


but now everything is cleared
maan was trying to
hide her sexy back



geet telling "yeh galat hai"
miss geet let me tell u
kuch bhi galat nahi hai
everything is perfect


maan cutting the thread

and in that process his nose
rubbing on geet's back



hayee me dead that moment🤢


geet calling maan dust danav and i
loved the dominating

nature of geet over maan

geet throwing the heels and the
heel hitting the worker



the way geet was taking care of the
worker was making maan furious


and geet calling him sweetie


now geet dragging maan to fitting room


something is there in maan's face which
is making geet embaressed

" Oh yeah and who is going to stop me . . .You?" lines
of maan r awesome

but maan dont show ur attitude
to our sherni
else u would be responsible for the
consequences



precap is lovely
there is more fun in
fitting room




once again an awesome update
loved it

continue soon dear




waitig for next part

Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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comment by sailu

The title itself woowing us
FITTING ROOM NAUGHTINESS
geet ka saying this
"Yeh aap kya kar raha hai"
ore maan ka naughtyness
"wahi mujhe karna chahiye".
geet kya galat hi
sab kuch to abi sahi horaha hi sahi track pakda maan ne
geet calling salesman sweety ore angry maan watchable scene
geet callin maan DD dustdanav
guy worker complaining about maan to geet
" uuhhh. . . nahi. .Your bodyfriend is very possessive and I must also say very lucky. Look behind you" he say with a wink.
geet the sherni taking maan to fitting room
what the plans geet
what r u going to do with maan in room
maan ka fake anger hill
" Move! I don't need to be in here,"
arious
naughty geet back with bang
" You are not going anywhere before I am done with you"
and maan come back with his teasing senses of geet
" Oh yeah and who is going to stop me . . .You?"
precap osum again fitting room mar gaye i am dead
waiting zee for next till then

Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread..
luvd the part a lot...
" It's not like I wanted to wear this dress in the first place! So show your Dusht Danav self to someone else. Oh and one more thing I WAS DRUNK THAT NIGHT!!! Get over it! You and your abs could have an affair for all I care! hmpph!"

only geet can utter dose words..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new thread
awesome update
😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrtaxx for d thread
nd a amazng part maaneet r sooo cute
already waitinggg for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear
congrats 4 new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo for d new thread...
awesooome...fab...superb...loved the upd.
cont.soon...
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🤣kaash the heel would have touched that guy's eye maan kitna kush hota🤣 con soon
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nice part.
pls update soon can't wait to read futher.😳

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