*Dark Secrets*Updated part 3/4 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
awesome!
ps do increase the size of the text
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Posted: 13 years ago
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looks intersting ff
update is nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiii guysss!! Thank you all for the likes and comments 😃😃 ok will give a update late night as im trying to brush up the storyline 😃 cant wait to updateee muwahhh.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

maan pushed geet into the bathroom, along with himself. and locked the door. geet stood there astounded. Maan gave her a deathly glare; penetrating into her. maan harshly pulled geet into his embrace and said, "Kyu geet?? why the hell are you behaving like this with me? its been 1 week since our marriage and u haven't uttered a single word. I want an answer now samjhii otherwise u will not leave." maan said with fury. geet face was devoid any emotions , she was trying to pry herself of him, however futile her attempts she could not escape. " what answers do u want maan ?? haan?? After all that u did to me u demand answers??? I hate u maan , i hate your very mere existance, i hate the way your gaze pierces into me, i hate the way your touch feels amongst my skin , beacuse of you i lost everything, I HATE YOU MR MAAN SINGH KHURANNA , MEIN TUMSE NAFRAT KARTI HOON SAMJHEE. " geet screamed. Maan was taken abak , he slightly stumbled, he did not expect Geet to express herself like that. " maine aisa kya kara geet ki tum mujho ko itni bari sazaa deri ho geet ? what has happend in these 5 years that u dont even want to look at ur maans face ? Only two weeks ago we bumped into each other that to my coincidence each time otherwise u would have never contacted me haan geet. your not the same old bubbly geet i knew , your eyes used to be a window to your soul so expressive aur abb they are just plain-blank". maan said with hurt evident in his voice. "Vakt ki saat log badalteh hai. khabi khabi insaan intna mujboor hota hai kyunki halat kitne kharab ho jateh hai." geet said coldly Maan was about to respond when he saw that geet was shaking vigorously, he quickly swooped her up into his arms and lay her on the bed. he quickly reached for her anxiety medication and gave her the tablet. geet refused at first. "GEETTT maan hissed. geet looked away and maan forcefully grabbed her jaw and popped the tablet down her mouth. geet didn't react she just lay their still as a statue on the bed. maan looked away in pain he told her to rest. and left the room. hours after maan had left geet still laid their in the same position. she reminisced the unfortunate mishaps which she did not want to remember, though left with no choice.

Flashback ;(Geet was 16 )(maan was 19)

{Geet and maan were best friends since chilhood. maan always used to help geet , when she had to face the worst of circumstances. Geet has 3 sisters , Raji, Anjali , Rhidimma they were all older than her. Geet and her sisters behaved like sons for the family. they did all the house-hold chores. Geets father went abroad to USA to work he used to earn money and send it to india where it was just geet her sisters and her mother who was very ruthless, and carefree all she used to do with the gross income was shop on herself and never saved anything for the family. geets older sister ridhimma was engaged.}

Geet was lying in her room when her door banged open,

Geet: Maaa kya hua saab khuch teek hai ? aap ko khuch chaiyeh? geet said a little teriffied.

Geets mother: Oiii chup kaar these sweet talks wont work on me samjhiii, yeh loh paise aur jao jake nahari lah neeche se .. i will be out with my friends u make sure that all ur sisiters eat then u eat.

Geet : J.. j..jiii m...aa she stammered

Geet went down and she felt that she was being looked upon with dirty eyes , however she ignored and kept walking she walked into the bazaar, and said " Bhaiii 2 plate nahari deejee yeh , naan ki saath". The man looked down at her and was amused. he said " arehhh vahh itni choti si bachi, aur itna bara order", he scrutinized her up and down with a smirk plastered on his face. As geet was about to reply maan intervened and said " Oiii bhaiii terii himmat kaise hui mere geet seh asie baath karne mein chiii gaavar kahi kha , aglee bhaar aise baat karega nah to teri aakeh noch loonga. Maan gave a deathly glare. He gulped in fear and quickly assembled the order and hurriedly gave it . maan walked out and dragged geet along with him. maan dropped her home.

Maan: GEET agar tumhe vah firse jaane parega toh me tumhare saath jaoonga samjhii, tum nahi jaanti yeh duniya kitni kharaab hai.

Geet: Lekin... geets voice trailed of when maan said;

Maan: lekin vekin khuch nahi geet TUM vaha akeli nahi Jaogi SAMJHII maan said raising a finger.geet nodded her head in fear. abh jao varna daat paregi.

Geet hurriedly ran towards her room. and lay flat on her tummy on the bed. she reminisced about maan, his smile, his over- protectiveness, she always loved it since a kid .. in fact shes been trying to deny the fact for quite a while, however geet was too overwhelmed.. with maans care and every day irrevocably falls for him. She decided she had to confess her feelings for him one day or another so why not now.. She sat day dreaming about him when suddenly...

Geet was jolted out of the past when maan entered the room...

To be continued...

Ok guys hoped u all liked it :-) will try to update every day :-)

Edited by maan.ki.fizz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really good,,, continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting dear but just wanted to ask if its a sad story ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Nice story.. Just came across it.. Continue soon and plz add me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiii guyss !! Ok well i was gonna update yesterday, but i was busy studying . And tonight as its weekend i will post next part later on in the night :D
Edited by maan.ki.fizz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Hiii Guyss!!
im terribly sorry for not updating. i'm pretty messed up due to personal issues :-( and i feel so awfully lost that i dont feel like writing anymore. so from today onwards im discontinuing this 'FF'. im really appologetic :-( I may start the ff agiain in a few weeks time :-)

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