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maahi zaidi

@zaidi98

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#381

amaznh update...

n heartbroken n painfull...

both in soo much pain...😭

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kareena32

@kareena32

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#382

the best part of TB dear love it maan is great love him cont soon next part dear thanks for pm

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#383

if u love it most then why r u ending it...why is it a ss nt a ff...there r many more things u can show in this ss...i really think u r ending it hurriedly...

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#384

Anyone home...??????????

Kaha ho sab...????????

Sorry net got dc...

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Beena_g

@Beena_g

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

awesome update..too touchy..n emotional..loved it..hope ur updating last part soon.😛

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#386

I agree with you

Even though all your works are unique ; yet this was one Fantastic 👏 and touched my heart very deeply 👏

Its definitely 1 of the finest works I read here 👏 and would also like to say you do a great job in short stories too 👍🏼

Keep up this short story bit !!! its refreshing , crisp and exciting 👏

Awesome work

👏 👏 👏

Thanks for pm .

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Mahwish

@Parrimuskan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#387

Hats off to u annie...
U r superb darling..
This update was so much emotional and painful...
MAAN have left her alone and GEET couldn't even stop him..
GEET's monolouge was breathtaking yet so painful and heartbreaking...
I am still crying.😭 😭
how can someone bear this much pain...
Maan is bearing pain of remorse and Geet is bearing pain of her loss...

Dnt knw how his remorse will complete her loss...
Aaah but in ur writing everythng is possible sweeti..
I am feeling like Everythng is happening wid myself...

I think i should edit my post in voting thread jst to vote this painful yet beautiful SS..

Plz update last part as soon as possible..

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#388

amazing di
Thanxx for pm

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#389

Awsome prt di..di I didnt get pm 4 prt 7 so I was like y kya leap agaya h...
well written n feelings of both beautifuly descrbd..

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393794

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#390

Originally posted by: Azmatazz
Awesome Annie...

I agree this is one of the best piece of your writings... i wish it was an FF and i could see them fall in love... This reminds me a lot of the movie Tum Bin ... thats one of my fav movies... and that one dialogue from that movie...

Jaanta hoon aapko sahare ki zarurat nahi hai...main toh sirf saath dene aaya hoon

Awesome update dear. Are we getting the last part today too 😳