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Part: 21
Soniya dil thodna hi tha toh bata dil kyun laga ya?

recap:

"Just set me free" his voice filled with terrorizing pain played back in her head increasing the restlessness in her heart! Geet didn't know what was happening with her all she knew is that she just had to find him. He can't leave her like this! He just can't!

*******************************************************

He needed to get away. Somewhere far away. Away from the spell of her eyes. He heard her voice calling for him, but he didn't stop.
"MAAN" she shrieked this time. The echo of his name lingered in the air as he disappeared into the dark night.
He immediately backed his body against the brick wall wincing in pain. His heart pleaded for him to STOP and go back.
"Break free Maan. Break free. . ." he whimpered to himself trying to console his broken heart.
It still longed for her, even when all she has given him was PAIN.
Just then the limousine pulled over. The driver comes out and opens the door for him, but he was still lost in his thoughts.
Driver: sir are you ready?
He opens his eyes a little shaken trying to figure out where he was.
"MAAN" her voiced again pierced through his body.
He turns around and sees her running towards him.


"MAAN. . . Maan please wait".
He puts a stone over his heavy heart and turns around immediately pulling out money from his pocket and gives it to the driver.
"Take the taxi and both of you go home", he says right before he gets in the car and speeds away.
"MAAN" she screams again reaching out to him when accidently she trips and comes crashing to the ground.
Driver: Madam!!
" Maan please don't leave me. . . I can't lose you too. I can't. . . "
But he was nowhere near to hear her pleas.
**************************************
He controlled what he could of his overflowing emotions driving like a maniac almost hitting two cars. He was trying to run away from her. From her eyes. . .from her touch. . .yet her thoughts danced right before his eyes.
"MAAN" her voice jolted every cell in his body causing him to hit the brakes as the tires shrieked from the force of the breaks.
He looks around and she wasn't here.

Jaane kyun..har ek raah mein yeh
Nazarein meri..
dhoondti hai tujhe
He throws his jacket and tie off in frustration and busts out of the car.


He felt the sand beneath him, yet it didn't have the calming and soothing effect it once could shoot through his body. He thought distancing himself from her would give some peace of mind, yet his heart was searching for her. Wishing she was here! Even after everything she has put him through! KYUN!
Jaane kyun..har ek raah mein yeh
Nazarein meri..dhoondti hai tujhe
Jo kuch bhi tha kabhi woh
Hai aaj bhi yahan
Hum bhi khade hai yahin par
Bus ek tu hi hai kahan

"AaaHHH" the scorching screams of his heart ripped from his throat! His body was burning from the fire with in. His arms spread out through the air as it shook with the rage pumping through his screeching pains of his heart screaming for answers.
Soniya..dil todhna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya?
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa. . Soniya..
Soniya..dil todhna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya?
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa . . Soniya..
His eyes fall on the bar stand that was a few yards down from his beach house. He Stumbles over there and snaps open a bottle of Champaign and chugs it down. He was going to cheat! He was going to cheat from this pain!
Sur par milon dhoop hai
Chahon na hai kahin raah mein
He can't break free from her. There was no point of running away when his blinded love for her imagined and searched for her in every path.
Tapti raet pe phirte hai?
Hum toh teri hi chaah mein
He throws the empty glass and it shatters to pieces. Just like his hopes. . .Just like his heart. He watches the waves wash it away into the sea.
Kyun mere tute khwaab ko
Khojon ne sahil pe laa diya
Ab toh khuda se hai dua
Mere pyaar ka karde huk adaa
He grabs another bottle and chugs it down as the waves take him in. He was not going to drown in this pain. He didn't want to feel anymore. He was going to cheat from his pain.
"Brown eyes you hear me! Yeh . . .yeh bottle. . . will make me forget you" he says laughing as he circles around the water drinking his pain away while his heart still searched for answers.

Soniya..dil todhna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya?
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa
Soniyaaa. . .
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When everything started to get blurry. . .

Soniya..dil todhna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya?
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa . . .Soniya

when he couldn't feel the pain only the water . . .

Soniya..dil todhna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya?
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa. . . Soniya

when each breathe he took didn't hurt anymore. . .

Soniya..dil todhna hi tha
Toh bata dil kyun lagaya?
Soniya ek vaari aa bhi jaa
Soniyaaa. . .


