SS'True betrayal' Thread 4 - Page 70

awesome update loved it do update soon

its end on a perfect nore,,, loved it

thank u soo much

everyone for giving comments and liking it luv u all

okay... Annie appi... Me holding my ears 4 being sooo late... Maaf maaf haan...

About part 8...
I luvd d way Maan taught a lesson to Brij... Hahahaha... Brij apni sari ahemgiri bhul gya... Hehehehe... He ws punishd 4 hs ill behaviour... 😃

Den OMG... Geet ne kaise react kia.. Sob sob... I felt rly bad... Though her reaction ws quite justified.. Bt still felt bad 4 my MSK... 😔

Bt den I luvd d way MSK vented out his pain n made her realise dat he is sufferin 4 d mistake he did.. Though it wasnt cmpltly his fault... Bt still thea ws sum fault of his n he ws sufferin 4 dat... I luvd d way he confessed dat he did luv her n wen he said dat it ws his need to do things 4 hr..

His entire scene wer he handed his diary n Geet turned her back 2 him bcz she cudnt see him leave ws beautiful... It ws rly perfectly portrayed...

N den i luvd d lil poem at d end.. It so beautiful expressed wht Maan felt...

Awsum wrk..

Nw part 9..
I luvd d way Geet came across d meaning of evry word he uttered to hr...
Lyk wht he rly meant wen he said.. 'dnt look at me lyk dat.. I'l fall in my own eyes'... Beautiful phrase.. Wich hd such a deep meaning... He actually saw d pain in hr eyes realising he ws d rsn wich jz enhanced his guilt each tym wd each breath...
Hw he followed hr evryday to make sure she reachd hme safely... Lyk he himself needed to protect hr for his satisfaction...
It showed hw deep he ws buried in his guilt...
I felt rly sad 4 him...

Wow... *clap* *clap* *clap* ...

Nw last part..
I luvd it hw Dev's mom told Geet dat she had heard evrythin... N hw she realised.. It ws fate hu betrayed n nt Maan... It wasnt cmpltly his fault..

I luvd Rishi.. D way he said.. pooja is his n aunty is his responsibility 2... N Geet shud go ahead wd hr...

Aah... D old Geet is back.. Yippeee...
Dey went to search 4 Maan.. Bt Maan ni mila...

Oops.. Geet knew pain connectd dem... She hd trust dat Maan wud cum n save her... She jumped into the water from d cliff...
N yipppeee... Maan came to save her... He ws ol while wd hr... He cud neva go away from her... Aww... Ofcourse.. Maan apni Geet ko kuch kaise hone de skta tha...

I luvd d entire encounter of theirs.. N hw Geet expressed herself...
Hw she felt safe n warm in his embrace...
Their 1st kiss.. Wow.. Magical...
D way Geet said... Dat she cud neva cut herself off him.. He hd bcum a part of her...
It ws ol jz sooo beautiful...

I luvd d little little poems in d middle...
Dey wer perfect 4 d situation...

Amazin wrk Annie appi... U totally rock... Its lyk 1 of may fav SS... I totally luv dis 1...
Beautiful.. Soulful.. Rocking.. Mesmerising... Heart-wrenching...
Or kya bolun.. I dnt rmbr enuf words... Hehehehhe...

Luv u Annie appi... ❤️
Congoz 4 a brilliant SS... 😃

beautifully written geet n maan in so much pain painful but beautifully written. o my god every one is giving pain 😭 missing gurti i have tears in my eyes so pls ignore the mistakes

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

TRUE SOULMATES...

Loved it som much...Geet looking so beautfulll and Maan realy handsome...fabulous couple...

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay