Eternal Return: Ch 9-16 summary; 26/July/2015; pg 101

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Shaheda

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Shaheda

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Mai kiya kiya na bani, teri intezaar mai ooh zalim...tere FF ke karan...FF ke Karan...

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Sookie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Update is still in my head...Sorry!!!

Had terrible migraine yesterday so took a break from internet and lazed around :-)

Will start updating from today again!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: dona86
interesting
loved d updates...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
n this is y i dont make guesses...😳

the boy stabbed his mom...y...under influence??

no more guesses from my side from now on...🤓

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

PS -- maan is taking it personally...attaching himself with the crime n the boy...not saying anymore...*telling myself not to write*😆

Oh...why not! You have made a very valid point :-)

Originally posted by: m.m.k
loved mystery
cant wait for next part

Thanks...

Originally posted by: dreaminvincible
Now wht made maan angry and leave the place
In such a hurry.
Wht is he seeing which we haven't yet

Something got under his skin...perhaps? :-)

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Priya Doss

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

huh...the boy stabbed the mother...

may be its like he got 43 and mom -67...almost the difference is half...

so may be the killer insisted the boy to stab his mom when he stabs her...so may be she got double the amount of cuts😆

gosh...kill me...haan better shoot my brain first😆

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Sookie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: sia221
Woah!!! Boy stabbing his own mother... thats too much to handle.. Sookie...

My quest is.. Maan was on that earlier case involving Father-daughter right??? Was his reaction same as in this one????😕 😕
Coz I feel its not the crime thats disturbing Maan.. but the fact that a Boy n his mother is involved.. thats getting onto him...n it could be all at subconcious level.. as he has no memory of 9 yrs...😕

I know I m dwelling on this Maan-boy psyche overlap.. but then why wld Maan react in such extreme manner????

Of course I can b totally wrong in all this.. n it wld b a simple fact that Maan has reached his limits.. but then theorizing never hurts anyone...😆😆

The older case - will come to that in next two chapters. It could be either his childhood or memory of something else? Yes, simply that Maan has reached his limits...😆 Sometimes the answer is very, very simple but we are all trained to look for most elaborate and dramatic answers, no? But then again, the probability of something dramatic is always high in fiction!! 😊

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu
awesome.

Thanks.

Originally posted by: cue1
He stabbed his own mother??
And Im sure Maan knows something!!
OOOh cant wait for more!!

Maan might see something that no one does...that's a good point of view...

Originally posted by: punam2712
OH GOD
I AM TERRIFIED
EVERY TIME THERE IS A NEW THEORY ABOUT THE MURDERS
NOW THE SON STABBED HIS MOTHER
IT IS TOO GRUESOME

Gruesome, yes. But not a lot, right? Hang in there! Things will start looking better...

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Sookie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
wow totally unexpected turns n twists!!!!!!!

must say its amazing...n pretty interesting..

Thanks a lot..!

Originally posted by: asmina_r
Did d boy killed his mother? Why Maan stormed out of d room? Did it reminded him some thing of his past?
So many questions came into my mind...d part was quite intersting

Whatever happened between the boy and mother will be answered :=)

Originally posted by: Newdime
OMG that was my initial reaction and the blood rushed in my brain as I released my breath that I didn't realized I was holding it. It hurts Sookie the head.
Woman what are you trying here? You gonna kill me with this.

Maan sure is putting fingers on his uneasiness as the details are enclosed. He better have an explanation on this abrupt reaction. I think these case is bringing his lost memories back. I'm so scared from my guts.

So whats next?

My friends comments...

such strange twists this tale takes us on...

wonder if this has to do with Maan's mother not being in the picture

Lori P

Are they really his memories? :-) I am sure he will give explanation in coming parts...he owes it to his team now, doesn't he?

@Lori: Thanks for reading...hmm...that's interesting :-)

Originally posted by: seemamary
Interesting, continue soon.

Thanks...I will...

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Sookie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: ninand
My god. The image gets more grotesque with every update. Poor Maan. You know Sooks, chuck what I said about '.. romance or no romance'.. it was just an emotional response ;)

ahem-ahem.. I , uhm, would really like a little more Maan -Geet, Maan Geet here.. oh c'mon, its not like you'll have to work much on that anyway! In THVWU I didn't mind , since there was no need nor scope for it, but here, the romance practically writes itself😎
There really is something in the way the two are.. Sooks , you OWE us it. piileeez. :)

and yeh , more on the update😆, after i get to process it. :)

Since the romance is already writing in itself, I don't have to do anything else now, do I? So, you can squint a little which will make you see the hawt rommmaaanceee :-)

Where where where??? Still processing??!! 😆

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi
awesome story dear...
plz add me as ur buddy n do PM me...

Thanks you... already done so...

Originally posted by: soni4eva
awsum updates luv all da twists
gettin relii intrestin plzz update soon x

Thank you very much...I will do so...

Originally posted by: jazzerette
Awesome updates!

Thanks...

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

sheesh, heartless.

what can I say, I am clueless where murder mysteries are concerned😆(also a grade A scaredy cat😎 ).. my imagination cart is stuck in a rut and the impressively lazy mule that I am , my efforts are getting at nowhere😆.. so yeh, one of those .. ;D..

Only Maan's reaction was perfectly understandable, that at the deep sub-conscious level he would reject such a gruesome theory... something's trying to let out itself in Maan, only its intensity he can feel, and that leaves him confused but reacting strongly.

I am so so eager to read what comes next.

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Sookie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: spvd
part 9
OMG my head is swirling...
cont soon dear...

:-) I will...soon...

Originally posted by: spvd
part 8
damn i missed this part...
oh seems like Maan and Geet do share something...
cont soon...

They do? Well...they are good friends...does that help? :-)

Originally posted by: riya27
huh...the boy stabbed the mother...
may be its like he got 43 and mom -67...almost the difference is half...
so may be the killer insisted the boy to stab his mom when he stabs her...so may be she got double the amount of cuts😆
gosh...kill me...haan better shoot my brain first😆

Well this is a very good theory :-)