" Thank you for setting me free Brown eyes", that when he drifted away with a smile only filled with her memories yet he thanked Geet from the bottom of his heart.
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I felt something warm against my lips. So soft and warm, yet demanding! Electrocuting me with feelings of life. I felt tiny hands tugging my shirt and a sensuous music like voice murmuring something to me. Oh how I wished I knew was she was telling me. The softness and warmth returned back to my lips. What was it? I would never wish it to move from my lips ever. That's when I could feel the oxygen getting pumped into me. A sudden surge rushed through my lungs and the next thing I knew water spluttered from my mouth. I wanted to open my eyes and find the warm lips against mine, not the disgusting feeling of the salty water.
My heart was racing as it knew who it was. My eyes finally flutter open and that's when I felt her crush herself against my chest and wrap her arms around me crying. I ran my hands through her hair trying to calm her down.
Maan: Brown eyes. . .
" How could you think of leaving me! How. . .How. . . could you kill yourself", Geet continued to sob.
" I won't let you! Samjhe tum!! I won't let you!" she says inches away from his face.
He had a sweet weak smile on his face. He reached to move the strand of hair blocking her beautiful flawless face, and Geet just closed her eyes as his touch gave butterflies in her stomach.
He pulls her and she comes crashing toward his hard chest. He moves her chin and brings her eyes to face his. Geet's heart starts fluttering it was as if time was standing still.
" I wasn't trying to kill myself, I don't know how the water took me away".
Maan: I thought you hated me brown eyes. Why did you save me?
Geet: I . . . I don't hate you. It was a lie.
So that meant she loved him. Maan was so happy. He just inches closer seal their lips, when Geet flinches away from the proximity.
That hurt Maan to no ends. His anger starts to overflow from him and it was hurting Geet.
Geet: Maan please. Your hurting me.
Maan: Why didn't you leave me to die!!!! Huh!!!
Why are you always doing this to me! Why give me the impression you care and you love me!
He shoves her away and just grabs another bottle of alcohol.
Geet holds back her tears and walks over to him. She was about to take his hand explain it to him, but Maan stops her before she could touch him.
Maan: Don't touch me brown eyes.
" Maan please. You are my friend my only family at the moment. I love you as a friend. Please try to understand. I am married. I love someone else", she says holding his hand.
Maan winces in pain as her touch sent a rush of memories of the night Geet was drunk. The way she hugged him and said she loved him. The pain shot through him like bullets.
He opens his eyes and gazes deep inside her eyes.
I want to hold you and feel that love again
My hands are warm and strong but I can't.
I want to look into your eyes and see that love again
My eyes are open but I can't.
I want to kiss you and feel that love again
My lips are ready but I can't.
I want to smell your fresh fragrance again
My nose is ready but I can't
I want to hear you say you love me again
My ears are alert but I can't.
I can't because your love is blind.
For your eyes are shrouded by the love you have for him who only tears you apart

For your ears can't hear the sound of my voice trying to reach for your heart.

For you refuse to listen to the way your body reacts to the feel of my touch.
I can't take it anymore brown eyes. Set me free from this pain and leave! Leave me just like everyone else. Don't worry I am used to it.
His eyes were brimming with tears. That was like daggers to Geet's heart. She watched that lone tear escape from his eye. To think it was all because of her, her world stop. All she could think about was to take Maan's pain away.
" Shhh", Geet hushed wiping the tear with her very own lips.
"Brown eyes" he moaned losing control.

Before Maan knew it her lips was on his. At first gentle and warm, but then she turned fierce demanding back the pain she had given him. She surrendered herself and kissed like a hungry predator, trying to take the pain away. Maan pushes her against the sand, not hesitating and letting himself cheat the pain once again. He surrendered himself, his pain. He forces her mouth and slips in his tongue as his hands slipped through the back and opened her dori, sliding her kameez down her shoulder. Geet turns maan over and now she was on top. Nothing seemed to matter beyond this moment. No other thought or feeling could get progressed except for the desire flowing hovering over their bodies. Their touch felt like magic stitching the pains of their hearts back together. Geet rips maan's shirt , losing herself in his beauty and the sinful temptation. The sound of the shirt ripping, drove the monster in Maan off the edge of sanity and he couldn't wait any longer and turns Geet over taking her kameez completely off. In a matter of seconds the rest of the barriers between their bodies lay beside in a pile.

He bit the nape of her neck and she moaned in pleasure. He felt her heaving chest as his hands glided ever so gently over her skin, taking it slow. He first caressed her labia and watched her gasp and arch her body around him. Maan took that opportunity to whisper in her ear, " You won't leave ?" he says with questioning eyes.

"never will I leave you" she softly whispers, which then turns into moans and screams of pleasure as Maan slid his fingers deeper in and out.
Her pupils dilating and she could comprehend nothing, but the way Maan made her feel. " I knew you loved me" he says before thrusting his manhood inside her. She dug her fingernails into his scalp as her whole being filled with insatiable pleasure. They loved each other all night under the serenity of the beach and moonlight. She kissed his chest one last time as she snug closer to him, seeing that smile play on his lips, she couldn't have asked for a more right moment.
Pre-cap:
The morning after. . . .




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Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN GEET SAVING HIM POEM WAS AWSEM FINALLY MANEET BECAME ONE



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
VM AND I ALREADY VOTED



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Posted: 13 years ago
wow they make love
what will happen next
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb dear..
His love s really blind..
But what will she say the morning after their beautiful love..
I hope she will not shattter him more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow finally geet surrendedred to his love i dont like maan and geet seperated😉

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