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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Rupanzal
Fabulous 👏 very intense update
Loved it 😳

thanks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: anshra
hi rabz not my fault re my net not working from morning me sob sob u know i updates from my mom's place in hurry and now back at my palce and then sent u sms how r u?

oh ok koi baat nai...i will spam this slowly slowly... hehehe

me fine yaar...

its cold... and i was wondering... if even in Karachi i m feeling this much cold.. what would i fell if i would be in punjab...

how are winters in Lahore...

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Rituja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

DI... Superb update...!!!!!!!!!

Aaap ne to aaj bahaut rula diya is update se...

Tears r not stopping omly...!!!!!!

I dont knw but this update was sumthing different...!!!!!

It was soo painful yet it touched my soul...

and thats why these tears are flowing...!!!

I dont knw what to say... I m speechless...

Just it was superb update di...

Loved each bit of it... and poems were osum...

Luv ya sooo much...

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

first of all sorry for late comment

all the parts 6,7,8 are awesome
geet's telling him about her life and then maan's confession for being reason of her pain😭😭😭😭😭😭 was brilliantly written anniee.
omggg i have tears in my eyes and now maan confessing his own pain and what he is going through is even more painful😭😭😭😭

u are writing sooo good and superb that is all i can say now. waiting for next part what will happen.
i don't want maan to go away😭😭

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

oh ok koi baat nai...i will spam this slowly slowly... hehehe

me fine yaar...

its cold... and i was wondering... if even in Karachi i m feeling this much cold.. what would i fell if i would be in punjab...

how are winters in Lahore...

today it was better yaar i eman at day time better but u know i am the wrong person to ask lol bcs mujhe ziada sardi lagti hai
😆

i simply cant tolerate slightest

even😆

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RaDMG25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

😭 poor maan that is sooo sad hope geet softens towards him now

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: jasraj123
first of all sorry for late comment

all the parts 6,7,8 are awesome
geet's telling him about her life and then maan's confession for being reason of her pain😭😭😭😭😭😭 was brilliantly written anniee.
omggg i have tears in my eyes and now maan confessing his own pain and what he is going through is even more painful😭😭😭😭

u are writing sooo good and superb that is all i can say now. waiting for next part what will happen.
i don't want maan to go away😭😭

hii

how r u

i was getting worried

about u

i was about to send u pm

how is ekam?

yeah i will be updating

maybe 2 more today

😆

and finish it